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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146 (Page 121)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
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update soon
  Sure, I will update asap..Smile
plll updattte plllz
Sorry, but I can't till da 10th...really very sorry..Ouch

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continue soon dear can't wait anymore
  will b update after 10th...sorry..but thnks..Smile
plz update today plz plz plz plz plz plz
  M really vry sorry, but I can't its not even draft yet,,,but pakka 10th ke baad karungi,,m really very sorry...Ouch
it's k dear
  Thnk u so much 4 understanding...but I promise u'll luv da nxt update,,(hopefully)
i will definetly love itBig smile

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continue soon dear can't wait anymore
  will b update after 10th...sorry..but thnks..Smile
plz update today plz plz plz plz plz plz
  M really vry sorry, but I can't its not even draft yet,,,but pakka 10th ke baad karungi,,m really very sorry...Ouch
it's k dear
  Thnk u so much 4 understanding...but I promise u'll luv da nxt update,,(hopefully)
i will definetly love itBig smile
  Thnk u..Smile
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Both the parts were amazing aarti manvi seducing virat was very nice and then the song.then their night convo was very cute and the saat vachans i just love ur story cont soon

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arti remember i sent u a pm and in the pm there were two ideas are u going to use them plez replu quick

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Both the parts were amazing aarti manvi seducing virat was very nice and then the song.then their night convo was very cute and the saat vachans i just love ur story cont soon
  Thnk u so much...4 luving dis...will continue soon, thnks once again..Smile
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arti remember i sent u a pm and in the pm there were two ideas are u going to use them plez replu quick
  Yes, I m goin 2 use dem, m so sorry I replied so late, had sum prob wid my net..will work on ur suggestion asap..thnks a ton 4 dat..Smile
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Hello guyz...m bck, Thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...really appreciate it, I was actually goin 2 end dis SS, as I didn't hve ne ideas, but Thnks 2 MYVIRMAN...I hve got an amazing idea, she actually suggessted it, I hope u'll lyk it..Plz thank her, she actually deserve it...Thnk u so much myvirman...will work on ur suggestion in da nxt update, den u'll knw which 1 I picked..ok nw enough of my bak bak, here we go, EnJoY...


VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 26...

~Recap~

Maanvi had a wide smile on her face, she pulled Viraat more close to her and hugged him as tight as she could.


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~Main Hall...7:00 pm~


Jeevika: Maanvi Viraat? Kahan the tum dono?

Viren: Haan, aaj din bhar tum dono gayab hi the.

Vanshika Maa: Kya hua? Kuch bolo bhi.

Maanvi and Viraat just entered the mansion and they were showered with questions.

Viraat: (smiles) Maa, Bhai, Bhabhi, thoda sa brake lagao, hum bas bahar gaye the.

Viren: Arey par kahan?

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Woh...Um...
Viren: Woh?

Viraat: Sha,,Shadi,,Shadi karne.

Everyone: (surprised) KYA?

Maanvi and Viraat looked at everyone in shock.

Jeevika: Mannu?

Maanvi: Di woh..

Viraat: Bhabhi woh, mujhe Maanvi se dubara shadi karni thi isiliye.

Viren: (smirks) Arey wah, dubara shadi...kya baat hai junior Vadhera. Hume nahi bulaya?

Viraat: Bhai woh...

Maanvi: Jiju woh..maine hi,,Viraat ko kaha ki sirf hum dono hi rahe wahan, (looking at Viraat) isme Viraat ki koi galti nahi hai.

Jeevika: (suppressing her laugh) Acha? Wah Mannu, apni Di ko bhi nahi bataya.

Viraat: Bhabhi woh, Maanvi batana chahti thi, par maine hi mana kar diya.

Kadambari Chachi: (teasingly) Haye ni, dekho toh kaise ek dusre ko bachaya jaa raha hai.

Inder Chachu: Kya pyaar hai.

VirMan blushes, while everyone smiled at them.

Kadambari Chachi: (under her breath/rolls her eyes) Jaisi ki aapko pata hai pyaar kya hota hai, Huh.

Inder Chachu: (looking at Kadambari Chachi) Kya kaha?

Kadambari Chachi: (pretending to be confused) Maine kya kaha? Lagta hai aapke kaan bajh rahe hain.

Inder Chachu: Kaan mere nahi tumhare bajhte hai.

Dadaji: Acha chalo, shadi toh karli hai tum dono ne, ab ashirwaad lene ka iraada hai bhi ya nahi?

Viraat: Hai na Dadaji.

