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ArHi FF - Every heart desires: Ch 23 link, Page 1 (Page 15)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zainabdeen

woow!! best part so far! luved it to bitss...
by the way karan's attitude friendly attitude towards anjali is changing? i dont knw if im right, bt does karan love her? hehe i dont knw, its just a gues, bt i hope so, coz anjali will be able to lead a new life.
i feel so sorry for khushi, she had gone through so much pain her life... lol im talking as if its real story, bt u du make this story like real-life. all credits goes to you. u work is aewsum man... 
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sooonn... :) :) :)

Thanks a lottt! So glad you liked it :)
Bahaha, Karan sure is friendly towards Anjali but love might be too strong of a word to use at the moment. Let's see what's in store for us :)

I feel bad for Khushi too :(
I am just glad I could make it realistic and the readers can conenct with the story. That just makes my heart jump with joy, truly :)

I will update very soon :)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikita_88

Congrats on the new thread!!!

This chapter was amazing, loved the way Khushi tore into Arnav, it was about time. 
Karan and Anjali's friendship was a treat to read!

Great update! 

Oh I should have mentioned this with the new chapter. Not a new thread :$
It's just that due to recent plagiarism issue, I've decide to make a new thread for each chapter so I can enable to No Copy watermark :)

Nonetheless, Thanks a lottt for liking the chapter :)

Glad that you liked both relationships I portrayed and the evident contrasts!
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gunjan.ria

I loved dis update! N spcly khushi's watevr said to arnav..evry single word is true n correct..aftr dis part i'v really started hating him in dis story..he's so insensitive..he stayed away frm her bt ddnt bother to kip himslf updated abt her cndition..nly wen anjali threatened him did he rushed bak home to tok to her..so khushi's ryt abt him..his world starts n ends wid his di..he dsnt cre abt othrs..evn aftr so much he xpcts khushi to stay bak 4 his di..wud he hv done d same had he been in her place??..i guess we knw d ans..bt khushi is khushi..m amazed dat she agreed to stay bak..i hope arnav repents like hell!!..he dsrvs worse..n i wont b a tad bit sad if khushi leaves him..

Yayyy so glad you liked the update!!!
Khushi is definitely right in her place. No girl wants to go through what she has gone through :)
But I promise to redeem Arnav and repent for every action of his :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kinha_Luvyou

Loved this update!!!! thanks for the PM..
 
Khushi ignoring Arnav and finally Khushi making Arnav realise his mistake was superb..Arnav has a long way to go to get back Khushi's trust...
 
Anjali and Karan's bonding is too good..they are true friends..

Thanks a lottt for liking the chapter! & you're most welcome for the PM XD

Glad you noticed the relationship status b/w Arnav & Khushi vs. Karan & Anjali :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by uamaz

Beautifully wriiten ... I am glad Khushi has taken the stance she has and I also want Arnav to hurt as much as he has hurt Khushi because we have not seen that yet ... 



Thanks a lott for liking the chapter :)
Yes, Khushi will not be weak, at least not in my FF! That much I promise :)
Arnav will definitely repent and hurt!
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

Keh diya na...bas keh diya - Amitabh Bachchan, numerous times from K3G and Jaya Bachchan, once and the most powerful time, from K3G. :)

Great update. Arnav needs this and I am so glad that finally Khushi compared both of their's similar situation but contrasting reactions. Good job.

And finally Karan-Anjali story seems to be moving forward... :)

Hey Rae, 

You are absolutely right about the dialogue and how Jayaji's version of the dialogue came out so much stronger!

Thanks  a lot for liking the update, esp Khushi's reactions :)

Bahaha, yes, the two A/K couples :P
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by wildandsweet

loved it
loved how Karan was the one to help Di and not Arnav.
can't believe how Arnav was still so mean to Khushi
i hope she makes him beg for forgiveness

Glad you liked it! Thanks a lottt for the comment :)
Yayyy for liking Karan instead of Arnav with Anjali :)

Khushi will def make him pay, dont worry :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the explanation!! It made PERFECT sense!!

I'm touched about your 'Wall of Inspiration', sounds brilliant!!
You are doing a wonderful job with your writings!! IT'S MIND-BLOWING!!

Please continue soon!!

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