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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 14)

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shona_virman

It was superb:) i'm so much missing da virman nok jhok n i got it here... I cud Actualy visualise da whole thing... Poor virika... Seriously virman k chakkar mein virika ka kya hoga?? Lol i was having a huge smile plastered on my face while reading it was tat gud... Thank u so much for updating n for da pm... Hope u cont soon:)
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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Hey guyz herez part 5...i hope u'll lyk it...btw thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments...Smile Enjoy...

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VirMaan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 5...

~Recap~

Viren: Arey Par Viraat...Hey Bhagwan, kis baat ki dushmani nikal rahe ho, yahan main problem solve karne mein laga hun aur aap ho ki badhaye jaa rahe ho, ek taraf Jeevika toh dusri taraf Viraat, dono ke biche mein mujhe hi pisna tha kya? Pata nahi VirMan ke chakar mein VirIka ka kya hoga.

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Everyone entered the main hall that was decorated beautifully with lots of pink and white  flowers, candles, roses, lights, etc.

Dadaji: Arey wah, taiyariyan toh badi jaldi ho gayi, bahut achi sajawat(decoration) ki hai sabne.
Kadambari Chachi: Haaye ni Bauji, hum sabne itni mehnat jo ki hai, acha toh hoga hi.
Vanshika Maa: Haan Kadambari, sach mein bahut acha decoration hua hai, tum sabki mehnat kaafi rang layi hai.
Viren: Maa, decoration toh ache se hona hi tha, dulhe raja ne khud apne haatho se apni dulhan ke liye sajaya jo hai.

Maanvi look at Viraat who was smiling at her and  rolled her eyes at him.

Dadaji: (to Beeji)Bahenji, humne Pandit ji se baat ki hai, unhone kal ka mahurat shubh bataya tha roka ke liye, aapko isme koi aapatti(problem) toh nahi hai na?
Badi Beeji: Arey aapatti kaisi, main toh kehti hun, kal kyun aaj hi kar dete hai in dono ka roka,,,(looking at Viraat) Kyun Viraat?

Viraat looked at Badi Beeji and blushes.

Maanvi:(to herself/confused) Yeh itna sharma kyun raha hai?
Badi Beeji: Yeh dekho, yeh toh dulhan ki tarah sharma raha hai, (to Maanvi) Aye kahin tune apna dulhan wala roll Viraat ko toh nahi de diya na?
Maanvi: Arey nahi Badi Beeji, agar main apna roll isse de dungi toh mujhe aapke yeh sone ke kangan kaise miley gein, sorry huh, par main yeh kangan kisi aur ke saath share nahi kar sakhti, aapko toh yeh kangan mujhe hi dene honge haan.
Badi Beeji: Chup kar chudail, humesha mere kangan ke piche padi rehti hai.

Everyone laughed watching Maanvi and Badi Beeji's fight over the kangan.

Beeji: Bhaisab, hume koi aapatti nahi hai, hum iss roke ke liye taiyar hai.
Vanshika Maa: Toh thik hai Beeji, hum kal hi shagun ke saath aapse aapki Maanvi ko mang kar, usse apna banale gein.

Everyone went back to their work, leaving VirIka alone.

Viren: (to himself/looking at Jeevika) Kaise baat karun?
Jeevika: (to herself/looking at Viren) Kya kahun?
Viren: (to himself) Tumhi kuch keh do na Jeevika.
Jeevika: (to herself) Aap hi kuch kahiye na Viren ji.

VirMan walked towards VirIka, when they saw them trying to talk to each other.

VirIka: Um..woh...
Maanvi: Dii, aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Viraat: Aur Bhai aap bhi yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Jeevika: Mannu woh..
Maanvi: Di aapko pata hai na...(looking at Viraat)Humare beech mein chattis(36) ka akda hai?
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Aap kaise bhul sakhte hai, hume yeh challenge kisi bhi haal mein jitna hi hoga.
Viren: Viraat main...
Maanvi: Chale Di, kitne kaam baki hai abhi?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, chalo yahan se. (dragged Viren out of there)
Maanvi: Chep Kahin Ka.

