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SS: PAYING FOR HIS DEEDS very imp note @ page 48 (Page 33)

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zafi

fantastic update.Star
Loved it. Aww Khushi gave him proper hug and he kissed her forehead. How sweet.
How awesome was that lunch for Arhi.
Looking forward to the next part.
Please continue soon.
Thanks.Big smile



thanx for liking n for ur sweet comment ...Big smile

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jangotrasonia

arnav toh kabse tadap raha tha sirf touch karne ke liye.Tongue lekin khushi toh usse bhi do kadam aage nikleLOL



ha ha u r rite...khusi will be really fast forward in my ss...hehe just wait n read hehe...LOLWink
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
me updating jaanis...thanx to all those who liked n commented...TongueSmile
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
                                                         Part-15


It has been like a week that Arhi were meeting regularly n sharing their precious time wid each other...now khusi was madly in love wid the irresistable ASR...but she hadnt showed it to him...she would at a times show her love n concern towards him but not fully...LOL...Arnav was just loving the ways she enjoyed herself when she was around him...he was getting everything that he had craved for...her sweet smile...her senseless yet sensefull non stop bak bak...her childish+crazy antics...everything...now he was planning to hav a proper date wid his lady love...Embarrassed


it was noon time...everyone were at hall enjoying the pakoras made by Khusi...and Payal...

Anjali :sach khusi ji aap khana kamal ka bana ti hein...

Khusi :thank u...ya i love cooking food...

Kartik :ya she loves cooking food n u all kno what her dream is????

Arnav listened it full attentively...

Kartik :she wants to become a bawarchi...not a chef...a bawarchi...

Khusi :ooh come on bhai...Bawarchi is a real job i mean...tapti garmi me bade se patile k samne kaam karna its just so interesting...and real...u kno i love struggling...

Kartik :its kadhai...not patila...aapko thik se bartan k naam vi nahi aate n aap kaam karengi as a bawarchi..

Khusi :toh kya hume khana banana toh aata he na...n dont under estimate bawarchis ok warna mein babuji ko sab batadungi...fir buaji se aapko kaun bachayega huh...BABUWA...LOL

kartik :thik he...humari chugalkhor behen aap jiti hum hare...

Khusi :dats better...
           (turning towards a smiling Anji she spoke...)
          pata he..Anjali di...i always wanted a dhaba wid in my self where i alone would work n serve...all decorated in desi style...jaha sab log pure hindi mein baat kare...

Kartik :taki aapko translater ki jarurat pade...

Kartik n payal laughed wid dat...

Khusi :enough ha jiji...aap humari hone wale sasural walon k samne toh insult mat kijiye..Embarrassed.n dont laugh hamari hindi bohot aachi he aapse vi kahi jyaada...kyun Anjali di..

Anjali :bilkul...

Maami :phati...matbal khusi..tum US mein hi study karerahi ho???uhai pali badi hau toh kese...???
(nani ji inturupted befo manorama culd complete )

Naani :aapki hindi itni aachi he...yehai puchatwali thi Manorama...Kahe???hum thik puche na Manorama..

Maami :yesh..yesh..same to same...

Khusi :bas desh chahe aangreji tha but dil toh hindustaani tha na...n hum aakele thodi hi the...Bhai the... DJ thi...Malik uncle ki family thi...

Aakash :Dj???kaun..?

Khusi :hamari dai jaan...but aab wo humare bich nahi hein...2 saal pehle woh vi...Ouch

Aakash :woh sorry...

Khusi :its ok..

Anjali :aur Maliks...

Kartik :woh humare Family friend aur neighbour hein...wese ek Malik ko aap jald hi milne wale vi hein...

Khusi :dont say bhai ki Ammy aarahe...

Kartik :ya...woh...

Khusi :no...no...no kyun bhai..

Kartik :stop overreacting khusi...jese hi usse pata chala ki tumhara accident hogaya hein...

Khusi :toh mera sir khane k liye aane wala heii...

well kartik found it more easy to dea lwid the confused Raizada then to his crack sis...LOL

Kartik :woh Ammy Armaan he...Malik uncle ka beta...Khusi ka childhood fren...

Khusi :dusmaan kahiye bhai...

Kartik :woh dun mind ha aap log toh jaante hi hein humari behen kis darje ki pagal hei...Arman toh sidha sadha doctor hai and...

Khusi : hoooh...bhai aapne ushhh gadhe ko sidha sadha bola...Shocked

Payal :khusi...bhai ne tujhe pagal vi kaha...

Everyone brust laughing...








so this update ends wid a hint of reason dathow a US gal Khusi was in India as a daughter of a bawarchi n why she was all desi types...(as she loves India...n she is a bit crazy as wellLOL) so in another update u all will see a new entry of Armaan Malik andmuch more fun n crazy fights betn him n Khusi...


i had planned to give a long update but couldnt as the load shedding has started so ext time..Ouch


NOTE:I will be editing my block tommorrw guys so please do leave ur comment n ur likes if u want to get future pm...Tongue


love ya all...


Edited by Rocxy - 16 May 2012 at 10:57pm

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Awesome update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
I loved it.
So sweet and cute.
Looking forward to the next update and the new entry.
Continue soon.
Thanks.Big smile

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
nice update...

thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged

lovely update

continue soon

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
loved it

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