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Beyond life and death.. Chpt 2 updated pg 3 (Page 2)

..NightDragon.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Yashu...its awesome...
the concept is really new and different...
I really loved the character sketch...specially Manayata's...
And the chapter is outstanding...
very beautifully written and binded...
continue soon...

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Tooo good!! Plz do continue n do pm if u can!!:)

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
OMG it is so damn good, its unique
loved all the charcters especially manyata 
i also luved the line when it said "manayata watched in astonishment..her fingers clasped tighly the handle of berth she felt liking blowing the guy's head now...Badly!!!!"
that was soo funnyLOL
continue soon, great start
i just love it, thanksSmile

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Fizza u are. There in pm list and blue robbin...so good u liked will update soon can i have ur name pls..

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
wow yasha this is amazing. loved it, its unique ;)

Do PM me when u next update

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
nice start

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Wow Yasha...great concept...UV an army officer?? ...and Manyata going on a school trip?? ...interesting...lol now Manyata and her gang does not have reservation in the train...will UV help her??Tongue

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Yasha finally read it as per my promiseLOLSeriously long back AmishE made a Manveer vm on Veer-Zaara then I had wished that they should be made into a story , your FF reminded me of them.Good workStar

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