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Not Quite Prince Charming (removed) (Page 12)

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
I liked how you made her cut her hair! That sounded liberating somehow! And OMG! You just inspired me... Imma write, post then scrap you! Please do check it out when I write it!

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Nice chapter!!!  My favourite line: "Okay. I personally don't want to slip and fall. It's not so much that I'm worried I'll get hurt as I am that you'll be the one that's there to catch me."
I can see Arnav wincing at this line...I know I did!
 
Good job.
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Good riddance to the awful hairdo ...LOL
naice update !!!
Bibliobibulus IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update.. I'm trying to imagine what Khushi would look like with shoulder length hair, and I just can't get a picture in my head.. But it has to be better than the atrocity they make her put on her head in the show..
 
 
I love how Arnav picked the apron up and put it on again, just because she'd told him too.. And the fact that he ate what had to be some disgusting congealed mess, just to punish himself.. And even though Khushi doesn't want to make any of this easy on him, she can't stop herself from asking him to be careful.. She doesn't want him to get hurt... 
 
 
The million sorries scene reminded me of the day Arnav found out about Khushi's engagement on the show.. Beautifully written...
 
 
Thanks for the PM.. Loved the update.. :)
purplelove Goldie
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Cry The hair cut, ouch.   Clap   Actually from someone who use to have really long hair, that was intense.
meera30 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Outstanding!!

I loved it. Its a little difficult to imagine a short haired Khushi - can you please keep it shoulder lenght at least?

Rapunzel indeed

And the Im sorry conversation...very well done!

Beautiful


Edited by meera30 - 30 April 2012 at 10:07pm
PepsiGirl101 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
OH i get it! Rapunzel had long hair... and you KKG just cut it LOL! shes beyond mad to do that... and ouch! that last comment really hurt. but awww i loved how he ate the kheer and just doing that evoked emotions for him i loved it! fantastic update! :)
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Hooray!  You updated!  I love, love, love this FF!  

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