Maanvi and Viraat walked towards the elders and took their blessings.

Jeevika: (smiles) Viraat, Mannu, tum dono jaa kar fresh ho jao. Aur Mannu, jaldi se neeche aajana, dinner taiyaar karna hai.

Maanvi: (smiles back) Ok Di.

Maanvi and Viraat went up towards their bedroom. As they entered their room, Viraat closed the door, and pulled Maanvi towards him, after locking it. His hands around her waist, while her hands was placed on his chest.

Maanvi: Viraat kya kar rahe ho, (trying to get away from his grip) chodo.

Viraat: (nuzzling his nose on her neck) Tumhe kya lagta hai main kya kar raha hun?

Maanvi: Viraat please, Di neeche intezaar kar rahi hogi, mujhe fresh hone do.

Viraat: (looking at her/smirks) Saath mein hote hai na, jaldi ho jaiye ga.

Maanvi: (hits on his arms/blushes) Viraat.

Viraat: Maanvi.

Maanvi: Chodo.

Viraat: Kabhi Nahi.

Maanvi: (cutely) Please.

Viraat: No.

Maanvi: Viraaattt...

Viraat: Maaannnviii...

Maanvi: (giving up) Kya chahiye?

Viraat: Um, abhi ke liye, ek simple sa I Love You chalega.

Maanvi: (blushes) Acha?

Viraat: Hmm..

Maanvi: I Love You Viraat.

Viraat: (still holding her) I Love You Too Maanvi.

Maanvi: Ab toh chodo.

Viraat: (pulling her even more close) Mann nahi kar raha.

Maanvi: Viraat...

Viraat: Maanvi...

Maanvi: Please na..

Viraat: Acha ek kiss, phir pakka chodh dunga.

Maanvi: (pouts) Nahi, tum cheating karte ho.

Viraat: Acha baba iss bar nahi karunga, pakka promise.

Maanvi: Aur agar kiya toh?

Viraat: Nahi karunga na, please.

Maanvi: Theek hai. Apni aakhein band karo pehle.

Viraat: (smiles) Ok.

Viraat closed his eyes, while Maanvi leaned towards his cheek and place a cute, little kiss.

Viraat: (pouts) Yeh kya tha?

Maanvi: (smiles at him) Kiss, (trying to remove his hands) ab chodo.

Viraat: (frowns) Maanvi, ab tumne cheating ki hai.

Maanvi: Maine kaunsi cheating ki hai? Tumne kaha kiss karo, maine kiya. Ab chalo chodo.

Viraat: Nahi...(hugs her tightly/eyes closed)

Viren: (from the other side of the room) Viraat...?

Viraat: (opens his eyes/looking at Maanvi) Yeh tumhari awaaz ko kya hua?

Maanvi: Woh main nahi thi...

Viren: (knocking on the door) Viraat...?

Viraat moves away from her with a jerk.

Viraat: Bhai?

Viren: Viraat?

Maanvi: Dekha tumhare chakkar mein kya ho raha hai, hato.

Maanvi pushed him away and walked towards the washroom, while Viraat opened the door.

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Maanvi: Di...

Maanvi entered the kitchen, where Jeevika was already present. She walked in and hugged her sideways.

Jeevika: (smiles) Kya baat hai Mannu, aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai Di par.

Maanvi: (pulls away/holds her ears) Sorry Di, maine bina aapse bataye, firse shadii karli.
Jeevika: Koi baat nahi Mannu. Main tere aur Viraat ke liye bahut khush hun, (pulls her hands down, from her ears) iss khushi ke aage yeh sab baatein maiyne nahi rakhti. Samjhi?

Maanvi: (smiles) Samjh gayi Di.
Jeevika: Very Good. Acha suna, main kal Rishikesh ke liye nikal rahi hun. Beeji ka phone aaya tha. woh hume bohut miss kar rahi thi, keh rahi thi ki thodi der unke paas aajaun, Chutku bhi aane wala hai na, isiliye.

Maanvi: (excitedly) Wow Di, main bhi chalungi.

Jeevika: (smiles widely) Sachi? Kitna maza aaye ga na Mannu, pehle ki tarah masti.

Maanvi: (strictly) No way Di, aap koi masti nahi karogi, Chutku ke hote huye no masti. Woh bahar aa jaye ga tab karte hai na masti, (smiles) tab toh hum teen honge.

Jeevika: Haan, bann jaa apne Jiju ki chamchi...mujhe Fmji kehte ho na tum dono, par ho khud.

