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Zairean

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
This is short yet sweet, late yet worth it! 

I run out of praises whenever I look at your work, it amazes me to hell how much creative a person can get! I mean so much has happened even he had declared love to her but still how you are dealing with the story is great. The feelings and emotions masked by Manvi are depicted brilliantly! 

Congrats for almost completing the thread. And about the late update, I blame both Tongue!

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
awesome update...bit short :-(

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Oh... Dear it was just the way awesome as always...

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Posted: 29 October 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Lovely update Elena; short yet amazing! As they say 'quality is not determined by quantity'! and you prove that statement right every time! :)

It's endearing how well Virat understands Manvi, inside out. I love this part here:


'You cry when you're afraid Maanvi. Not angry or happy. It's always fear', he concluded as the tears brimmed her eyes and he moved forward, hugging her closer and tighter.

Looking forward to the next part :)


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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
wowww what an entry now what virat is gonna do... exciting waiting for next part... 

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Posted: 30 October 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
im just speechless nd out of words to praise ure unlimited talent!!! u seriously rock grl!!! it is practically impossible to stop me rambling but u do it nd seriously im out of words..*sighs*
*edits*
 just wanna say this is ausum nd i truly mean it!! i dont know how u write so perfectly.. the most heart touching line for me was "when i luv sumone they die" aawww..nd viraat understanding the reason behind maanvis tears was another aaww moment..when i read ure updates ure wrting totally captivates me nd i cant think of anything else at all..nd i think the character of virat in this FF is one of my favourites cuz i just luv the guys attittude..im actually very vry excited to c why he wants to meet beeji..luking forward to the encounter

p.s officially an enemy of ure tutor who is a barrier between ure wonderful updates getting to usSmile



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OMGGG U FINALLYYY UPDATED!!! I cant believe u left us hanging like this in the middle! plsss update soon i cant wait to knw whats next!!!

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