Hello guyz,,,wats up??? M bck wid part 2 of my SS,,,sorry 4 da late update,,,neways thnks 4 ur lovely comments, i hope u guyz lyk dis part as well...Enjoy...
VirMaan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 2...
~Recap~
The song finally ended, the light turned back on, Maanvi was just speechless, she was just confused and shocked. She didn't understand what was going on, she turned her face to see the look on everyone's face around the hall. Maya looked pissed off; Virika looked happy; Inder Chachu, Vanshika Maa, Shlok, Dabbu, Pinky Chachi, Madhan Chachu, Kadambari Chachi looked confused; And Dadaji, Swamini Bua, Beeji looked shocked and angry.
Maanvi: (to herself/scared) Yeh Viraat ne kya kiya..?? Ab kya hoga Maanvi?
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Maanvi turned around to face Viraat and wishpered.
Maanvi: Viraat yeh tumne kya kiya? Main hi mili thi tumhe? Mere saath hi dance karna tha tumhe? Itni mushkil se tumhe aur Maya ko milaya tha aur tumne sab paani mein mila diya.
Viraat: Maanvi, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai,,,Maanvi main tumse yeh kehna chahata hun ki main tumse...
Viraat was cut off by Swamini Bua.
Swamini Bua: Yeh sab kya hai Viraat? Ab toh bachpana chodh do, tumhari shadi hone wali hai Maya ke saath, aur tum Maanvi ke saath aise...Jawab do Viraat yeh sab kya hai?
Viraat: (serious)Bua, main Maya se shadi nahi karna chahata.
Maya: (shocked/confused) Tum mujhse shadi nahi karna chahte? Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Viraat, tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakhte ho?
Viraat: Maine kya kiya hai Maya? Jo bhi kiya tumne hi kiya hai. Hamesha se karti aayi ho, tumne hamesha se use kiya hai mujhe. Apne career ke liye, tumne mujhe chodha tha na, you needed a break, par jab tum wapas aayi, maine tumhe ek mauka diya, itni koshishon ke baad mujhe laga tha ki tum badal gayi ho, but no, I was wrong. Tum wahi ho jo tum pehle thi, ek selfish aur self centered ladki, jo sirf apne baare mein hi sochti hai. Maine tumhare liye kya kuch nahi kiya Maya, par tumne,,why Maya?
Maya: Maine aisa kya kar diya Viraat, jo tum mujhe ulti sidhi baatein suna rahe ho huh?
Swamini Bua:(to Maya)Ek min Maya.. (to Viraat) Viraat, tum kyun Maya se shadi nahi karna chahte? Aisa kya kar diya hai usne?
Viraat: (shouts) Bua Maya ne jhut kaha hai mujhse, woh letter, jo usne mujhe diya tha, woh usne khudh se nahi Maanvi ki madat se likha tha. Uss letter mein jo words likhe hai usse toh un words ka matlab bhi nahi pata hoga.
Maanvi and Maya, both were shocked, how did he came to know about the letter, they wondered.
Viraat: Aur toh aur jisne uski madat ki, ussi ke baare mein woh kya sochti hai woh mujhse behtar aur koi nahi janta. Kyun Maya? Kya kaha tha tumne uss din Maanvi ko, jis din Dadaji ne kaha tha ki tum bhi Maanvi jaisi ho?
Maya: Viraat, tum mujhe galat samajh rahe ho, main tumhe batane hi waali thi par..
Viraat: (cuts Maya off)Batane hi waali thi? Kab batane waali thi, jab humari shadi ho jaati? Sach toh yeh hai Maya ki tum mujhe yeh baat kabhi nahi batati, tum apne matlab ke liye kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakhti ho, aur yeh baat main bahut achi tarah se samjh chuka hun Maya.
Maya: Viraat main...(looks at Maanvi/walks towards her) Yeh sab tumhari wajhse hua hai, tumne hi bhadhkaya hai na usse mere khilaf? Zarur tumne hi bataya hoga usse iss letter ke baare mein. Tum chahti kya ho Maanvi?