Maanvi: (hugs her yet again) We love you na DI.
Jeevika: Chal pagal, ab dinner ready karein?

Maanvi: (breaks the hug) Yes of course.

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~VirMan's Room~


After dinner, Maanvi and Viraat were in their room. Viraat was sitting on his bed, busy with his phone, while Maanvi was putting her clothes back in her wardrobe.

Maanvi: (turns towards him) Viraat, kal main aur Di Rishkesh jaa rahe hain.

Viraat: (puts his phone away/frowns) Kyun?

Maanvi: Beeji ka phone aaya tha Di ko, woh hume bahut miss kar rahi hai, toh unhone kaha ki kyun na hum jaa kar wahan ek do din rukh jaye.

Viraat: (stands up/shocked) Ek do din?

Maanvi: (smiles) Haan.

Viraat: (sadly) Maanvi pagal ho kya, ek do din tum mujhe chodh kar jao gi. Abhi abhi toh humari shadi huyi hai na.

Maanvi: Viraat toh kya hua? Mujhe waise bhi apni puri zindagi tumhare hi saath bitani hai na, toh kya hoga agar kuch pal apni Beeji ke saath bita lungi toh.

Viraat: Maanvi please na, (pouts) main kaise rahunga tumhare bagair.

Maanvi: Viraat bas do din, uske baad I'll be back na.

Viraat walked up towards Maanvi and wrapped his hands around her waist, pulling her close.

Viraat: (looking at her angelic face) Mujhe miss karogi?

Maanvi: (wrapping her arms around his neck) Har ek second.

Viraat: (pulls her even more closer) Call karogi?

Maanvi: Har ek mintue.

Viraat: Mujhe bhul toh nahi jaogi na?

Maanvi: Khud ko bhul sakhti hun, par tumhe nahi.

Viraat: (leaning close to her ear) I Love You.

Maanvi: (closes her eyes/blushes) I Love You Too.

Viraat: (pulls away) Chalo tum packing karlo aur so jao.

Maanvi: Woh main kal subha karlungi.

Viraat: (smiles) Theek hai, toh fir hum so jaate hain.

Viraat kissed her on her cheek and moved back, walking away from her. He turned around, looking at Maanvi questioningly as she held his hand.

Viraat: Kya hua?

Without uttering any words, Maanvi entwined her fingers in his and pinned his hands on his back. Viraat was looking at her in shock yet confusedly.

Viraat: Maanvi kya kar rahi ho?


She tighten her grip on his hand and pulled him more close to her. Viraat gulped as he saw Maanvi leaning close to his face. And the next thing he knew, Maanvi's lips was on his. He was shocked as well as surprised with her behavior. She was nibbling on his lips, pulling him more close. Viraat started responding to the kiss as he was unable to resist his Wife, both of their eyes were closed. While kissing him passionately, Maanvi took his lower lips in between her teeth and pressed it lightly, making him hiss in pain. She then sucked on his lower lip, soothing his pain and again kissed both of his lips, as he responded back. She opened her eyes and let out a smile, a mischevious smile in between the kiss and pulled away, leaving Viraat confused, who was not ready to let her go. He leaned in for more, but Maanvi moved back with a smirk. He tried moving his hand away from his back, from her grip, but she only tighten her grip even more.

Viraat: Maanvi mera haath chodo.

Maanvi: Kyun?

Viraat: Bas chodo na please.

Maanvi: (nodding negatively) No...

Viraat: Nahi chodogi?

Maanvi: (smiles at him) Nahi.

Viraat: Sochlo.

Maanvi: Soch liye.

Viraat: Theek hai.

Viraat smirked and tightened his grip on her hand. He moved towards the near by wall and pinned her against it, leaving Maanvi in shock.

Maanvi: (frowns) Viraat cheating hai yeh.

Viraat: Tum karo toh sahi, main karun toh cheating. Ab dekho Mrs. Vadhera main kya karta hun.

Viraat moved towards her neck, and starts nuzzling on her neck, making her feel ticklish. He moved down towards her collar bone and slightly bit it.  Then he started placing soft wet kisses on her neck, shoulder, collar bone, jaw lines and cheeks. Maanvi's heartbeat increased everytime he left his soft wet kisses on her skin. She gasped, moaned his name, and her breath hitched. Viraat moved back and looked in her eyes, he again moved towards her lips, and captured it in between his, sucking and licking. Her grip loosened on his hand so Viraat moved his hands away from his back and pinned her hands against the wall. He took her upper lip in between his teeth and slightly bit on it, making Maanvi hissed in pain this time. She could feel his lips turning into a smile, on her lips. She kissed on his upper lip as he pulled away from the kiss.

