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VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 (Page 126)

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged

Awestruck! 

My "anything" plans crashed when I read this update! 

"I thought the anything would be a mini holiday or like a day away' this line was the exact copy of one of "my" anythings LOL! But he is Mr. Unpredictable Vadera, I can't really predict what the next line would be while reading his dialogues. I love his character!  Beeji actually sensed it, anyways her behavior was too harsh! 

 And is Manvi 19? I mean really? Shocked! I thought her to be 22 or 23! Anyways chuck it!

And didn't anyone see him while he came into the balcony? I was actually terrified that Beeji would see him slap one or two Tongue!  I actually loved how Virat stopped himself crossing the line, he didn't get carried away! Now I'm really...really...reallyyy...interested to see how this is going to end!

P.S. This was actually a longer update! Loved it!




Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 07 October 2012 at 8:34am

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ElenaElenor

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
OMG that was freaking awesome..
You dialogues are so perfect that it all looks real , practical, magical...
Manvi-Dabbu convo was hilarious, the way any bro-sis duo would talk..
Beeji was being way too judgemental.
Virat...This guy.. I've no words to explain his character..He is different.
I loved the way how he restrained himself in the end...

We have another f**king problem Maanvi'. Her forehead creased in confusion. Her eyelashes lifted up to meet his piercing gaze.

'I am in love with you'.

*Faints*

Love, wow. Waiting eagerly for the next part.



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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Da last bit was too intense... Yes he truly truly luvs her else he wudn't hav cared for their limits... Hmmm it was all so real like dabbu planning to introduce tina n Manvi using da opportunity of introducing virat as well... Now virat's thoughts r confusing me a bit... He thought abt his insecurities n da trust issues... Den he said he wants to meet her family... Den in da end he says he luvs her... Ok i feel he wants to own her officially... Atleast engaged officially... He has changed quite a lot... Loved how again a flashback of Manvi's childhood wid his parents came in... I luv da transitions... Awesome update...Big smile Thanx u so much for da pm!!

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
awesome update
finally he said it!!
excited for the next update
continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
till date i was a silent reader for this FF.now this update has made me to comment...u r amazing writer n also a a great great story..please continue...i read all ur updates at weekend when i am bored n seriously i guess i have read around '10 - 15 times...but never get over ur story...simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by Syed695 - 07 October 2012 at 9:40am

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
A wonderful surprise, you finally got round to updating! Brilliant update btw!

It's amazing how you make us feel the emotions of the characters through your writing. The last part was absolutely beautiful; loved their brief moment of passion as they gave into each other. They should get married; then they can go the whole way.. LOL But I guess Virat doesn't believe in marriage... now what can change his mind? I hope he does eventually...

He finally said it! :) Awesome, can't wait to see where the story will go from here onwards.

Thoroughly enjoyed this part Elena! :)


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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Very nice update elena..

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Posted: 07 October 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
wowww awesome part dear...

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