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SS: PAYING FOR HIS DEEDS very imp note @ page 48 (Page 36)

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Big smilea big thanx to everyone who commentedClap

me editing my buddy list...those who commented in my last 3 updates dont need to worry...and rest who didnt would be deleted from my buddy list...

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
*HUH* thankGod Wink

Update soon!  Smile

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
well i hav edited my buddy list n if i hav mistakely deleted u then sorry...
if u r a regular follower of my SS then i believe dat u wont hesitate to send me a buddy request...if u want pm...Big smile
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
me updating gals...Wink
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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 12:18am | IP Logged
                     Part-16

It was the next day...everyone were infront of DM busy praying for each others happiness n Prosperity...Anjali turned towards Khusi n asked...

Anjali :Khusi ji aaj toh aap k doctor dost...ohh sorry dusman aarahe hein na...wese aaplogo in ki itne saalon ki dusmani hein toh aapko unki pasand na pasand k baare mein kuch toh idea hoga na...

Khusi :ya ya di...woh yeda hein aur US mein pala bada hein but he is normal...m sure ki usse ladkiyan hi pasand hongi...m quite sure...

Payal :aare meri pagal behen...di khane k baare mein pooch rahi thi...kavi toh logic lagaya kar...

Khusi :oh oh...ya usse ek hi chiz hein jo sabse jyaada pasand hein...Khusi k dimaag ka bharta...its his fav food u know...

Kartik :firse nahi ha beta...aap vi kamaal karti hein..woh waahaa se aarahe aap k liye...

khusi :ya ya woh aapki itni care karta hein...aap thik se baat karo...wagera wagera...right

Kartik :right

Khusi :pata hein di...agar bhai ka bas chalta toh woh toh meri shaadi hi karwadete uss pagal se...he is just perfect for me...in BHAI's opinion(she said the last few lines to make Arnav hear dat it was kartik's opinion not her) par kya hein na...mein thodi intelligent hoon so mene iss bare mein bhai ko saaf inkar kardiya...u mein yesi hoon woh vi mere jesa hein..toh i thought kyun usse shadi karkr aapne hone wle baccho ko pagal banau...


well Arnav didnt liked it a bit dat HIS khusi had even thought of making babie wid that man...he had already started hating dis yet to know man...irritation was fully visibe in his face which khusi noted it...so to calm him a bit she spoke...

Khusi :agar woh gadhe duniya ka aakhri man vi huwa na...tab vi mein uss ullo ki doom se shadi na karu...

well she said dat line specially to calm Arnav but someone else got irritated by thatLOL


A tall fair n handsome Arman Mallik was there listening to all his TARRIFF from 
khusi's mouth from RM's door...

Armaan :wah...bhai chuhiya...lagta he accident ka bohot vari asar pada hein tere sir pe..issiliye toh yeshi behki behki baatein kar rahi hein...

Kartik :Armaan...how r u dude...Smile...itni jaldi kese tumhari flight toh shaam ki thi na...

Armaan :kya hein na bro itne din hogaye the non veg khaye...toh raha nahi jaraha tha...
well hi everyone mein Armaan Mallik hun wohi jiski aapki khusi itni tarriff karrahi thi...pese se doctor hun..dil ka bada aacha huin..aur khusi aur mein bachpan k dusmaan hein...LOL

Naani :aapka swaagat hein beta..Raizada pariwar mein...

wid that Armaan went forward to touch the foot of oldies...said hi to anji..Arnav n Aakash..side hugged payal n finelly turned toward khusi who was behaving as if she doesnt know him...

he pulled khusi for a big bear hug...(Arnav was burning wid angerAngry  HOW DARE THIS GUY TO TOUCH MY KHUSI)

Armaan :i missed u like hell...chuhiya...

Khusi :stop calling me dat...i dont like it...n fo ur kind info my name is Khusi Singhania...lagta hein teri na yaadash kamjor hogayi hein...

the elders left the youngers to talk n left the hall
well all the members below 30 were present their n were talking about their respective works.

Armaan :chuhiya...i cant believe...u r getting married...

Khusi :n i cant believe ki tujhe aapni jaan ki koi parwa nahi...issiliye MUJE BAAR BAAR USSI NAAM SE BULA RAHA HEIN JO MUJHE NAHI PASANDAngry

Armaan :toh ussme meri kya galti hein...ye naam tere personality se itna milta hein k mujhsey bardast hi nahi hota...chahe jitna control karu fisal hi jata hein...

Khusi :what rubbish...

Armaan :na..not rubbish...CHUHIYA...dekh bada simple sa funda hein..tere din ka more than 50% time toh khane mein hi chala jata hei...teri sakal vi bohot hi matching hei...m tu chalti aur bolti vi ussi tarha hein...fast n chirpy...

everyone burst out laughing...Arnav too
Khusi :hoohShocked...kya kaha tune...

Armaan :mene kya kaha...CHUHUYALOL

kHUSI : STOP IT AMMY WARNA...

Armaan :warna kya karegi...

Khusi :(holding the near by vase in her hand) warna iss vase se esi jaga par marungi k tere baache hone k chance kam hojayenge...LOL

Anjali gasped wid that dailogue of khusi n Armaan gasped...

Armaan :ji thik hein chandi maa..aap woh vase niche rakh dijiye...
woh mein tujhse kuch poochne wala tha..chuh...upps sorry

Armaan ran for his future children's sake and an angry Khusi chased him


well that day ended wid the family witnessing the funny nok-jhok n fights betn Armaan n khusi...Arnav sometin=me getting jealous n sometimes laughing at Armaan's commentary n khusi's reactionLOLBig smile









so how was this update...it was a b it longer one...he he hope u all liked it...Big smile me eagerly waiting to read ur lovely comments so dont delay to comment beautifull peopleEmbarrassedSmile




Edited by Rocxy - 17 May 2012 at 12:49am

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
cute update
loved it

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 1:13am | IP Logged
superb update...
i like armaan's character...

thanks 4  d pm

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