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ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 (Page 133)

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
I loved this confession bit. It was beautifully executed. Simple dialogues. Straightforward, to the point. No more beating around the bush.
Lovely update. I certainly would hate to see it end at this.

Yuks

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
that was some confession! lovely well written! actually even i was sad that u might finish it off here! but here i'am DancingPartywhen i read ur continuing to write 3 more chapters and an epilogue.
 
Hug Heart THATS FOR YOU! BTW AFTER THE CONFESSION KUCH Blushing EXPECT KAR SAKTHE HEIN?!
 
 

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Omgg..
Simplyy an amazingg updatEe...

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Nooo...you can't end it in here. Arnav has not understood what love is yet. He needs to know that before the story ends. Please update soon.

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
I dunno how the hell i missed this fab FF. 
It was totally fabulous.

Since this is the first time i am commenting i have to list everything from the first.
1. I loved the idea that Arnav and Khushi were childhood Beatfriends.
2. Shyam And Payal, What an idea girlie and Shyam as good is even more good.
3. Arnav's past and the way it was handled was super fab. A hug from me for that.Hug
4. Khushi being filmy and a wedding planner was a really fab idea.
5. The way Anjali is and how she she is instrumental in bringing them together was real cool.
6. Aditi, wow what a character yaar. She reminded me of myself.
7. I could go on and on but i guess the cherry on the cake for me is the last part where they both accpet their feelings.
8. The way they understand each other and the way Khushi understansds him was real sweet.
9. I have never been so overwhelmed reading an FF like i felt reading yours.
10. I am really glad that i was bored and took up to read it. Yeah nothing happens without the RED SAREE. Ha ha. We are arhians after all.

and you are a Fabulous writer.

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
U carryon.. its nice..

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
loved it 
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Loved this part!!!!

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