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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 23)

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Hey guyz...m bck...sorry m late...cuz of my exams, but finally i've updated it...btw thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments,,,means a lot...herez part 8...Enjoy...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 8...

~Recap~

Everyone ran towards JeeMan and saw Maanvi crying while caressing Jeevika's head, who was lying lifelessly on the floor, her head placed on Maanvi's lap.


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Viren came running towards Maanvi, along with Viraat.

Viren: (concerned/worriedly) Jeevika...Maanvi kya, kya hua Jeevika ko?
Maanvi: (sobbing) Ji..Jiju,,Viraat, dekho na pata nahi Di ko kya ho gaya hai, woh aankhe nahi khol rahi..
Viraat: Maanvi relax, kuch nahi hoga Bhabhi ko...Bhai aap Bhabhi ko andar leke chaliye main doctor ko phone karta hun.
Viren: Haan,,Viraat, jaldi call kar.
Swamini Bua: Viren jaldi uthao isse.

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Doctor was examining Jeevika, who was fully conscious by now. Maanvi and Vanshika Maa were sitting on the bed beside Jeevika, while everyone else were standing around the bed.

Maanvi: (worriedly) Kya hua hai meri Di ko doctor?

Jeevika: Mannu, mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, main bilkul thik hun.
Maanvi: Aap chup rahiye, Doctor bataiye na, kya hua hai meri Di ko?
Doctor: (smiles) Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai, aapki Bahen bilkul thik hai.
Swamini Bua: Lekin Doctor yeh aise achanak behosh..
Doctor: Woh isliye Swamini ji, kyun ki aapki Bahu Maa bane wali hai, Congratulations, she's pregnant.
Vanshika Maa: (happily/surprised) Kya?
Viren: (smiles widely) Doctor aap sach keh rahi hai, Jeevika Maa...
Doctor: Yes Mr. Viren...
Viren: Thank you so much Doctor...main...I'm so happy...

Viren was on cloud nine, Jeevika was blushing like anything, everyone was congratulating VirIka, while Maanvi sat there awestruck. Jeevika shook Maanvi by her shoulder, when she saw her sitting there without making any movements.

Jeevika: Mannu?
Maanvi: Huh...Di...
Jeevika: Kya hua? Apni Di ko congratulate nahi karegi?
Maanvi: Di...aap?? Jiju?? Aap dono...(hugs her Di tightly) I'm so happy for you Di, aap Maa bane wali ho,,,aur Jiju...(breaks the hug/turns to face Viren) Aur Jiju aap...(walks over to him) Aap Papa...(hugs him tightly) Congratulation Jiju.
Viren: Thank You Sali Saiba, waise aap kya banegi (looking at Viraat/smriks) zara hum bhi toh jaane.
Maanvi: Main? (smiles widely) Main banungi Chutku ki (spreads her arms out/ shouts) One And Only Mannu Maasi.
Viraat: (smiles mischeviously) Maasi nahi, Chachi, Mannu Chachi.
Maanvi: Haww..Nahi, Maasi, Mannu Maasi.
Viraat: Arey aise kaise? Jab main Chacha banunga toh tum Maasi hi banogi na Maanvi Ji.
Maanvi: Chachi banegi meri juti, main toh apne Chutku ki Maasi hi banugi.
Viraat: Chachi. Aur tumhe kaise pata ki Chutku hoga Chuthki nahi?
Maanvi: Mujhe pata hai, Chutku hoga, mere peace loving Jiju ki tarah.
Viraat: Chutki hogi, meri pyaari si Bhabhi ki tarah.
Maanvi: Chutku hoga Chep.
Viraat: Chutki hogi Bandariya.
Maanvi: Chutku.
Viraat: Chutki.
Maanvi: Chutku, Chutku, Chutku
Viraat: Chutki, Chutki, Chutki.
Viren: Arey Bas Karo, parents hum banne jaa rahe hai aur ladh tum dono rahe ho. Hadh hai Yaar.

Everyone started laughing, including Swamini Bua.

Swamini Bua: Acha, ab hume chalna chahiye, (smiles) Jeevika, tum aram karo, aur kisi bhi chiz ki zarurat ho toh hume bula lena. Thik hai?
Jeevika: (smiles) Ji bua ji.

