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                                           Part-13



Arnav had unwillingly gone to office...payal was off to some sort of pooja shoping...Aakash was out of town for some important meeting and Kartik was out for some meeting wid his foreign clint...and maami ji was put to buuty parlour...baki bache Anjali ji...naani ji...khusi ji...HP ji n OP ji...

Among them as well Anjali was draging naani ji out of RM...

Naani ;arre Anjali bitiya...hame bataiyye toh sahi aap hume yun aachanak kaha lejawat rahe...khusi bitiya aakeli rahi ghar ma...

Anjali :issiliye toh naani hum bahar ja rahe hei...

Naani :hum kuch samjhe nahi...aur hum ko khusi bitiya ko toh batadena chahiye tha na...

Anjali :offf ho naani hum aapko car mein sab kuch batate hein aap bethiye toh sahi...

inside the car...

Naani :aab bataiye ki baat ka he..

Anjali :woh kya he na naani chote lunch k liye ghar aarahe hein...

Naani :kaaa...aur aap hum ko bahar le aayi aab khusi bitiya...akkeeellleee...oohh oohh oohh...toh yi baat he...

Anjali :ha ha ha yahi baat he...finally love birds ko kuch time aakele mein milega...

Naani :bhai wah bitiya aap toh bahut hosiyar hogayi hein...

Anjali pulled her imaginary color...Tongue

Anjali :woh kya hei na naani...jo kuch vi chote aur khusi ji k jindagi mein huwa...uske liye kahi na kahi jimmedar hum vi hein...(naani put her hand on anji shoulder...)issiliye hum ye haar mumkin se mumkin kosish karenge ki chote aur khusi ji jaldi se paas aajaye...

Naani :hum vi yehai chahat hein bitiya...


Raizada Mansion


Arnav entered the mansion...

Arnav :di...di...

khusi was comind down the stairs...

Khusi :woh...woh...di aur nani ji bahar gayi hein...avi...avi...

Arnav :ohh...par mujhe toh unhone kaha tha ki woh ghar mein hi hongi...ok...

khusi :aapko kuch kaam tha...

Arnav :nahi kuch khaas nahi...mein bas lunch k liye ghar aaya tha...

khusi :ooh...aap bethiye hum laga dete hein...Embarrassed

Arnav :nahi...no need...mein HP se keh dunga...tum betho...

khusi :nahi...aap bethiye...hum kr lenge...


both went towards the dinning table...and khusi started seving freshly prepared pasta..

Khusi :lagta hei...Anjali ji avi bana kar gayi...garam hein...

Arnav :tum ne kuch khaya...LOL

khusi :ummm nahi...hum kha lenge aap khayiye...

Arnav :nahi...tum vi betho...1:30 ho chuka he...aur tumhare...2 baje k medicine lene se pehle hi tumhe naasta kar lena hoga...so u sit...

khusi had butterflies...flying inside her tummy after hearing the concerned words...

Khusi :i guess u r right...Blushing

Arnav :tumhari...tabiyat kasi hein...

khusi :ji pehle se kafi behtar hei...

Arnav :kya tumhe...humare...ummm...bare mein...sab kuch...(well the intelligent ASR asked this ques to see the reaction of his love...LOL)

and then he got what he wanted...

Khusi :(wid a slight blush spoke...)umm ji...i mean bhai n jiji ne kal bataya...

wid a slight signature smirk and confident he spoke

Arnav :well i know u must be feeling a bit awkward about ll ths as u dont remember...but i assure u dat we wont behave like being in a relationship untill u feel ok wid it...

khusi :no no i m not feelin awkward its just dat...ki...i hav forgotten really imp part of my life...

Arnav wid lots of courage tried to touch her hand...and as soon as the skin cane in contact betn them Khusi ji chocked her pasta...

Arnav:(started pattig her back...)khusi...khusi...u alright...ye lo paani pilo...

Khusi :ya m fine...woh i got...dat touch...

then ASR felt really awkward...

Arnav :oh...m sorry...

Khusi :no no dont be...(and then khusi held HIS HAND)i m sory...it must be really difficult for u to tackle a wuld be wife who has forgotten all the love and care u gave...I M SORRY

ARNAV :(cupping her face...)NO KHUSI...BELIVE ME I M NOT A BIT UNHAPPY...as long as i get to make some more new memories wid u...
they were having a cute eye lock...soon to be disturbed by OP

OP :woh khusi ji...woh kartik bhaiya ka phone he...

Khusi :(takin the phone) i bhai...ji mein dawai lene hi wali thi...ji mein bilkul nahi bhooli...ok bhai mai le lungi...aap jaldi se aapna kam khatam karo n aajaoo...ook bhai...u too take care luv u(she said the last two word lookin towards Arnav) and was greeted by a sweet smile...

khusi(well Arnav is really caring + sweet + lovely +a bit sexy...well m loving it hehe)


 

wid dis this chapter enda wid a new sweet n lovely understanding developed betn Arhi n for that A huge thanx to Anjali...


DO LEAVE UR SWEET COMMENTS AND PLEASE DO LIKE...OK DEARIES...SmileLOLWinkTongue


Edited by Rocxy - 14 May 2012 at 5:46am

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yaeeh me first...it was awsuuum dear...nice to see them interacting...cant wait for the next part n thnx 4da pm dear...


Edited by kitzdoll - 14 May 2012 at 6:30am

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Khushi is full impressed with arnav ha. I'm waiting for their marriage to happen with all rituals and both families. Please do cont soon. Thanks for pm. 

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
update was really a beutiful one!!  Smile

Love dreading it! Thankyu fr the beutiful update!  Smile

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
Loved it.
Aww that was cute and sweet.
Thanks.Big smile

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