Maanvi: (confused/shocked/tears rolling down) Maya maine kuch nahi kiya, main toh janti bhi nahi kab Viraat ko iss letter ke baare mein pata chala.
Maya: Zyada bholi mat bano Maanvi. Mujhe pata hai yeh sab tumne kiya hai. Kyun nahi akela chodh deti hum dono ko? Kyun raat raat bahar baat karti rehti ho Viraat se. Har waqt phone par lagi rehti ho, kabhi call toh kabhi message. Akhir kya rishta hai tumhara Viraat se...
Viraat: (walks towards Maanvi/stands beside Maanvi) Tumhe yeh jaane ki koi zarurat nahi hai Maya ki mera aur Maanvi ka kya rishta hai. Tum kisi bhi rishte ko samjh hi nahi sakhti. I can't believe ki maine tumhare liye apne Bhai se, woh bhi pehli baar ladai ki.
Maya: (hands on his shoulder) Viraat, mujhe pata hai Maanvi ne hi tumhe mere khilaf bhadhkaya hai, dekho tum isski baat par dhiyan mat do, yeh sirf tumhe, aur iss pure family ko control karna chahti hai. Isske jaisi cheap ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi.
Jeevika: (shouts) Bas Maya, bahut ho gaya.
Everyone was shocked when Jeevika shouted, espeacially Swamini Bua.
Jeevika: Agar ek aur shabd kaha tumne Maanvi ke baare mein toh mujhse bura aur koi nahi hoga.
Maya: Jeevika Bhabhi, yeh Maanvi aisi nahi hai jaisi dikhti hai, app please iski baaton mein mat aaiye.
Viraat: (shouts) Bas Maya, ab aur nahi. Chali jao meri zindagi se dur, chali jao meri family se dur, chali jao Maanvi se dur.
Maanvi turns her face towards Viraat.
Viraat: (hands folded infront of her) Main tumhare samne haath jodhta hun. Aur wapas aane ki sochna bhi mat.
Maya: Viraat...
Viraat: Get Out Maya.
Maya without saying another word left, everyone beside Swamini Bua and Maanvi was happy. Swamin Bua was unhappy because she was upset with Viraat and Maanvi, she thought that all this was planned by Maanvi. And Maanvi was unhappy because she was confused, she was upset, she was sad, she never expected all this to happened but unfortunatly it happened and somewhere inside she felt it was all because of her. After a little while all the guests left, besides the Chaudhary's. Jeevika took Maanvi in her room, following by Viraat and Viren. Jeevika and Maanvi sat on the bed while Viren and Viraat stood by the door.
Jeevika: Mannu, kya hua, tu kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai?
Maanvi: (teary eyes) Di, yeh sab meri wajhse hua hai, par Di trust me, maine yeh sab jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya Di, pata nahi kaise ho gaya.
Viren: Maanvi tum kyun itna tension le rahi ho, relax jo hona tha woh ho gaya, aur isme tumne kuch nahi kiya hai. Tum guilty feel mat karo.
Jeevika: Virenji sahi keh rahe hai Mannu, jo hua woh Maya ki galti ki wajha se hua hai.
Maanvi: Par Di, iss mein kahin na kahin meri bhi galti hai, na hi main woh letter ka idea deti aur na hi...
Viraat: (cuts Maanvi off) Maanvi...Iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai, jo hua woh Maya ki wajha se hua hai.
Maanvi: Lekin Viraat, meri wajha se tum fir se akele...I'm sorry Viraat, main tumhe,,,
Viraat: (cut Maanvi off again) Nahi Maanvi...(sitting down close to her, on his knees/holds her hand) Main akela nahi hun, Maanvi main tumse kuch kehna chahta hun...ki main tumse,,,ki main tumse..
Viren stood there and understood what Viraat was going to tell Maanvi, he interepted him because he knows that Maanvi will not accept his love after knowing about her illness.
Viren: Um Viraat, chal na mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai.
Viraat: 1 min Bhai, main Maanvi se kuch kehna chahta hun.
Viren: Viraat tu usse baad mein keh dena, abhi chal mere saath mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai.
