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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
loved it...
awesome update..
read all parts in one goo...
plzz add me to ur pm list...

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 1:36am | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:03am | IP Logged
hey me updating part 9.....Big smile
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
                                             Part-9


The tension was rising up...everyone were all messed up thinking what possibly had happened to their khusi...
Kartik had tear in his eyes...where was his baby sister...what had happen to her??
Arnav was just going to phone the police that they heard a known voice..
all turned towards the source of the voice n saw their...khusi...stending near the ladder  all in tears...an air of relief touched everyone's face...

Arnav :khusi...

Khusi(still crying...) ran towards them...

Arnav was hopind dat she would come n hug him but to his dismay...khusi ran passed him n hugged Kartik...


Arnav was just not happy wid dat...then he was like OK she is meeting her brother after so long...ya ya tumhe mein raat ko sabak sikhaunga...Embarrassed

Kartik : aap thik toh hein na???aap itni der tak kaha thi???aap janti hein hum sab pe kya biit rahi thi...
Beta..don't do dat again...khusi...beta...kya...huwa...aap itna kyun ro rahi hein...

Payal tooo came towards them n tarted consoling scared looking khusi...

Payal :its ok khusi...aab sab...thk he...
the rest members were just relieved and haapy seeing khusi at her feets...

n then finnally khusi spoke...
Khusi :bhai...aap...kaha...the...aap jante hein...hum kitna daar gaye they...aap hamare paas yun nahi the...aur...jiji...kyun...

Kartik started to justify himself...

Kartik :hume ek jaruri meeting pe jana pada issiliye..beta warna hum nahi jaate na...

khusi was still not satisfied...

Khusi...fir v...

AND THERE COMES THE SHOCK...

Khusi :aap kyu gaye bhai...aur...aur...hum kaha hein...aur jiji...kese...shaadi...aur...ye sab ...ye sab kon hein...aur hum INDIA kab aaye...aur...ye ghau...ye chot...humara...accident huwa tha kya...hume...kuch...yaad kuun nahi aaraha...

Everyone were just dumbstrucked...after what they heard...

Anjali was the first to recover from the shock...
Anjali :ye aap kya keh raho hein khusi ji...aap...ye
kya aap hume nahi...

Khusi :aap...(turning towards kartik who was too in shock) bhai...ye kon hein...

Anjali gasped hearing dat...
n Arnav like a mad man started shaling khusi...
Arnav :ENOUGH KHUSI...STOP THIS NON SENSE...BAS... AAB BOHOT HOGAYA...

KaRTIK:aRNAV LEAVE HER KYA KLAR RAHE HO...USKI TAABIYAT THIK NAHI HE...

KHUSI: who d heck are you...n dont u dare touch me...

Bhai...whats happening...hum kaha he...aur ye sab mujhse kyu pooch rahe he...mein toh inn sab ko jaanti tak nahi...bhai...i m geting mad...

n Khusi collasped...

Arnav was still in shock hearing to khusi...

Aakash immediately called the doctor... n Payal ran to hold khusi...

Doctor had arrived n was now checking Khusi after hearing out what had happened...


Doctor:dekhiye..Mrs Raizada ko sar pe chot aayi thi...which was very complicated...n now after hearing what happened i think...she had lost her memory...

Arnav (still very angryAngry):NO...ITS NOT POSSIBLE SHE CAN'T FORGET ME...

Kartik :doctor...but she recognised me...

Doctor :let me complete Mr.Singhania...Its the case of selective memory loss...in which a patient forget only some part of their life...specially those..in which they have stressed alot...or were most of the time emotional...

Arnav :WHEN...WHEN THE HELL WILL SHE REMEMBER...

Doctor :tit depends on the patients brain...some take 3-4 month to remember...some years...n some never remembers anything...

Arnav was just blank...Ouch

Anjali started crying hearing it...holding dumb Arnav in her arms...


SO GALS SHOCKED OR NOT???PLEASE TELL ME HOW WAS IT OK...DO COMMENT HUNNEYStarLOLBig smile





Edited by Rocxy - 23 April 2012 at 3:38am

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Oh my! khushi forgot abt arnav and his family... hope all will well! please update soon!

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Shocked Poor Arnav. But its good for Khushi to forget that creep. Now Nannav can make her fall in love with him all over again Embarrassed

Update soon !! Thanks for the PM Hug

Edited by Monu_Deewani - 23 April 2012 at 3:53am

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
OMG khushi forgot arnav
continue soon its interesting

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Khushi has memory loss...
Nice update...
Thanks 4 d pm

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