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ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 (Page 56)

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 10:00pm | IP Logged

awesome!:D

loved it!:D

thnx for the pm!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by insanelycrazy

okayy so yayyieee! 
you have no idea how happy i get seeing your updates! i love your storyline ! its so different,
and as for this update! it was amazing.
i loved the interaction khushi and arnav had with their eyes! it was ADORABLE! its amazing how these two can speak with their eyes. and i loved how their past keeps coming back. i bet arnav must've felt a little bad when he was being rude to her! he was checking her out but his stupid pride! gosh! and khushi goes all nervous when he's around, its amazing how even without seeing him, she can feel his presence! *sigh* i love the way you're building up on the story and their feelings for each other! its amazing!
i loved, how arnav said the NO when asked doesn't khushi look gorgeous in it! awwiee! though he should be kicked in the ass because of that! hahaha. i'm so happy the next scene will be these two only! yayyie. aditi and nani are so sweet! i love how these two are so perceptive! yayyie, they did see the silent exchange of words(or here the lack of it :D) between these two! aditi is so much fun! i just love her!
but my favourite part in the whole update was when arnav was being a jerk about the saree!(call me a sadist), about how he will deduct the money from her paycheck, and khushi was like you have my word on it! i loved khushi's self righteous nature! i hope she throws the money on his face! i can't wait to read what u have in store for them! your story, characterization, plot is so bloody brilliant! love it :D 

Ok I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading your reply. Usually even a couple of words from someone makes me happy. 

Thanks, so much. I am so happy that you are this involved with the picture i am painting. it is probably the biggest compliment I can get.

Btw, I love Arnav's reaction to the sari. Sadist in me always wins! Wink

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
I love the FF, Meera! The concept is very interesting and I love your writing style... Big smile

And thanks for th PM... Wink

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
awesum,cont soon!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged

wonderful!:D

awesome!:D


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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
i loved it! and you're most welcome for your previous comment! hahahaha. 
the way khushi got jealous of lavanya was funny. and i love how they kind of called it a truce and they were friendly, with the usual bickering and teasing! it was adorable. the car scenes were my favourite where khushi called him a brute! he is one! awwiee and he readily agreed to forget what happened too! its amazing how well he knows her! even though these two have not met in the past 10 years, they know each other so well and arnav can predict every action khushi will take! i love the way you portrayed their relation with each other.! Big smile
and i also loved how arnav justified his and lavanya's relation. defensive much? :P but gosh why is he such an idiot?!!! why why why? he just left! he's gonna give her an earful next update na?! i hope she returns the favour and makes him realize what a self involved prude he is! 
this was my favourite update till now :D


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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Truly a wonderful update! Finally arnie is falling for khushi but alas he sees Shyam!!!!the past is haunting again. Poor khushi

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