Viraat: (smile/releases her hands) Kaisi lagi saza?

Maanvi: (pulls him close by his collar) Yeh saza thi?

Viraat: Aur nahi toh kya?

Maanvi: Mujhe toh nahi lagta yeh saza tha.

Viraat: Acha, toh aapko aur saza chahiye Mrs. Vadhera?

Maanvi: Haan chahiye toh.

Viraat: (smiles) As you wish.

Viraat once again captured her lips, kissing her with much more passion then before. Without breaking the kiss, he picked her up in his arms and walked towards their bed. Maanvi's hands were wrapped around his neck, pulling him even more close, while running her fingers on his hair. He carefully placed her on the bed and sat beside her. She looked at him questioningly as he was just sitting there looking at her admiringly.

Viraat: Thank You Partner.

She sat up on the bed, beside him.

Maanvi: Thank You kyun?

Viraat: Bas aise hi, mann kiya kehne ko, toh keh diya. Kehne mein tax thodi lagta hai.

Maanvi: (little annoyed) Tumhe yahi waqt mila tha yeh sab kehne ko Chep.

Viraat: Haan, toh?

Maanvi: Kya toh? Abhi hum kuch aur...(her fingers moved towards the button of his shirt)

Viraat: (smiled amusedly) Mrs. Sherni...

And he rolled on top of her, placing soft kisses on her skin.

Maanvi: Viraat tum mujhe miss karoge na, kal jab main chali jaungi.

Viraat moved back and looked at her with a smile.

Viraat: Miss toh tab karunga jab tum mere dilo dimaag se jaogi. Kabza kar ke rakha hai tumne apna mere dil aur dimaag mein.

Maanvi: (smiles) Acha?

Viraat: Haan. Waise, aisa nahi ho sakhta ki tumhara jaana cancel ho jaiye.

Maanvi: Viraat. Sochna bhi mat. Sach kahun, mujhe bhi sabse milne ka bahut mann kar raha hai. (sadly) Beeji, Badi Beeji, Chachu, Chachi, Dabbu, sab ko bahut miss kar rahi hun.

Viraat laid beside her as she placed her head on his chest.

Maanvi: (smiles widely) Sab kitne khush honge na mujhe aur Di ko dekh kar.

Viraat: (stroking her hair) Haan, bas mujhe aur Bhai ko hi dukh hoga.

Maanvi: (looked up at him) Acha? Kyun?

Viraat: Arey tum aur Bhabhi hum dono ko chodh kar jaa rahi ho woh bhi do din ke liye. Dukh toh hoga na. (smiles) But don't worry agar hume tum dono ki bahut yaad aayi na, toh main tumhe milne aa jaunga aur Bhai Bhabhi ko.

Maanvi: (places her chin on his chest) Tum aisa kuch nahi karoge Viraat. Thoda freedom toh chahiye na hume.

Viraat: Haan toh milega na freedom, thode ghanto ke liye, khubh enjoy karna.

Maanvi: (rolled her eyes at him) Kuch nahi ho sakhta tumhara. (places her head on his chest again)

Viraat: I know. But I Love You.

Maanvi: Huh...Chep..

Viraat: (looking down at her) Sachi muchi, I Love You dheer saara.

Maanvi: (looks up at him) I Love You bahut saara.

Viraat: (cutely) But I Love You more na Mannu.

Maanvi: (even more cutely) I Love You even more na Viru.

Viraat: Maanvi don't call me that.

Maanvi: Fine, then you don't call me that.

Viraat: That what?

Maanvi: Mannu.

Viraat: (winks at her) Mannu.

Maanvi: (fake smile) Viru..

Viraat: (frowns) Mannu..

Maanvi: (wide smile) Viru...

Viraat: Mannu Mannu Mannu...

Maanvi: Viru Viru Viru...

And the night faded away with their, cute little fight, or you could say, with their nokh jhok.



Ok I knw, dis isn't dat romantic, u'll hve 2 wait 4 dere more romantic scenes ahead. M goin 2 add a new twist in da nxt update suggested by myvirman...sorry if u think dis is goin 2 fast...Hope u lykd dis update, I knw u must've felt not much interesting update, but wat 2 do..more twist n turns on its way,..plz leave ur comments n hit lyk 4 me if u lykd it...m talking a lot 2day..sorry bout dat..Tc Luv Aarti..


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