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VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 (Page 128)

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
i love the fact the story has moved away from raj and now beeji is the obstacle in their path to happiness.

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
awesome update
keep pm

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
thi one z awesome friend..
He is in lv wit her.
It wud trt to read mre.
Lovd it.
Thnx fr ua pm
pm me wen u updte...

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
omg!!!!!! ure back with a bang!!!!! *dances lyk crazy* *realises this is not appropriate place to dance and gets back to commenting*
 
elenaaa!!!! i just luv ure each and every update..im sooo sorry for always being so late to comment but ure each chapter is just so superb and amazingly written that i cant help but admire u more nd more for ure fabulous writing.. i luved the deal between dabbu and maanvi as me and my bro usually do favours in return for each other too..nd maanvis thoughts about how her bringing a freind that was a boy wudnt be as bad as dabbu and his fiance..nd then beejis over reaction to the whole matter too...this is one of the best things about ure ff that we can relate sum of the situations so well with reality..i think that beejis reaction will just add more spice to the story and although most people would hate me for this i luved her reaction cuz the stories just getting more and more interesting..
 
viraats insecurities regarding maanvi nd him tryin to control himself was just such good touches that u mentioned in the update..i luv the way u add the details in to make the whole story flow so smoothly..
 
so maanvis dad and her beeji had sum differences..nd beeji is not so happy with maanvi following her dads footsteps..interesting..
 
the last line was the best dialogue of the update for me..im sooo excited to see virats reaction to maanvis statement..pleease update soon becuz u have sum eager readers...
 
p.s luved the longer update wish all ure updates are just as longWink nd i see the uni room also has  famous fairylights and candles..lol...waiting for humsafr update nd if this comment has many errors then please forgive me cuz i di not prrof read it..im not sure if it even makes sense nd if u even managed to read it all;)
 

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
wow that was a awesome update...plz update real soon

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Ohkay, this was the best effing chapter ever !! This is my first comment in ages, I just couldn't resist ! The last line was effing awesome !! I love it love it luuuaaavvveee it !!

Absolutely in love with the story, with the characters Manvi Virat Dabboo and Tina, with the relationships they share and last but not the least the faint glimpses of Mannu's parents' life. Beautiful.

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
AWWW i loved virat's last few lines, they were so adorable omg seriously, pm me as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 08 October 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Hey Elena! I came across this FF around May and it had me totally hooked!! I read a few chapters and then of course life got really hetic and I stopped visiting IF for a while. I had completely forgotten about your FF until about a week ago when I was on break and I heard the song "time of my life" and I instantly thought about the FF...My new guilty pleasure now is reading a few chapters of TTOML each day...& I just have to tell you I am soo obsessed with it! My roommate was trying to get me to read the 50 Shades of Grey the other day and I could not get through the first chapter without cringing...the writing is terrible!!! & I instead told her about TTOML and shes on chapter 4 and loves it (we both think it should be published BtwSmile)  Now enough of my blabbering and onto my review...First thing I am soo obessed with Virat's character!!!! Hes soo sexy, dangerous, mysterious, & that guy has one heck of a sense of humor!!! I love guys who have a bit of an edge..tt makes them so much more hotterEmbarrassed!!! Manvi is the cutest/funniest character ever!! Dabbu and Tina are too cute! & Of course Rahul takes the cake for the biggest A-hole on the planet but after reading Ch.30 Beeji is a close second maybe even worse than Swamini Bua loll jk! I can ramble on forever about this but I just wanted to tell you that you are doing a fantastic job with this FF...from the plot to the characters everything is just plain brilliant!!! Oh and although I am not a huge Nicholas Sparks fan...I love some of the quotes you've used from his books! Sorry for the super long post but I had to let it out lol & Can't wait for the next update!!!
Also, I remember reading a few chapters of your other FF Humsafar a while back...is that still going on btw?
 

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