Viraat turned around and smiled at her as if he heard her.

Maanvi: (to herself) Maine itni zor se kaha kya, jo usne sunliya?
Jeevika: Mannu, kahan kho gayi hai tu?
Maanvi: Kuch nahi Di, chalo hum bhi chalein.

~Vadhera Boys~

Viren: Yaar Viraat yeh kya kar raha hai tu?
Viraat: (confused)Maine kya kiya Bhai?
Viren: Kya kiya nahi kya kar raha hai.
Viraat: OK,,,main kya kar raha hun Bhai?
Viren: Tujhe samjhana aur ek panch(5) saal ke bacche ko samjhana ek hi jaisa hai.
Viraat: Maine aisa kya kar diya jo aap aisa keh rahe ho?
Viren:  Main yahan bahana dhudh raha hun Jeevika se baat karne ke liye, aur tu hai ki mujhe usse dur kar raha hai, yaar kaisa Bhai hai tu? Aapne aur Maanvi ke chakkar mein tu mujhe aur Jeevika ko bhul gaya pata hai tujhe?
Viraat: I'm so sorry Bhai, mujhe laga ki aap bhi yeh challenge jeetna chahte the isiliye.
Viren: Jeetna toh chahta tha, par tu toh janta hai na, main bhi Jeevika se bina baat kiye nahi reh sakhta.
Viraat: (hands around Viren's shoulder)Waise sach kahun toh mujhe bhi Maanvi se baat kare bina nahi raha jaata, (lost in his own world) usski woh baatein, woh gusse mein kuch bhi bol dena, i just love it.
Viren: Yaar tu toh mujhse bhi aagey nikla, tujhe toh sirf ek hi ghanta hua hai Maanvi se baat kiye huye, thoda control kar mere Bhai.
Viraat: (smiles)Bhai, Maanvi ek aisi chiz hai jiske samne sab apne control kho dete hai, toh main kya chiz hun?
Viren: (smiles) Kuch toh baat hai meri Saali Saiba mein, warna mera Bhai itna deewana na hota uska.
Viraat: Woh toh hai hi. (smiles widely) Toh chale unse baat karne?
Viren: (smirks) Nahi, ab mujhe yeh challenge jeetna hai, toh hum unse tab tak baat nahi karege jab tak woh khud aa kar nahi karte ok, tu bhi mat karna. Chal Chachiyon ki madat karte hai, tera roka hai kal.
Viraat: Par Bhai meri baat toh...

Viren walked towards Kadambari and Pinky Chachi, leaving Viraat behind.

Viraat: Hey Bhagwan, yeh maine kya kar diya.

Viraat also went towards the Chachi's and Viren to help them and to convince Viren to pacify Jeevika, so that he could talk to Maanvi.

~Maanvi's Room~


Maanvi and Jeevika were sitting on Maanvi's bed, deciding what to wear tomorrow.

Jeevika: (muttered to herself) Kya karun, mujhe Viren ji se baat karni hai par Mannu...
Maanvi: Kya hua Di? Aapne kuch kaha kya mujhse?
Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, maine kuch bhi nahi kaha.
Maanvi: (smiles) Ok then, aap batao main kal kya pehnu?
Jeevika: Mannu, maine tere liye kuch already pick kar liya hai tujhe chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai.
Maanvi: (excitedly) Kya? Aapne already pick kar liya hai? Mujhe dekhna hai Di, dikhao na mujhe.
Jeevika: Abhi nahi, main tujhe kal dikhaungi.
Maanvi: (frowns) Di not fair, aisa koi karta hai kya, please dikhao na.
Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, main tujhe kal hi dikhaungi, bas.
Maanvi: Par Di...
Jeevika: Mannu...(after a long pause) Waise Mannu, um..woh main..mera matlab hai, tu abhi jo Viraat se baat nahi kar rahi hai, kya tujhe usse baat karne ka mann nahi karta. Waise bhi woh tera best friend hai, tu usse apni har ek baat share karti hai, aur toh aur teri usse shadi hone wali hai, toh kya tera thoda sa bhi mann nahi kar raha usse baat karne ka?
Maanvi: Aap kya kehna chahti ho Di?
Jeevika: Wahi ki mujhe toh Viren ji se baat karne ka bada mann hai, unse yeh batana hai ki kal main kya pehnugi, kitni masti karungi, wagaira wagaira(etc)..
Maanvi: Waise sach kahun Di toh mujhe bhi na, Viraat se baat karne ka bahut mann kar raha hai, ek woh hi toh hai jo mujhe samjhta hai..