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Dadaji: Doctor, aap ka bahut bahut shukriya.
Doctor: Its my duty Mr. Vadhera...woh mujhe aap sabse ek baat kehni hai, main Jeevika ke samne yeh sab nahi kehna chahti thi kyun ki main nahi chahti ki unke pregnancy mein koi bhi complications ho.
Vanshika Maa: Kya baat hai Doctor? Jeevika thik toh hai na, aur uska bacha?
Doctor: Dekhiye main bas itna kehna chahti hun ki aap sabko Jeevika ko kisi bhi tarah ki stress se dur rakhna hoga. Aap sab jante hai abhi thode hi din pehle unka accident hua tha. Woh abhi bhi kafi weak hai, thoda sa bhi stress unke liye bahut khatarnak sabit ho sakhta hai, jitna ho sakhe unhe stress se dur rakhiye, choti si choti baat unke liye khatra ban sakhta hai.

Maanvi was feeling guilty, she was just about to tell her Di about her dieases. Something that would've risked her life along with a life that was inside her. Tears filled her eyes as she thought about what she was going to do, which didn't go unnoticed by Viraat.

Viren: Aap fikar mat kijiye Doctor, hum sab iss baat ka pura dhiyaan rakhein gein.
Doctor: Thank You Mr. Viren. Ab mujhe chalna chahiye, mujhe aur bhi kahin jaana hai. Congratulation to all you once again. Main chalti hun.

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~Maanvi's Room~

Maanvi was sitting on her bed looking at a picture of her and her Di, tears rolling down her cheeks. She quickly wiped her tears and turned her face towards the door when she heard someone closing the door. Viraat entered her room and locked the door behind him. She gave him a questioning glare as he walked towards her.

Maanvi: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Aur tumne dawaza kyun lock kiya hua hai Viraat?
Viraat: (angerily) Kya kaha tumne Bhabhi se?

Maanvi: (stood up from the bed/turns her face away from him) Maine kuch...kuch nahi kaha D..Di se..
Viraat: Kaha nahi par kehne toh wali thi na.
Maanvi: Main kuch nahi kehne wali thi Viraat. Tum please chale jao yahan se.
Viraat: (walked towards her/angerily) Mujhe dekh kar baat karo Maanvi.
Maanvi: (turned around at his outburst/tears form in her eyes) Vi..Viraat,,tum..

Viraat closed his eyes in order to control his anger as he saw tears in her eyes.

Viraat: I'm..I'm sorry Maanvi, woh main...main bas...
Maanvi: Nahi Viraat...I'm sorry, main...main janti hun tum Di se bahut pyaar karte ho isiliye tum gussa ho rahe ho, main Di se sab batane jaa rahi thi, utne mein hi Di...aaj meri wajha se Di ki halat bigadh sakhti thi, main kitni buri hun na Viraat, maine ek baar bhi Di ki khushi ke baare mein nahi socha, aur unse woh sab kehne chali gayi..main bahut buri hun na Viraat..
Viraat: (hands on her cheeks) Nahi Maanvi, tum bilkul bhi buri nahi ho, I'm sorry main bina kuch soche samjhe tumhare upar aise hi chillane lag gaya, mujhe samjhna chahiye tha ki tum aapni Di ko kabhi dard mein nahi dekh sakhti, I'm sorry Maanvi.
Maanvi: Tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho? Galti toh main karne jaa rahi thi na.

Viraat: Haan, lekin pati patni mein se galti chahiye kisi ki bhi ho par maafi toh dono ko hi mangni padhti hai na.

Maanvi: (wiping her tears) Main tumhari patni bani nahi hun abhi Chep.
Viraat: Bani nahi toh kya, bane toh wali ho na would be...

Maanvi: (hits on his chest) Sudhroge nahi na tum kabhi.
Viraat: Kya karun, abhi tak koi sudharne wali aayi nahi na meri zindagi mein.
Maanvi: Tumhe toh main hi sudharungi Chep.
Viraat: Good, waise bhi yeh tumhari hi duty hai...(shouts out loud near her ears and runs away) Bandariya...
Maanvi: (cover her ears) Urghhh...Chep...

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~VirIka's Room~

Jeevika and Viren were sitting on their bed, Viren's head on Jeevika's lap.

