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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

ff is

decevied

tud mel fainted
yeah blank post girl mere ff ka naam lehri hai

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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by Atiffa

awesome

I knew it Geet would execute her plan now to escape bcz all this sudden change of gestures frighten her more

she has gone through so much and now her children lives are also depended , so she have to do something

Maan is blaming himself for the death of Geet and his children, and he deserves that after what he has done to Geet without giving her chance to prove her innocence

Nisha knows the truth and she has been protecting Ruchas all these yrs so sweet of her

and that also explain her behavior

Looking forward to the precap

But one thing Maan shouldn't be forgiven easily

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

P.S

My favorite FF's

Hum aao kay hain koun by mrs.msk

Shetan ka Ghar by mrs.msk

fantasy and and a sudden change of heart by sarah

Deceived by Mel

Her complete submission by tellyme

all the FF's written by anshra

revengeful marriage by dorrse11

don't I will be harder on maan in this ff. awww😳 you liked my ff.
really going to read shetan ka ghar everyone is saying it's a great ff😃

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Infinity. @Infinity. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update!!
Loved it...

so Nisha knows the truth N she hate Maan

awww poor maan thinking his Mishty was no more :(

waiting for maaneet meeting
continue soon.

thank you for pm 😊

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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by Gcs-girl

awesome update!!
Loved it...

so Nisha knows the truth N she hate Maan

awww poor maan thinking his Mishty was no more :(

waiting for maaneet meeting
continue soon.

thank you for pm 😊

okay this is like the third time is there something wrong with your pc😕

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Ruchi @ruchs IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Uff Me got super late…

Sholly Mel…😳

Yesterday both the updates took up a lot of time….

Upadate…😃

Now me understood why Maan feels Geet is dead…

Gosh my dad must have been so heartbroken….🥺

Me is feeling sooo bad for him…😭

(Me can feel bad since me is unaware about the whole truth… Right???)😉

God… Me guessed correctly…😲

Nisha was aware about quite a good number of things!!!😲

Hmmm So Geet made a total fool-proof plan…😕

She safe guarded her mother and babies both…👏

Me can understand how she must have felt…😭

Loved both the poems a lottt….👏

Really waiting for the meeting…😍

Knowing you, it would be a complete blast!!!😉

Sholly once again for getting late…😳

As a compensation, me will update one of my FFs for you today…😳

Now tell me which one within 2 hours…😳

Me will be waiting…😳

Love you...😳

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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by ruchs

Uff Me got super late' yeah finally

Sholly Mel'😳 it's ok sweets

Yesterday both the updates took up a lot of time'. aww

Upadate'😃

Now me understood why Maan feels Geet is dead'

Gosh my dad must have been so heartbroken'.🥺

Me is feeling sooo bad for him'😭

(Me can feel bad since me is unaware about the whole truth' Right???)😉 😆

God' Me guessed correctly'😲

Nisha was aware about quite a good number of things!!!😲

Hmmm So Geet made a total fool-proof plan'😕 yepyep

She safe guarded her mother and babies both'👏

Me can understand how she must have felt'😭

Loved both the poems a lottt'.👏 😃

Really waiting for the meeting'😍

Knowing you, it would be a complete blast!!!😉 or not

Sholly once again for getting late'😳 it's ok sweets

As a compensation, me will update one of my FFs for you today'😳 ow let it be aayhina

Now tell me which one within 2 hours'😳

Me will be waiting'😳

Love you...😳 love ya too ruchs

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Ruchi @ruchs IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Okies Aaiynaa update it is then…. Me will start typing after two hours...😳

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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 8
Geet came back to reality when maan spoke.

M:Geet

Geet looked at him. Maan saw fear in her eyes it broke him apart to see after 16 years still fear in her eyes.

M:I I thought you where dead. geet it feels so
G:I ammm so sorry but whoo are youu

Geet tried to talk with confidence but the fear was to big. She stammered. It hurt maan a lot to see her like that.

M:Geet do you think I am stupid
G:Wo eh I heard that you wanted so land you can have it

Maan closed his eyes for a moment he couldn't bare the fear in her eyes and voice anymore.

M:No geet please You now what I will make it up to you.

Maan composed himself and walked outside. Maan slipped from the stairs and fell. The fall wasn't that bad so he didn't broke anything. Geet heard something and instead of following the noise she went to Ruchi and Nisha's room to check or they where okay. Maan looked up he saw Sara.

S:Listen yeh to kuch bi nahi tah if I wanted you would have broken a least all the bones in your body samijhe

Maan looked at her in pure shock.

M:Excuse me
N:Yeah she is right we are really dangerous so stay away from my mom get it or else
M:Nishu please don't you reconize your old man

Nishu gave him a sarcastic laugh

N:Oh of course dady dear. I remember the kaahtil whom killed my mothers soul.

Maan fellt liken someone had stabbed with a sword in his heart. He fellt like breaking apart to hear his litle girl talk like that about him. That meant she knew everything and she hated him to the core.

M:No please don't say that please nishu. I know I made a mistake but I am here to make it all beter, trust me I love you mother I was just blinded by my revenge.
S:You mean dirty dirty revenge you dirty fellow

Maan fellt ashame. He wished the ground would open and shollow him.