Jeevika looked at Maanvi with widened eyes.

Maanvi: Mera matlab hai aapke baad, haan aapke baad mujhe jo achi tarah se samjh sakhta hai woh toh Viraat hi hai na Di, aur aapko ek secret bataun?
Jeevika: (smiles) Kya?
Maanvi: Main na Viraat se bina lade bina baat kare nahi reh sakhti.
Jeevika: Toh kyun jhansi ki rani bankar challenge accept kiya?
Maanvi: Di aap toh jante ho main excitment mein kuch bhi ulta sidha kar baithi hun.
Jeevika: Bilkul pagal hai tu tujhe pata hai?
Maanvi: (smiles cutely) Par Di, ab na mujhe usse baat karne ka aur bhi mann kar raha hai, kyun na hum yeh challenge bhul kar unse baat karne chale?
Jeevika: (smiles mischievously/to herself) Ab aaye ga maza. (to Maanvi) Nahi Mannu, ab toh mujhe yeh challenge jeetna hi hai, tu bhi Viraat se tab tak baat mat karna jab tak woh aa kar tujhe sorry nahi keh deta, thik hai, (her phone starting ringing) main abhi chalti hun, bahut important call hai.
Maanvi: Par Di meri baat toh...

Jeevika  left the room, and
answered her phone, leaving Maanvi all shocked and disappointed.

Maanvi: (saddly) Partner, mujhe tumse baat karni hai..Yeh maine kya kar diya Bhagwanji.

It was dinner time, everyone headed towards the dinner table and sat down. Viraat and Viren sat side by side, while Maanvi and Jeevika sat opposite them.

Dadaji: Aap sab khana shuru kijiye.

Maanvi and Viraat wanted to talk to each other but VirIka were not letting them, whenever they try to look at each other, Viren or Jeevika would divert their attention by doing something.
After dinner everyone headed towards their room except VirIka and VirMan. Jeeman sat on the same couch talking about something, while the Vadhera boyz sat opposite them. Viren was reading some files and Viraat was just playing with his phone.

Viraat:(whisperes) Bhai, pura din nikal gaya, ab toh baat karo na Bhabhi se.
Viren: (out loud) Kyun?
Viraat: (holding his arms) Bhai thoda dhire nahi bol sakhte, pure ghar ko uthne ka irada hai kya?
Viren: Oh sorry.
Viraat: Bhai, please na, Bhabhi se baat karlo na, (looking at Maanvi) dekho na, bechari kitni udas lag rahi hai.
Viren: (looking at Jeevika, who was smiling) Nahi toh, mujhe toh nahi lag rahi.
Viraat: Bhai, chahere(face) par mat jao, Mann se dekho, tabhi aapko dikhe ga.
Viren: Main koi Bhagwan nahi hun jo mujhe mann se dikhe ga. Tu chup chap mujhe mera kaam karne de, bada aaya mann se dekhne wala.

Viren was trying to control his laughter, when he saw his Brother all sad and disappointed.