Viren: So Mrs. Vadhera, koi aane wali hai.
Jeevika: Aane wali hai? Nahi toh, apne suna nahi aapki Saali ne kya kaha tha, aane wala hai, wali nahi.
Viren: Ji nahi, main tumhare Devar ke saath hun, aane wali hai, meri choti si Jeevika.
Jeevika: Nahi Viren ji, main keh rahi hun na, woh chota sa Viren ji hoga,
Viren: Dekho Jeevika, mujhe sab pata hai, junior Jeevika hi hogi.
Jeevika: Viren ji, main bata rahi hun ki junior Viren ji hi hoga, Maa hun main usski mujhe pata hai.
Viren: Acha ji? Toh main bhi toh baap hun na, mujhe bhi pata hai Junior Jeevika hogi.
Jeevika: Viren ji aap...
VirMan: Wah wah wah...
Maanvi: Kamal hai Di, Jiju, jab hum ladh rahe the tab humara muh band karwa diya tha, ab yahan kya ho raha hai?
Viraat: Not fair huh, Bhai, Bhabhi..
Viren: Chup kar Chep...
Viraat: (jaw dropped) Haw...(to Maanvi) Dekha, dekha tumne?
Maanvi:
(controlling her laughter) Nahi Viraat, maine kuch nahi dekha.
Viraat: Haan, dekhega kaise, aankhe thodi hai tumhare paas.
Maanvi: (sarcastically) Ha Ha Ha...Very funny Viraat.
Jeevika: Waise tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho, kal sagai hai na, soye kyun nahi abhi tak?
Viren: Haan haan, jao so jao.
Maanvi: Jiju relax, chill...chale jayein gein hum.
Jeevika: Arey haan, Mannu main bhul gayi thi, tujhe kuch kehna tha na mujhse, kya baat thi?

Viraat and Maanvi exchanged glance.

Maanvi: Nahi Di, woh...bas aise hi, aap fikar mat karo.
Jeevika: Aise kaise Mannu, bata na, kya baat hai, tu kuch keh rahi thi ki tujhe kuch...bata na.
Viraat: Bhabhi, aap bhi kis Bandariya ki baat sune mein interest dikha rahi ho, yeh toh kuch bhi keh kar bhul jaati hai, aap kyun tension le rahi ho, aap bas humari Chutki ka dhiyaan rakho aur khud ka bhi...ok?
Jeevika: (smiles) Ok Devar ji, aapka hukum saraankho par.
Maanvi: Sahi hai, par Chutku hoga Chep.
Viraat: Tum fir shuru ho gayi...? Chepni, chal ab ya yahin ghar basana hai aapko?
Maanvi: Haan toh chalo na, maine kaha roka hai. (walks towards Jeevika/kisses her left cheek) Good Night Di, Good night Jiju, and (kisses on Jeevika's right cheek) Good night Chutku.
Viren: (smiles) Good Night.
Jeevika: (smiles) Good Night Mannu, Viraat and Mannu Maasi.
Viraat: Bhabhi, Maasi nahi Chachi (winks/smiles)...Good night.
Maanvi: Chep, chalo tum batati hun tumhe main Chachi ya Maasi.
Viraat: (seriously) Arey nahi Maanvi, tum na hi Maasi ho na Chachi ho, tum toh meri hone wali (shouts near her ears, yet again and runs for his life) Patni ho..
Maanvi: (annoyedly) Chep...(runs after him)...

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Maanvi opened her eyes as sun beams through the window, disturbing her sleep.

Maanvi: Uff..itni jaldi subha ho gayi. (pulls the duvet over her head) Chal Mannu, uth jaa, aaj teri engagement hai usse Chep ke saath.

Maanvi stretched her arms out of her blanket, head still covered. She turned to her left, took off the duvet from her head, and...

Maanvi: (screams) AAAHHH...(stammers) Tum...tu..tum, yaa..yahan kya..kya kar rahe ho?

It was Viraat, sitting beside her bed with a huge smile on his face.

Viraat: Good Morning Bandariya, Uth gayi aap?
Maanvi: Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Chep? Woh bhi itni subha?
Viraat: Main, main bas tumhe uthane aaya tha.
Maanvi: Toh uthaya kyun nahi? Aur tum mujhe aise ghoor kyun rahe the?
Viraat: (smiles/lost) Tum itne pyaar se so rahi thi, uthane ka mann hi nahi kiya.
Maanvi: Huh? Kya?
Viraat: Um..kuch..kuch nahi...tum jaldi fresh ho jao, aaj humari engagement hai.
Maanvi: Pata hai, jao tum yahan se, main aa jaungi.
Viraat: (walking backwards towards the door) Okk, 10 min mein neeche aa jana, warna no breakfast. (left)
Maanvi: Subhe Subhe Chep ka chehra dekh liya, pata nahi aaj mera din kaisa jaayega.

Maanvi got up and went towards her bathroom.

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After having their breakfast, everyone was busy in their work. Viren, Viraat, Madhan Chachu and Inder Chachu setting the stage with the help of Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi. Jeevika and Maanvi were strictly forbidden from helping anyone so they were just sitting down with a glass of juice in their hands, giving Viren and Viraat evil glares. Dabbu and Shlok were busy playing around with flowers that were supposed to be used in the decorations of the hall. Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Beeji, and Badi Beeji were just looking around and giving them suggestions.

