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Ovi_Tanni IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Mindblowing endingSmile

thank you so much fr writting a beautifull ff..

I really enjoyed tot this ff..

Waiting to read its sequel parts and expecting many many arshi ff frm u...

Thank you so much 4 pm Smile

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Arya1991 Senior Member
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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asrcraze

                               
...

He would never stop being surprised by her. She was so unpredictable.

His Wife ! His beautiful, silly, spirited, innocent wife !

From the moment he had met her, he had learnt so much about life. God knows, she had lectured from their first meeting.

...

He got into bed beside her and took her sleeping form in his arms. Instinctively, she snuggled closer.

He kissed her temple as he said, "I love you".

Kushi smiled in her sleep.

...


So cute. And romantic. LOL

Yet completely fitting into the ASR in Arnav.
I like how you've put across almost all the nuances that Arnav Singh Raizada's character even implies. Beautiful! Clap

Well written!

~Arya~

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jtammareddy Senior Member
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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
A perfect ending. Thanks for the pm.

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luvolaf Senior Member
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Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
you are a gud story teller...The way u narrates the story make every scene come alive before our eyes and thnaks for the pm

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Livetoparty Senior Member
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Posts: 748

Posted: 29 April 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
happily ever after!!!!! It was a treat to read your FF...Amazing work!!!!! ALL the BEST for your other work

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multifaceted Goldie
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Wow this was a beautiful update..a perfect ending...I hope you start with the sequel soon...would love to read that..thank for the PM

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s2612 Senior Member
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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged
all is well...she has forgiven and he casually declares his love...loved it!!

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Posted: 30 April 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATES...
ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL STORY CUMS TO AN END...
BT ITS THE BEGINNING FOR THEM...

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