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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Thanx to all d hunnies who liked n commented but me not satisfied wid the no of likes n commentsUnhappy i had sent pm to more than 60 people but still so less response Cry...

imupdating now but i will take tym for my nxt update as my exams are from tomorrow...and later also i will onlyupdate if i will get a satisfactory update...Ouch Ermm

Edited by Rocxy - 28 April 2012 at 1:15am

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged

                                              Part-11




Arnav decided to take a last look at Khusi before starting his new mission...there were lots of things going in his mind...In a way he was very happy dat he was getting a new chance to payfor his deeds and in other way he was going to do sumthing dat he hates the most...he will hav to spesk lies...dont know how many...Anjali's words were ringing in his head n Kartiks as well...


Arnav:will they forgive me if they found out dat what i hav done to u...im sure they wont...neither will you...
Khusi i too hate lies but now i m in such condition dat there is no othr option for me...n i just can't afford to loose u...i just can't imagine my life widout you...so i hav decided dat...after weboth will b together u will be the first person whom i wll tell the whole truthand then we will tell it to the rest...OK..(he kissed her hand which he was holding for long...)you take rest n get fully fit...love you...(he kissed her forehead n left from there...)

It was around 1 am in the morning dat khusi wokeup wid a shock...she had a nightmare ofsomeone pulling her from the terrace n a loud voice filled in pain saying her name...she was having a long breathes...Kartik who was sleebin in dsofa near by khusi's bed woke up n ran towards her...


Kartik: khusi...kya...huwa beta...bura sapnadekha kya...

Khusi: ha bhai...(trying to breathe...)

kartik handede her a glass of water...
Kartik :ye lopani pii lo...

Khusi dranked the whole glass in one go...

Khusi :kesa ajeeb sa sapna tha bhai...thank god aap yehi...
(in a surprised tone) bhai aap yaha kya kar rahe he...

Kartik :woh aap ki tabiyat...

Khusi :bhai aap vi na aap ko yaha sofe mein sone ki kya jarurat thiaagar hume kuch chahiye hoga toh hum aapkobulaletena...

Kartik :ha ha lekin humaapkejaagne ka intajar vi kar rahe the...

Khusi : raat k 1 baje...LOL 
 
Kartik :bohot jaruri baat karni thi na...

Khusi :baat toh mujhey vi karni thi aapse...iss ek saal kebare me...bhai aur kuch toh pata nahi but humPayaljiji k Shaadi vi bhool gaye ye hume bilkool vi aacha nahi laga...

Kartik..: hmmmUnhappy 
 
Khusi :aap toh yese nakhoosh horahe hein,,,jese aapne vi misskardi...kahi bhai...hum koi aurshaadi v toh nahi bhule...

Kartik looked at her in amugement...Shocked 

Khusi :kahi aap ne vi...

Kartik :ji nahi...

Khusi :THANK GODLOL

kARTIK :(LIGHTLY hittin her head...)dramebaaz...

Khusi :ouch...

kartik...panicking...:jor se lagi kya...sorry beta...doctor ko bulau...

Khusi(nodding her head in yes...) nahi laagi...

Kartik :(bringing her to a side hug...)now listen to me carefully khusi...
khusi immediately become attentive...

Kartik :beta...aap ekaur imp baat bhool chuki hein...jo aap ki jindagi ki sabse impaur special baat thi...

Khusi :hamari...jindagi ki???Confused 
kya bhai???

Kartik :aapka rista pakka ho chuka hei...

Khusi(gasped) :KYA...KAB KESE... KISKE SAATH...

Kartik :(calmly...) Arnav k sath...

n then KHusi remembered howhe reacted when she said dat she doesnt know him...(she was feeling very awkward...Ermm LOL)






so gals...do comment to tellme how was it...n pleaselike n read the note above the update... 


Edited by Rocxy - 28 April 2012 at 1:52am

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
bechari khushiLOL. kya shock laga

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 2:13am | IP Logged
kya shock for khushi?nice dear

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
awww poor khhusi
shock laga. ...
arnav guilt is unbearable

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 2:43am | IP Logged
so nice update
poor arhi 
continue soon

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
great update...poor arnav he feel guilt for kushi after causing her pain...thanks for pm

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love it nice twists and turns

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