Viraat understood that there's something important that his brother needs to tell him, so without saying anything else, he left with his brother to his room.
Viraat: Bhai, kya hua? Apne mujhe Maanvi se apne dil ki baat kyun nahi kehne diya?
Viren: (looking straight into his eyes) Viraat, Maanvi tere pyaar ko accept nahi karegi.
Viraat: Par kyun Bhai, woh meri partner hai, I Love her.
Viren: Viraat, mujhe yeh baat tujhe pehle hi bata deni chahiye thi, par main kya karta, main majboor tha, main tujhe firse waise nahi dekh sakhta tha jaise tu pehle tha jab Maanvi teri zindagi mein nahi thi, par ab mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe tujhe sab sach bata dena chahiye.
Viraat: Bhai, aisa kya hai jo app mujhse chupa rahe the? Batao na Bhai, aur in sab mein Maanvi ka mere confession se kya taluk(connection).
Viren: Taluk hai Viraat. (hands on his shoulder) Viraat Maanvi ko,,,Maanvi ko...
Viraat: (impatiently) Maanvi ko kya Bhai?
Viren: Viraat Maanvi ko Can...Cancer hai...
Viraat was just shocked, he felt like someone just pulled out his heart from his chest.
Viraat: (tears rolling down) Cancer..?..Maanvi..ko...nahi Bhai, aisa kaise ho sakhta hai, nahi Maanvi ko cancer nahi hai Bhai..(holding Viren by shoulder) Bhai please keh do ki app jhut bol rahe ho, keh do Bhai ki app mazak kar rahe ho,,please Bhai, aisa nahi ho sakhta, Bhagwanji mujhe, Maanvi ko, hum sabko aisi saza nahi de sakhta Bhai. Please Bhai, keh do ki yeh sab jhut hai.
Viren:(tears rolling down/hands on his cheeks) Sambhalo apne appko Viraat. Kaash ki yeh sab jhut hota, par main jhut nahi bol raha, yeh sach hai, Maanvi ko cancer hai.
Viraat: (breaking down/on the floor/tears rolling) Aisi kaunsi saza de raha hai Bhagwanji hume? Unhe zara sa bhi taras nahi aaya..(looking up/talking to god) Kaise usse aisi saza de sakhte ho app, aisa kya gunah(crime) kar diya hai usne jo usse aisi saza de rahe ho? Aisa kaun sa gunah ho gaya hai humse jis ke liye usse humse dur kar rahe ho? Ek pal mein khushi dete ho, toh dusre hi pal mein gam, kyun?
Viren: (sitting beside Viraat/tears rolling/hugs him tightly) Viraat, bas kar, ab jo hona tha woh ho gaya, hume himmat se kam lena hoga. Hume Maanvi ki taqat(strength) bana hoga, usse iss mushkil ghadi mein humare saath ki zarurat hai, hume uska saath dena hoga Viraat. Agar tum hi aise tut gaye toh usska kya hoga, Jeevika ko yeh baat nahi pata hai, woh uska saath nahi de sakhti, ab hum dono ko hi uska saath dena hoga.
Viraat: (breaking the hug) Main Maanvi ko kuch nahi hone dunga Bhai, main banuga uski taqat, main banuga usski himmat. Main usse apne se dur nahi jane dunga Bhai, kabhi bhi nahi. Chahe jo bhi ho jaye, Maanvi ko mujhse Bhagwan bhi dur nahi kar sakhta toh yeh cancer kya chiz hai.
Viren:(smiles through his tears) Yeh hui na baat, hume Maanvi ko best se best treatment deni hogi Viraat, par usske liye Maanvi ko Chandigrah aana hoga jo ki thoda muskil hai.
Viraat: (little confused) Mushkil?
Viren: Hum Maanvi ko yahan nahi laa sakhte, agar woh yahan aa kar rahe gi toh Jeevika ko shak hoga jo Maanvi bilkul nahi chahti, aur dusri baat Beeji humara ehsan kabhi nahi legi. Hume kuch aisa karna hoga jisse Beeji ke swabhi-saman(self-respect) ko koi chot na pahoche aur Jeevika se bhi yeh baat chupi rahe.
