Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArHi FF - Every heart desires: Ch 23 link, Page 1 (Page 16)

illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uamaz

Beautifully wriiten ... I am glad Khushi has taken the stance she has and I also want Arnav to hurt as much as he has hurt Khushi because we have not seen that yet ... 



Thanks a lott for liking the chapter :)
Yes, Khushi will not be weak, at least not in my FF! That much I promise :)
Arnav will definitely repent and hurt!

illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

Keh diya na...bas keh diya - Amitabh Bachchan, numerous times from K3G and Jaya Bachchan, once and the most powerful time, from K3G. :)

Great update. Arnav needs this and I am so glad that finally Khushi compared both of their's similar situation but contrasting reactions. Good job.

And finally Karan-Anjali story seems to be moving forward... :)

Hey Rae, 

You are absolutely right about the dialogue and how Jayaji's version of the dialogue came out so much stronger!

Thanks  a lot for liking the update, esp Khushi's reactions :)

Bahaha, yes, the two A/K couples :P
illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by wildandsweet

loved it
loved how Karan was the one to help Di and not Arnav.
can't believe how Arnav was still so mean to Khushi
i hope she makes him beg for forgiveness

Glad you liked it! Thanks a lottt for the comment :)
Yayyy for liking Karan instead of Arnav with Anjali :)

Khushi will def make him pay, dont worry :)
arshilover3 Groupbie
arshilover3
arshilover3

Joined: 28 February 2012
Posts: 171

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the explanation!! It made PERFECT sense!!

I'm touched about your 'Wall of Inspiration', sounds brilliant!!
You are doing a wonderful job with your writings!! IT'S MIND-BLOWING!!

Please continue soon!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

illusiveworld

prettyasjen IF-Sizzlerz
prettyasjen
prettyasjen

Joined: 23 August 2005
Posts: 16631

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome update, update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

illusiveworld

illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -s.a.n.a-

I am really happy that you decided to update... really very very happy :) Almost every other day i look forward to your update... but i don't mind waiting.. it sort of increases my enthusiasm to read your ff more :)

Coming to the chapter.. as usual its another mind-blowing chapter.. :) I am really starting to love your long updates :) Although I love each and every word of your chapters.. but i loved some lines a lot.. 
The line about the hearts meeting when Arnav was entering into Shantivan and Khushi leaving.. was terrific.. Cant really quote it here... This is your effort against the recent plagiarism i suppose and I am totally with you about it... I hope you understood which line I am indicating... Those words could totally explain Arnav and Khushi's relationship on a whole...

I have to admit.. though the ff is about Arhi.. but I am starting to love Karan and i wish to see more.. and I wish *with fingers crossed* that soon sparks start flying between Anjali and Karan... <3 *fingers crossed* :D But i loved their convo immensely... Feels really sad for Anjali but I knew she would recover soon

Also Arnav and Khushi's monologue with Ma.. mind blowing.. The end almost teared me up.. I do feel that Khushi's actions are justified but I feel really bad for our Arnav... Though I know he would somehow make it up to her.. hopefully that is... 

This chapter surely goes into my fav chapter list of your ff... (which includes almost all the chapters.. ha ha :D) Just realised this comment has become really long.. my random blabbering.. silly me.. anyways.. ill end it soon.. Lovely chapter as always.. and will be looking forward to the next chapter as always :D

You changed your user ID! For a moment, I got scared but then I realized you are SweetyMJHT XD

Oh my my, I'm so sorry I haven't updated in so long and you are waiting all this time! It's just that I had exams going on. But I can see you are understanding, so thank you for that :)

I am actually really really happy that you picked up on that very small scene when their heartbeats meet and hurt as they separate. I wanted to show, without words, that they are made for each other & nothing can change that.

& yeh, sorry for not being able to copy - it's the whole plagiarism issue, like you said!

Wrt Karan & Anjali, I wanted to show contrasting their relationship (friendship) is to ArHi's because of presence of communication, which evidently lacks b/w Arnav & Khushi. Glad you like Karan's character. He's one of my fav too :)

Thank you for realizing Arnav's dilemma too. He is a broken man and well, he's trying. When I wrote both of their convos with Ma, I cried too... it definitely was emotional!

Awww, you are tooo sweet with your compliments! Really honestly!

Please do NOT call yourself silly for your long comments. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE reading them! No liess. They make me happy :)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

-s.a.n.a-

illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by medha16

i loved this update!so much happening here...khushis words brought tears in my eyes!i loved karans contradicting side...on one hand he cant help but scorn arnav n amnjali coz of his sisters shattered life...n then he cant help but guide anjali n be a good companion...his intrinsic goodness was very well established...n arnav really needed to hear all that from khushi...he HAS to understand that khushi n anjali r NOT an either/or choice...they have to coexist n this makes relations n life dynamic...i simply loved this update!!!

Thank youuu so much for liking the chapter!!
Yes, the long update surely has lots going on between everyone!

With regards to Karan's contradicting actions, I've made a note: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2924188&PID=55872537&#55872537

Nonetheless, glad you liked his role :)
I can tell you would agree with my note :)

Yes, Arnav really needs some things laid out for him and that's exactly what Khushi is doing!

So glad you liked the update!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

medha16

illusiveworld Goldie
illusiveworld
illusiveworld

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 1304

Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Drishti-

My heart aches for both of them .. truly does! Contrary to what most people think about Arnav telling her to stay back for Di, i thought he said purposely, in the beginning. As in, earlier in the chapter, he felt his mom tell him to shower her with love.. but he knew that he had wronged her, he knew she wouldn't stay back for him, so he asks her to stay back for his Di...to make sure she actually does stay back? Does that make sense or am i reading too much into everything? :P Beautiful chapter Rachitaaa! more later :P

P.S. I've told you too many times already, but i'm saying it again.. your mom is TOO cool!! And yess thank youuu Anuuu! And thank you for the dedication :D

Drishti, this is WHY you are my best buddy <3
You understand me without me having to explain myself. Honestly, sometimes I fear you can read my mind :P

You make more sense than anything else in my life at the moment :P

LMAO! Yes, power to mothers & Anu :D

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
to support our sweet heart rida(-Heart-Hacker-)

Author: sweetie_angel   Replies: 3   Views: 2203

sweetie_angel 3 2203 05 July 2011 at 12:17pm by fri42911
AR OS Love Blossoms PAGE 3 || Note PAGE 7

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: angelic_angel   Replies: 58   Views: 38408

angelic_angel 58 38408 12 May 2011 at 11:08am by swamii92
A Walk On The Beach..-AR[New Page Link: Page 150]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: Munchkin.   Replies: 1193   Views: 175948

Munchkin. 1193 175948 10 April 2011 at 8:10am by Riddss
ARk ~heart~mohabbat~heart~ New FF

2

Author: jiya77   Replies: 14   Views: 5940

jiya77 14 5940 01 September 2009 at 2:15am by disco_diva
AR's Heart 2 Heart in Lonavila (Prt 5 ad)

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: Mariam1986   Replies: 75   Views: 16117

Mariam1986 75 16117 29 May 2008 at 4:42pm by -Cherry-

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index