Maanvi: (whisperes) Di, aapko nahi lagta kafi der ho gayi hai, aapko ab Jiju ko maaf kar dena chahiye.
Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, jab tak woh aa kar mujhse baat nahi karte tab tak main bhi unse baat nahi karungi.
Maanvi: Di, please, aap toh jante ho na Jiju kitne ache hai, unhone sirf mazak mein keh diya hoga aur aapne seriously le liya. Di please na, baat kariye na Jiju se.
Jeevika: Tujhe itni fikar kyun ho rahi hai? Maine kaha na, jab tak woh nahi aa kar mujhse baat karte tab tak main bhi unse baat nahi karungi, jaise tu Viraat se nahi karegi and that is final.
Maanvi: Par in sab mein main aur Viraat kahan se aa gayi, challenge toh aap mein aur Jiju mein huyi thi na.

Jeevika: Acha, Ek Hazaron Mein Meri Pyaari Behna, tere aur Viraat ke beech mein bhi wahi challenge huyi thi na jo mere aur Viren ji ke beech mein huyi thi, itni jaldi bhul gayi kya?
Maanvi: (muttered to herself) Wahi toh sab se badi galti kardi maine...
Jeevika: Kuch kaha tune Mannu?
Maanvi: Nahi Di, main kahan kuch...(muttered to herself) Meri toh bolti hi band ho gayi hai.
Jeevika: (contolling her laughter) Dekha, tune fir kuch kaha.
Maanvi: Nahi Di, maine kuch nahi kaha.
Jeevika: Acha, lagta hai mere khan(ears) baj rahe hai.

Maanvi looked up and saw Viraat staring at her, she smiled at him.

Viraat: (through his eyes) Maanvi, main tumse baat kare bina nahi reh sakhta, please kuch karo na.
Maanvi: (through her eyes) Main kya karun Partner, mujhe bhi tumse baat karni hai, par Di hai ki...
Viraat: (out loud)Aur Bhai bhi...

Jeevika and Viren looked up at Viraat with confused expression, and Maanvi was just looking at him worriedly.

Viren: Aur Bhai bhi kya?

Jeevika: (looking at Maanvi) Mannu?
Maanvi: (looking at Jeevika/to herself) Kahin maine bhi toh nahi Viraat ki tarah woh sab keh diya. (to Jeevika) Di..woh main..
Jeevika: Tu udhar kya dekh rahi hai?
Maanvi: Kuch nahi Di, woh Vir,,,,mera matlab hai, Viren Jiju ko.
Jeevika: (conrolling her laughter) Wah, pehli baar tujhe aapne Jiju ka naam lete suna hai. Koi baat nahi hota hai, kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai.
Viraat: Woh Bhai main...
Viren: Kya?
Viraat: Kuch...kuch nahi Bhai...
Viren: Aise kaise kuch nahi, maine suna tujhe kehte huye, batana..
Viraat: Main toh bas yeh keh raha tha ki, ki...ki aapko Bhabhi dekh rahi thi.
Viren: (looking at Viraat) Kya?
Jeevika:(looking at Viren) Kya?
Maanvi: (looking at Jeevika) Kya?
Viraat: (looking at Viren-Jeevika-Maanvi) Kya?
Viren: Tune abhi kya kaha?
Viraat: Maine kaha ki, Bhabhi aapko dekh rahi thi, chupke chupke.
Maanvi: Haww..Di aap Jiju ko chupke chupke kyun dekh rahi thi?
Jeevika: Mannu, main kahan dekh rahi thi, main toh tujhse baat kar rahi thi.
Viraat: Mai,,maine dekha.
Viren: Kya dekha?
Maanvi: Di, aapne toh kaha tha ki aap Jiju se naraz hai, aur ab aap chori chori..
Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, maine nahi dekha Viren ji ko chori chori sachi mein.
Viraat: Par maine dekha.
Viren: Tune kaise dekh liya, teri nazar toh Maanvi par thi na?
Maanvi: (looking at Viraat) Kya?
Jeevika: (looking at Maanvi) Kya?
Viraat: (looking at Viren) KYAA???
Viren: (looking at Maanvi-Jeevika-Viraat) Kya?
Jeevika: Mannu, tu bhi dekh rahi thi na Viraat ko?
Maanvi: (stammers) Na,,nah,,nahi Di, main,,, main toh...
Viraat: Oye Bandariya, jhut kyun bol rahi ho, tum toh mujhe dekh rahi thi.
Viren: Tujhe kaise pata Bhai, tune toh abhi kaha ki tu usse nahi dekh raha tha?
Viraat: Woh...woh..main...
Jeevika: Mannu, tu isiliye chahti thi na ki main Viren ji se baat karun, taki tu Viraat se baat kar paaye...
Maanvi: Nahi Nahi Di,,,aisa kuch nahi hai. Chep tum mujhe kyun fasa rahe ho? Dekh toh tum mujhe rahe the na.
Jeevika: Tujhe kaise pata, tune toh kaha tu usse nahi dekh rahi thi.
Viraat: Haan toh, thodi der ke liye meri aankhein tum par ruk gayi thi bas..
Viren: Bas?
Jeevika: Kyun Mannu, teri bhi aankhein Viraat par ruk gayi thi na?
Maanvi: Haan,,,Nahi..
Jeevika: Haan ya Nahi?
Viren: Tujhe toh sharam aani chahiye Viraat, khud mujhse kehta tha ki Jeevika se baat mat karo, warna hum challenge har jaye gein aur khud yahan aankh mein choli khel rahe ho Meri Saali ke saath.
Jeevika: Aur tu, khud Chep Chep kehti phirti thi aur aankhon aankhon mein romance ho raha tha mere Devar ke saath, tumse yeh umeed nahi thi mujhe Mannu.
Viraat: Meri aur Maanvi ki baat kahan se aa gayi, chori chori aankh mein choli toh Meri Bhabhi khel rahi thi aapke saath.
Maanvi: Ha..haan, Di,,,Aankhon aankhon mein chori chori romance toh aap kar rahe the na Mere Jiju ke saath.
Viren: Chori chori aankh mein choli woh kaise khel sakhti hai jab maine uss se ankhe milayi hi nahi?
Jeevika: Haan, aur chori chori romance main kaise kar sakhti hun jab unhone meri aankhon mein dekha hi nahi?
VirMan: Woh,,Woh...
VirIka: Kya Hua Woh Se Aagey Bhi Badhoge Aap Dono.
VirMan: Yeh Galat Hai...(looking at each other)

