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ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 (Page 116)

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Damn!!!!! That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a kiss!!!!! And I think you need a new thread now LOL

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I'm the one who is all flustered and goosebumpy( nope that's not a word :D ) now!!Blushing  I loved it! Arnav should have continued though. Gosh he has self control. It was cute how khushi wanted him not to stop. I absolutely adore how you made khushi cherish the same picture of arnav that he too has kept with him for all these yearsDay Dreaming. I hope he teases khushi with that, and than khushi teases him back and den these 2 get a sense of understanding thru their moti chamdi! These two idiots NEED to know wat they feel for each other. Gosh talk about being thick in the head! Hahaha, they're still cute though. :D :D I love them! And I love anjali, she's so funny with all the teasing and the double meaning words!

The way you described khushi's house is gorgeous! The design is beautiful I want my room like that, all colourful and vibrant. :D

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
hey meera
great parts... :)
aww arnav n khushi are just adorable man!!!
n loved this part where khushi says that happy-endings are what she likes :)
the kiss was hot :p

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Really dont have time for a long comment though i really wanna. Loved it to T. Will write my heart out later. Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
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Awww...I just LOVE Anjali in this...Her double meaning at everything she says when she is around Arnav and Khushi...or the mischievous look and smiles...!! Love it!!

I honestly loveedd Khushi's reply to Arnav's question!! She believes in everything that he lost his belief in long time ago..I just hope that he ends up believing it as well...Happy Ever After!!
Arnav dropping her home was sooo cute!! both lost in their own worlds!!

Hayyyee...Mai Mar jawaan...!! How adorable was that part where he talks about how is attracted to her ever since he saw her six months ago!!! That was just soo damn beautifully put!!
Description of the was soo vibrant...So Khushi!!
Danggg!! he is got hecckaa self control!! He didn't know that Khushi wanted as much as he had desired!! Day Dreaming
hahahaha...Him saying that whether she would have something other than tea...That was just hilarious!!! <33  [lol]
I am sooo glad that he sees the photo of himself...Can't wait to see what Arnav's reaction would be!! :$

P.S. I love the way he says "Anything you want, Happiness" cuz I think that it is just so very sweet <33

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
My god the update was wonderful esp for Khushi happily ever after explanation and hope her view changes Arnav's too!!!
loved the update and i am dying to know more

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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
awesome part..loved it sooo much  !!

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This was nice. Very very nice. Thumbs Up
Can't wait to read more Smile

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