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ArHi FF: The Shackles Of Love. Removed. (Page 37)

JalebiJane Goldie
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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
You have a gift for painting such a complete picture. So rich with details. I love that you tell us when the temple bells rang (at 6:50!) and I can picture that moment with with Arnav and Khushi. Indelibly etched in my mind as it is in Khushi's. 
Lovely nuanced work.
Maya

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
ahhh!!! awesome update!!!!! seriously, i missed reading this. i love how the story is going, and i especially love the kiss on the cheek at the end!! how cute and romantic!! sighhh. cant wait till the next update! :D thanks for the pm! 

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Welcome Back ApsHug

Your Pm kind of activated my memory button !!
Thinking about all of this !!

This was an amazing update !!
So Khushi gone for 4 days, Arnav working for Aman ?? well thats like the biggest change you could ever give !!

And the ending !! HayeeBlushing Arnie back in full form !!

Loved the update !
And thanks for the PM

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Posted: 20 June 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Glad to have you back Appy!

Loved how a Lucknowi is helping out at a wedding between a Gujju and Punjabi! :D Unity in diversity and what not~ :P

And Arnav works with Aman now! Wah Bhai! :D

Awww! They both cant seem to get the other out of their mind! Hahaha! Khushi's anticipation for him to make the first move, the disappointment and then her expression when he finally did!! LOVED IT! :)

Thanks for the PM! :) Update soon! :)

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Simply fantastic..
Loved it.

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
welcome back,AppySmile,,,,,such an awesome updateBig smile

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Posted: 21 June 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
wow!! awesumm yaar plss do update fast ...i seriously was spillng my milk all over the table wile reading the last part!!! cant wait!!

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Love this story. Continue soon :) 

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