Jeevika: Aye Dabbu, kya kar raha hai, woh khelne ke liye nahi di gayi hai, laa mujhe de.

Jeevika was about to get up when Viren appeared infront of her.

Viren: KYA? Mana kiya na uthne ko. Tum yahin baitho Maanvi ke saath, hum hai na dekh lengein. (to Dabbu and Shlok) Kya kar rahe ho tum dono yaar, maine tum dono ko wahan lagane ke liye diya tha.
Dabbu: Sorry Jiju, hum abhi karte hai, chal Shlok.

Everyone was just so busy in their work, they didn't even notice how irritated both the sisters were hearing them shouting at each other.

Kadambari Chachi: Arey Pinky ji, yeh dekhiye kitna khoobsurat lights hai na, isse hum waha laga dete hai.
Pinky Chachi: Haye rabba, main bhi yahi kehne wali thi.
Madan Chachu: Inder ji, Maanvi aur Viraat ka naam hum yahan laga dete hai, achi lagegi na.
Inder Chachu: Ji.
Viraat: Arey Dabbe, kya kar raha hai, wahan phoolon ko mat laga, kahin aur laga.
Shlok: (handing Viren his phone, who was standing on the ladder) Yeh lo Viren Bhaiya, aapka phone.

Viren looked down towards Shlok and almost lost his balance.

Beeji, Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Badi Beeji: Arey Sambhal ke.
Kadambari Chachi: Hayni Shloku, baad mein de dena usse, pehle apna kaam kar.
Viraat: Arey Chachu aapne caters se baat kar li hai na?
Inder Chachu: Arey Viraat, fikar mat kar Chandigarh ki best caters ko bulwaya hai maine.
Dabbu: Arey wah, tab toh bada maza aayega na Shlok.
Shlok: Haan Dabbu.
Dabbu: Inder Chachu, mithaiyan(sweets)?
Inder Chachu: Arey Dabbu Beta, woh toh world ki best mithai hongi.
Badi Beeji: Oye Dabbu, chal apna kaam kar, jab dekho khane ke piche padha rehta hai.
Pinky Chachi: Kya Badi Beeji aap bhi na, dekho na mera baccha kitna patla ho gaya hai.
Badi Beeji: Chal Chal...kaam kar apna...patla ho gaya hai, agar yeh patla hai toh main toh size zero ki hun.

Everyone besides JeeMan laughed.

Maanvi: God Di, yeh log itna chila kyun rahe hai.

Jeevika: Sach mein, yeh log decorations kar rahe hai ya jang(war) ki taiyari kar rahe hai.
Maanvi: Main toh pagal hone wali hun inki baatein sun kar.
Jeevika: Chal chilaate hai.
Maanvi: (shocked/confused) KYA?
Jeevika: Chilate hai, tabhi yeh shant honge.
Maanvi: Di, you kidding me right?
Jeevika: No I'm serious Mannu.
Maanvi: Di aap kab se bacchi ban gayi?
Jeevika: Jabse (hand on her stomach) Yeh aaya hai.
Maanvi: Wah Di, Chutku ko blame kar rahi ho?
Jeevika: Chal na Mannu, warna yeh sab sach mein hume pagal kar dein gein.
Maanvi: (smiles) Okk..1...2...3...
JeeMan: (screaming at the top of their lungs) AAAHHH...

Everyone stopped in their tracks, they ran towards JeeMan with a confused/concerned look on their face.

Viren: (concerned) Jeevika Maanvi...Kya hua? Jeevika tum thik toh ho na?
Viraat: (concerned) Maanvi, kya hua? Tum thik ho?

JeeMan couldn't control their laughter, they burst out laughing as they saw the look on everyones face.

Everyone(except JeeMan): (confused) KYA HUA?



Okk...dats it guyz..hope u lykd it...i knw deres not much of VirMan, i will try 2 add more of em in da nxt update, till den, plz comment and hit lyk if u lykd it...Thnk U..Luv Aartii...

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awesome update yr !!!


lovely and nice .

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Jeevika pregnant that's so good... but feeling bad for Manvi...
Nice update and do continue soon Smile

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Just read the whole story and it is awesome...plz cont ASAP...

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Loved the update.Loved Virat more here.Jeevika and MAnvi at the end were funny.LOLLOLLOL.Thanks for the pm yaarSmile

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Omg amazing!! Plz continue soon n pm me!!

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awesome update

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