Love story mey twist-MN FF update-page 16 - Page 8

perfect ..it was very sweet and cute...

its perfect Ruchi... nothing to be changed... and dialogues are good to...
so stick with it... its going good...

PS: with dialogues a problm cum ..u have to increase the length of update... just a suggestion..

It ws nice update and I m liking ur new writing style.Plz cont soon.Thnx for pm😊

nice update...👏
i like this style more...with more dailogues and less narration...😃
continue soon...

awesome update.

luvd d way u wrote ruchi
feels lyk m reading a romantic novel on mayur
thanks fr pm
p.s-do tell if u write other ffs too on mayur,would luv 2 read dem

Brilliant update di...
Loved the cute fights bw mayur...
But now waiting fr the main twist...
And dii its perfect the way ur writing this ff...I hav no prb with it...whether its in hindi or english...
Cont soon...

cute update

lovely updt ruchi
mayur counters are too good
cont soon
need not to change your writing style
thanks for the pm
Edited by gopi06 - 11 years ago

@ruch 

amazing...👏