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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 9:22am | IP Logged
awesome prologue and loved 1st chpter pm me after updating

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9


hai me getting addicted to your empty posts start loving them more then comments no joking guys batha lahge everyone starts sending me empty post nahi geet ke babij I don't want that

I wish I could read you mind it would make a life easier ms blankyLOL
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajenn

Hey Mel Congratz for your new story.
Am sure ull do great job.


thank you sweets love the dancing smiley

Coming to the update.
Am loving the concept. Sounds really promising.
But am little confuse on few parts.
In your prologue it was stated Maaneet married for 1 year. In the first part, Maan is to tell sth to Geet after 3 months(yet to confirm). So they separate after one yr or 3 months? after a year
Daadi saying Geet died 16 years ago.Maan was 20 then and now 36, if Geet was with maan for an year, it shouldn't be 16 years right.. At least 15 o 14 sth like tat.I thought I wrote 37 my bad but you have a sharp observation
And the twins are 16 years old as well. I assume they are Maaneet's child. They should be younger right.
The calculation is bit confusing me. Or am confusing myself. Sorry I can't count hahahah

If am wrong, den am running away
hahhah no don't run away cause I am sure your right hahahhah I should run away hhaahha

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mel420

Originally posted by ajenn

Hey Mel Congratz for your new story.
Am sure ull do great job.


thank you sweets love the dancing smiley

Coming to the update.
Am loving the concept. Sounds really promising.
But am little confuse on few parts.
In your prologue it was stated Maaneet married for 1 year. In the first part, Maan is to tell sth to Geet after 3 months(yet to confirm). So they separate after one yr or 3 months? after a year
Daadi saying Geet died 16 years ago.Maan was 20 then and now 36, if Geet was with maan for an year, it shouldn't be 16 years right.. At least 15 o 14 sth like tat.I thought I wrote 37 my bad but you have a sharp observation
And the twins are 16 years old as well. I assume they are Maaneet's child. They should be younger right.
The calculation is bit confusing me. Or am confusing myself. Sorry I can't count hahahah

If am wrong, den am running away
hahhah no don't run away cause I am sure your right hahahhah I should run away hhaahha





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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
WHAT DID MAAN DO THAT SHE LEFT HIM

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by punam2712

WHAT DID MAAN DO THAT SHE LEFT HIM

you will now in the next update
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
awesome start
Why did Maan did this to Geet
Geet is alive but she is dead for Maan
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Atiffa

awesome start
Why did Maan did this to Geet
Geet is alive but she is dead for Maan
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

it's a weird story and thx


Edited by mel420 - 10 April 2012 at 2:38pm

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