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Originally posted by: jyoti_l

Congrats on the story...

nice start..

maan misses her...n thinks that she died...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...

thx

congrats...
prologue
Maan and Geet are married and Geet is expecting and Maan wants revenge from her...

Originally posted by: spvd

congrats...
prologue
Maan and Geet are married and Geet is expecting and Maan wants revenge from her...

thx deeps

part 1
whoa Maan thinks Geet is no more and Geet's kids think Maan is no more...
ye kya confusion hai when both are alive?
16 years?
OMG...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
whoa Maan thinks Geet is no more and Geet's kids think Maan is no more...
ye kya confusion hai when both are alive?
16 years?
OMG...
cont soon dear...

just wait and watch

Originally posted by: mel420

hai me getting addicted to your empty posts start loving them more then comments no joking guys batha lahge everyone starts sending me empty post nahi geet ke babij I don't want that

Hey Mel Congratz for your new story.
Am sure ull do great job.




Coming to the update.
Am loving the concept. Sounds really promising.
But am little confuse on few parts.
In your prologue it was stated Maaneet married for 1 year. In the first part, Maan is to tell sth to Geet after 3 months(yet to confirm). So they separate after one yr or 3 months?
Daadi saying Geet died 16 years ago.Maan was 20 then and now 36, if Geet was with maan for an year, it shouldn't be 16 years right.. At least 15 o 14 sth like tat.
And the twins are 16 years old as well. I assume they are Maaneet's child. They should be younger right.
The calculation is bit confusing me. Or am confusing myself.

If am wrong, den am running away

awesome prologue and loved 1st chpter pm me after updating

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

I wish I could read you mind it would make a life easier ms blanky😆

Originally posted by: ajenn

Hey Mel Congratz for your new story.
Am sure ull do great job.


thank you sweets love the dancing smiley

Coming to the update.
Am loving the concept. Sounds really promising.
But am little confuse on few parts.
In your prologue it was stated Maaneet married for 1 year. In the first part, Maan is to tell sth to Geet after 3 months(yet to confirm). So they separate after one yr or 3 months? after a year
Daadi saying Geet died 16 years ago.Maan was 20 then and now 36, if Geet was with maan for an year, it shouldn't be 16 years right.. At least 15 o 14 sth like tat.I thought I wrote 37 my bad but you have a sharp observation
And the twins are 16 years old as well. I assume they are Maaneet's child. They should be younger right.
The calculation is bit confusing me. Or am confusing myself. Sorry I can't count hahahah

If am wrong, den am running away
hahhah no don't run away cause I am sure your right hahahhah I should run away hhaahha