N:How dare you saw you loved my mom.,(The next lines are written by Ruchi, thx sweets)Our mom was once so lively'

But you broke her completely...You filled her life with tears'

But she bravely got over all her fears'I hate you and never can love you.You made her life a hell'Didn't her innocent eyes ring a bell'She lost everything because of you'

I still can't believe it's true'that my dad is such a low cheap digusting jerk. I wish you where really dead.

While are dhamki sara gave Nishu a appaulse.

S:Verry nicely said

Nishu didn't reply she looked at maan with pure hatred. Tears came out of his eyes. He couldn't believe his daughter whom he saw for the second time in his life had utterd those word. She had wished him dead. He knew he deserved it but it hurt him a lot. Ever since he thought he had lost geet and his babies. he had counted a day he thought it would be there b-day. Yes it was not the right date but every **-****-***** he wouldn't go to office. he would say a prayer for his girls and he would by gift for them. he had two rooms full with gifts. Maan fellt like hell had broken on him. If he thought he had lived in pain for the last sixteen years, then that was nothing compered to the pain he was feeling at the moment.

S:Hey what are you still standing here. Will you leave or do you want a sara special

maan didn't utter a word he just walked away.Sara looked at Nishu who had turned around to go upstairs. She put a hand on Nishu's shoulder.

S:You okay

Nishu just nodded.After a while she spoke up.

N:Why did he had to come back I hate him I hope mom is okay.

Sara and Nishu ran to geet's study but she wasn't there. They wanted to go to her room when they heard geet's voice.Geet had gone to the twins room but when she only saw Ruchi she was scared that maybe Nishu had seen Maan.

G:Nishu
N:Yes mom I am in your study

Geet walked in when she saw sara she fellt some kind of relief.

G:Where were you
S:Nishu and I where just searching you. Acteully mom asked me to invite you for tommorow night
G:Theek hai tell you mom will come.

Nishu and sara walked outside.

N:Did you just made that up
S:Yep
N:WHAT. What will you do now
S:Hmmm let's ask Ruchi for help
N:What no Ruchi doesn't now anything
S:Okay then I will tell mom I invited you guys cause I was missing Ruchi so much cause she is always making homework and if she comes to are place she ahs to play with me. I am smart na
N:No you keep it to dhamkis

Sara gave Nishu a deadly glare both the girls giggled.

Geet was feeling really disturbed and scared. maan knew she was alive he would never forgive her for that. Would he make her life a living hell again. What would happen if Ruchi and Nishu came to now the truth, or worse if everyone from HP to her parents. Geet was sitting like a statue when the bell rang. She stood up to open the door. When the door openend geet got a huge shock. he parents and brother togheter with Maan where standing for the door. geet parents hugegd her tied. tears flow out of there eyes. Geet was shocked and scared. Suddenly Brij voices brought everyone back to reality

B:Geet you are still alive where were you all this 16 years how could you stay away from you husband. If anyone finds out what will they think. And we heard you even have daughters now. I am hope you brought them up propably

So this is his plan. back to blackmailing me geet thought.

M:No brij geet wanted to come back but she thought I was no more.
B:What that doesn't make sense
M:Listen someone had saved geet that day and dumped her at the hospital. She survived and so this the kids.But geet some how thought she was geet shinghania and I was Maan shinghania. she tought i was now more.

Maak cooked a entire story after a lot of explaining a (fake) doctor reports Brij finally believed him. The news spread like fire. Everyone was very happy that Geet got her husband back. She desirved all the happiness for all her good work. Geet's family left but promised to come back soon to visit. Nishu was disgusted. and Ruchi was happy.

Precap:Maan and Ruchi meet. Sara and Nishu not happy. Maan and geet talk

Next update: Hmmm 30 people post GHSP video parts but only maneet. Sholly. BTW guys thx for the list of ff's me now going to read to start with shetan ka ghar😃

Precap:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2925491?pn=131

Edited by mel420 - 11 years ago

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Ruchi @ruchs IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me FIRST….

Me sandwiched your update….😆

Hmm the meeting was really emotional…😭

Poor Geet is still has soo much fear from Maan….😭

Awww our dear Sara is a true devil…😆

And Sara + Nishu = OMG!!!!😲

Poor dad… Hope he got some of his brains back after the mighty fall….😉

But me really could feel Maan's pain…😭

After all seeing hatred in your own daughter's eyes whom you met after so many years would have been so painful!!!😭

Aww you used my poem so beautifully… Me sooo happy...😃

Oh God… Maan got her entire family….😲

Grrr…. That stupid Brij…😡

Instead of asking how did his little sis manage all these years, he is asking stupid questions..😡

Pweez Sara and Nishu give him a strong dose….😉

Loved Maan's made up story…😆

But Geet still believes that he is trapping her…

Now nothing can be done as the whole village also knows that Maan is alive…😕

Really loved the update a lott….👏

The story is getting verrry interesting with each update….😳

Eagerly waiting for pre cap..😍

Uff Mel ki demands….

Hmmm me will work on it!!!😳

Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago

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Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona IF-Rockerz Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by ruchs

Okies Aaiynaa update it is then'. Me will start typing after two hours...😳

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