Viraat: (wipping his tears/smiles) Bhai ek kaam ho sakhta hai, jisse Bhabhi ko koi shak na hoga, Beeji ke swabhi-maan ko koi chot nahi pahoche gi aur Maanvi ki treatment bhi yahan ache se ho jaye gi.
Viren: Kya?
Viraat: (smiles) Meri aur Maanvi ki shadi.
Viren: (smiles) Teri aur Maanvi ki shadi, good idea. Par Maanvi iss baat ke liye maanegi kya?
Viraat: Woh sab app mujh par chodh do, app bas baaki ghar wale ko manao iss shadi ke liye.
Viren: Viraat tu sure hai na ki tu usse shadi karna chahta hai?
Viraat: Haan Bhai, main sure hun, main usse shadi karna chahta hun, main usske bina nahi jee sakhta.
Viren: (smiles) Thik hai, so 'Mission Maanvi' shuru.
Viraat: Nahi, 'Mission VirMan' Shuru.
Viren: (smiles)Not bad yaar, Mission VirMan. Humara bhi naam hoga na.
Viraat: Haan hai na...VirIka. (smiles)
Viren: (smiles) Haan yaar, amazing name, acha ab mission shuru karein?
Viraat: Haan chalo.
Both of them walked towards Virika's room where Jeevika and Maanvi were sitting and chatting.
Jeevika: Arey Viren ji, Viraat, aa gaye app dono, kya hua anything serious?
Viren: Nahi woh, bas...Viraat..(looking at Viraat)
Viraat: (looking from Viren-Maanvi) Um Maanvi, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai, thodi der ke liye mere saath aa sakhti ho please.
Maanvi: Baat kaunsi baat? Mujhe toh tumse koi baat nahi karni, main nahi aaungi.
Viraat: Arey aao na yaar. (walked towards her/held her hand & took her in his room)
Maanvi: (seperating her hand away from his) Kya hai?
Viraat: (looking into her eyes) Maanvi, main tumse shadi karna chahta hun.
Maanvi: (shocked/confused/stammers) Sha..shadiii?? Muj...mujhse?
Viraat: Haan, shadi aur woh bhi tumse.
Maanvi: Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya Viraat? Dekho partner, tumne abhi jo kiya tha na, woh kafi shocking tha, ab dusra shock kyun de rahe ho yaar. Tum jante ho ki mujhe cancer hai, fir bhi?
Maanvi thought that Viraat also knew about her illness after her Di's accident.
Viraat: Haan, janta hun ki tumhe cancer hai, isiliye toh main tumse shadi karna chahta hun. Dekho Maanvi, tum agar Chandigrah mein raho gi toh tumhara treatment aur bhi ache se hoga. Tum bahut jald thik ho jao gi, aur apne Di ke paas raho gi, iske liye tumhe mujse shadi karni padegi.
Maanvi: Main tumse shadi nahi karungi Viraat. Cancer mujhe hai yaar, isme main tumhe kyun saza dun, agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh tumhari bhi zindagi barbaad ho jaye gi, jo main nahi hone de sakhti. Main tumse shadi nahi kar sakhti Viraat.
Viraat: (hands on her shoulder tightly) Tumhe kuch nahi hoga samjhi tum!!!! Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga. Aur tumhe mujhse shadi karni hi padegi.
Maanvi: Viraat main tumse shadi nahi karungi. (pushes him away/turns to leave)
Viraat: Agar tum mujhse shadi nahi karogi toh main Bhabhi ko bata dunga ki tumhe cancer hai.
Maanvi: (turns to face Viraat) Nahi Viraat, tum aisa nahi kar sakhte.
Viraat: Main kar sakhta hun Maanvi agar tum mujhse shadi nahi karogi toh main aisa hi karunga.
Maanvi: (walks towards him) Viraat please Dii ko kuch mat batana, woh tut jayegi Viraat.
Viraat: Toh kya tum mujhse shadi karne ke liye taiyar ho?
Maanvi: Viraat, main tumse shadi na...