VirIka smiled at each other.

VirIka: Kya Galat Hai?
Maanvi: (to Jeevika/holding her hand) Di please bas karo na, ab toh Jiju se baat karo na.
Jeevika: Kaha na main nahi karungi, jab tak tere Jiju nahi mujhse baat karte.
Viraat:(holding Viren's hand) Bhai, aap toh samjho na, please.
Viren: Main kya samjhun?
Viraat: Bhai please Bhabhi se baat kar lijiye na.
Viren: Maine kaha na, main nahi karunga jab tak woh aa kar khud nahi mujhse baat karti.
Maanvi: Toh aap nahi maanogi?
Jeevika: (hands acrossed her chest)Nahi.
Viraat: Aap nahi maanoge?
Viren: (hands acrossed his chest) Nahi.
VirMan: Pakka?
VirIka: Sunai nahi deta kya? Kaha na Nahi Nahi Nahi.

Maanvi ran to her Jiju, while Viraat ran to his Bhabhi.

VirMan Together, at the same time:

        Maanvi: Please Meri Di Se Baat Kar Lijiye.
        Viraat: Please Mere Bhai Se Baat Kar Lijiye.

VirIka just blurst out laughing, they were unable to control their laughter anymore, while VirMan looked at them confusingly.


VirMan: (confused)KYA HUA?


Okkk..So?? Hw was it? Plz do comment...PM's will b send out later...tc

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update lol vrika n virman r funny

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update
Loved virika n virman funny fight sequence... More love to virika who play cupid... Poor virman
Plz pm me when u update n update soon dear.

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:36am | IP Logged
That was a funny update..
Do continue soon SmileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
beautiful and it was funny update too... waiting for next part... 

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Poor Virman. Lovely update. Smile

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Aww such a beautiful update loved all their nok jhok
Continue soon and do pm me

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