ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th1: Prologue, Ch 1-16 - Page 21

Love it!! Just love it! Can totally imagine khushi being thrown by the enormity of his place. Awesome this is. Continue soon. :-)

very beautifully written! the way u described the RM in kushi's eyes i could actually visualise kushi's eyes popping out in amazement 😆.  Very good, love ur writing style! and u hav an awesome speedy update! keep it up! thanks for the pm!

Oooh! Interesting! 

eagerly waiting for the whole story...

loved ur writing style 👏...

a perfect piece of writing

Great update again. Atleast he isnt mistreating her (yet?)
I wonder if there's more to the story behind Anjali-Payal-Shyam

Im sure Anjali wont react well to seeing Khushi.
Or maybe, surprisingly enough to Arnav, she will react very well

Yuks

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Great update again. Atleast he isnt mistreating her (yet?)
I wonder if there's more to the story behind Anjali-Payal-Shyam

Im sure Anjali wont react well to seeing Khushi.
Or maybe, surprisingly enough to Arnav, she will react very well

Yuks

👏👏  very well written and you've left us panting for more. Soon please? :-)

You really have a flow to write, and Arnav needs to get his wits right. OOO! I FEEL THE TENSION, loving it , the tension is a great add up to the whole chapter. Especially how he feels about her. Fantastic :D