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ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 (Page 49)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
I loved the update. It was very well written. I can't eait for the next part. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
AGAIN A AWESOME UPDATE ,,,,,,,loved it bhuuut ...thnks for update n pm Smile

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Thanks, everyone. For all you awesome comments. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

I will try and bring you the next chapter very soon!


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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 4:22am | IP Logged
okayy so yayyieee! 
you have no idea how happy i get seeing your updates! i love your storyline ! its so different,
and as for this update! it was amazing.
i loved the interaction khushi and arnav had with their eyes! it was ADORABLE! its amazing how these two can speak with their eyes. and i loved how their past keeps coming back. i bet arnav must've felt a little bad when he was being rude to her! he was checking her out but his stupid pride! gosh! and khushi goes all nervous when he's around, its amazing how even without seeing him, she can feel his presence! *sigh* i love the way you're building up on the story and their feelings for each other! its amazing!
i loved, how arnav said the NO when asked doesn't khushi look gorgeous in it! awwiee! though he should be kicked in the ass because of that! hahaha. i'm so happy the next scene will be these two only! yayyie. aditi and nani are so sweet! i love how these two are so perceptive! yayyie, they did see the silent exchange of words(or here the lack of it :D) between these two! aditi is so much fun! i just love her!
but my favourite part in the whole update was when arnav was being a jerk about the saree!(call me a sadist), about how he will deduct the money from her paycheck, and khushi was like you have my word on it! i loved khushi's self righteous nature! i hope she throws the money on his face! i can't wait to read what u have in store for them! your story, characterization, plot is so bloody brilliant! love it :D 


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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Hahahahaha! So Arnav finally saw her in red and lied she doesnt look good?! Tut tut!

Anyway, good chapter.

One request - could you please provide a direct link to the update in the PMs? :)

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
really nice

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
yes yes!! the red saareee!! thats a constant!!:D
i cant wait to see what happens next!:)

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