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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
an update after such a long time!wow!this story is sure growing on me...its mysterious,too much yet to be discovered n is leaving me yearning 4 more!

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
What the ??
How can u leave it here??
Just when i thought it couldn't get better than RIB  you  came up with this.
Anyways great update. Cant wait for the mystery to unfold.
Please update RIB also:-)

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
yayyy wow amazing...:)

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
so much of emotions
u cant leave it like this
cant wait for next part
pls continue soon
 


Edited by meenaluma - 02 June 2012 at 11:45am

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
That was one hell of an update! Beautiful!

She left him before him knowing the truth. Payal's words were so perfect!

Even if he stays with you, it will be out of guilt, not out of love...

But who knows? Maybe he would have stayed for love. But yeah, leaving was the best option she has. And Payal - she had been battling her own world. What was the matter between her and Akash? I mean, that can even be irrelevant in context of this story, or maybe not - but it hurt to read about that anyway.

And I liked this Yash. He seems like a great guy. But yep - I know that Khushi is not married to him! Am I right? And when Arnav finds this out; especially about Jiya being his daughter and that Khushi had kept it from him - he is going to kill her! Even with her reasons to keep the truth from him, Khushi is hurting his feelings deep!

I hope everything goes right!

Beautiful update! Waiting for more!

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 02 June 2012 at 12:07pm

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
AWWW!

Clint Eastwood snarls

The pain of Arnav's heart touched me deeply.
The broken hope and love in Khushi brought me to my knees.
But the tears dropped from me when Arnav and Khushi were lost in each others memories.
Beautiful update, I loved it.

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
lyraa i was waiting for u to update this ffSmile
omg!!!! its simply awesome
loved the way u have written it
very emotional
hope there is no love triangle
plz continue and update soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 02 June 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
i feel their pain through your words...poor souls...even though they love each other they cant be together...its beautifully written,,,...

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