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ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 (Page 130)

disha7 Senior Member
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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
awesome update!
would love to read more Smile

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
wow loved it..

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
awww... that was such a cute n heartfelt confession :)
loved it... even though he hasn't worded his feelings yet, which um sure he'll do it soon, his subtle display of emotions n feelings for her was very well written :) ... im looking forward to the 3 parts n epilogue... coz for me its the happy endings that matter :p :) so yes!! im going to wait till u put it up in what form whatsoever in the next few parts :)

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Dont end it! :s :/

I completely love it! Its just so pure and real and just so well written but without the fancy blah blah! 

And this chapter was fantastic! Finally Khushi stopped him from running away and that gave him confidence and voila! YAY! :D

Brilliant transitions in emotions! Great job! :)

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Ok...  you know how 8 oclock star plus has now become a habit.. coming on IF and checking a fate intertwined update is one.. what will i ever do now!!!! awww i am all emotional!!

beautiful work.. amazing alll through and an amazing end :) 

and boy do u know how to retain ur readers.. i will look forward to 17-19... i love this story.. these characters.. this setting.. this rangmunch place.. this aditi.. and shockingly enough this Shyam also :)

Take my advise... go professional!!!! :)

btw.. this is the only FF i have followed from start to end.. :D

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
simply beautiful

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Glad you are not stopping here.  Really looking forward to the next update!

Great work!Big smile

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