Viraat: Sochlo Maanvi, kya tum Bhabhi ko dukh dena chahti ho ya unhe khushi. Agar tum shadi ke liye na kaho gi toh main unhe tumhare cancer ke baare mein bata dunga, jo unhe sirf dukh aur taklif dega, aur agar haan karti ho toh unhe sirf khushiyan miley gi. Kya chahti ho tum?
Maanvi stood there looking at Viraat, she was confused, why does he even want to marry her, why does he want to ruin his life for her. Viraat stood there waiting for her reply.
Viraat: Tum answer nahi dogi?..Thik hai, main ja raha hun Bhabhi ko sab sach batane. (leaves from there/Maanvi follows)
Maanvi: (running behind him) Viraat ruko, Viraat ruko Viraat...(reaches Virika's room)Viraat...
Jeevika and Viren looked up and saw Viraat and Maanvi standing at the door.
Viraat: Bhabhi mujhe appse kuch kehna hai.
Jeevika: Haan bolo Viraat, kya kehna hai tumhe?
Viraat: Bhabhi woh...woh main...
Maanvi: (cuts Viraat off) Di woh..woh...(closes her eyes tightly & opens it again) Di, Viraat mujhse shadi karna chahta hai.
Viraat turns to face Maanvi, Jeevika was shocked and Viren was happy, he smiled at his little brother.
Jeevika: Aur tu?
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Nahi Bhabhi woh..
Maanvi: (cuts him off again) Aur main bhi.
All three of them smiled at Maanvi, Viraat was on cloud nine. Viren and Jeevika came up to their sibling and hugged them tightly.
Jeevika: (breaking the hug) Mannu, main kitni khush hun yeh sun kar, tumhe andaza bhi nahi hoga.
Maanvi: Di app? App toh nahi chahti thi ki main aur Viraat...
Jeevika: Haan Mannu, aur woh meri sabse badi galti thi, Viraat se acha jeevan saathi tujhe kabhi bhi nahi mil sakhta. Aur mujhse zyada koi aur khush ho hi nahi sakhta, ab hum dono hamesh saath rahe gein. Tu toh Viraat se bahut pyaar karti hai na, toh main kaise apni Mannu ko uske pyaar se dur kar sakhti hun. Haina Mannu.
Maanvi: (looking at Viraat) Haan Di.
Viren: Wah mere Bhai, kya ladki pasand ki hai. Maanana padega teri pasand toh lakhon mein ek hai mere Bhai.
Viraat: (smiles) Thank You Bhai.
Viren: Ab hume yeh baat humare ghar wallon ko bhi bata dena chahiye.
Viraat: Par baat kaun karega?
Jeevika: Woh tum hum dono par chodh do Devarji,,,nahi nahi mere hone wale Jiju. (smiles)
Viren: Jiju?
Jeevika: Haan Jiju, meri behen ka pati mera Jiju hi hoga na.
Viraat: Right meri hone wali Sali Saiba. (smiles and hugs her)
Viren: (walking towards Maanvi) Maanvi, kya mujhe bhi tumhe Bhabhi kehna pade ga?
Maanvi: No way Jiju, main toh hamesha appki Sali Saiba hi rahun gi, aur Di main appko Bhabhi bhi nahi kehne wali hun ha, app pehle meri Behen ho (looking at Viraat) fir kisi ki Bhabhi.
Viren: Acha ab hume niche ja kar sabko yeh baat batani hogi jald se jald.
Jeevika: Haan, chaliye Virenji.
Viraat: Bhai agar woh log iss rishte ke khilaf huye toh.
Maanvi: Toh kya, shadi nahi hogi.
Viraat: Haan tum toh yahi chaho gi na.
Jeevika: Aise kaise shadi nahi hogi, Viraat tum fikar mat karo, sab thik hoga.
Viren: Haan, ab chale?
Jeevika: Haan Viren ji chaliye.
All four of them walked out of the room and went downstairs where everyone was sitting.
Hmmm...so done wid part 2, dn't knw hw it turn out 2 b, plz do comment,,tc n thnk u..luv Artii.
Edited by Artii159 - 11 years ago
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