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ArHi FF - Every heart desires: Ch 23 link, Page 1 (Page 12)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nyxx

Res. Congrats on the new thread, you totally deserve it!! Hope your exams went well!!
 
and Rachita, I'll be coming back to edit this. You made me all teary and emotional again with this update. Beautifully written :)
 

Hey Dee,

Oops, should have mentioned this with the update. Not a new thread :( It's just that due to plagiarism, I've decide to post every chapter in a new thread so that I can include the No Copy watermark - just for safety purposes :)

Two of my exams went well! One more to go :D Thanks for remembering!

I'm sad I made you teary but glad you liked it too :$ Can't wait to hear your opinion on the next one:)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thesh

Good! He should get a taste of his own medication
@least now he will understand

Agreed. For once in his lifetime, someone showed him how it feels to be shunned, to be not listened to, to be given ultimatum to!

Glad you picked up on that :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by e_enigma

Amazingly done.
Let me get his out of the way.."Keh diya na..Bas. Keh diya." One of fave dialogues..full of power..depicts a lot of anger if used properly like you did. Anyway, Amitabh Bachan and Jaya Bachan in Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham. He said it repeatedly to his wife..and she to him once..such power in a single dialogue make my heart go all dhak-dhak.. :P Apt name for this daily soap as well. LOL. ..wonder if that was intentional on your part?. :)

Anyway, loved the update. Loved all of Khushi's dialogues and actions.


Thank youuu XD
You are absolutely correct with who said it :) I am glad you liked the way I used the dialogue. I was a bit iffy at first because like you said, it's one of the most powerful dialogues and I was afraid I'll use it wrongly. But glad you liked it :)

Bahahahaha! It was not intentional on my part to think that Kabhi KHUSHI Kabhi Gham actually describe Khushi/Arnav quite well. You are simply amazing! Maybe you should be my editor ;)

Nonetheless, thank you sooo much for liking the chapter and Khushi's dialogues. They were my fav too :)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lollipop143

Loved it. Man this made me very emotional. Plz cont soon

Glad you liked it!
Awww, hope I didn't make you too emotional :$
I shall continue very soon! Just updating the next part :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kethgowthami

wow man this is simply superb...i cried so much when i m reading this update...total emotional rollar coaster and nice ff

Thanks A LOT! Means a lot to me that you liked it :)
Oh my god! I hope I didn't make you cry a lot. Eeshh, that wasn't my goal :(
But agreed - it was full of strong emotions!
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meradil

amazing update yaar!!!

loved how all the characters unfolded here

especially the last scene with arnav and khushi... i'm glad she had the guts to say that to him! if she hadnt, then there would always be fear that the next time something happened to his di she would get blamed!

Also thanks for the PM!

Thank youuu :)
Glad you like the characterization!

Khushi, in my FF, has the guts to do anything :P
But you are right, it was high time she replied to him!

You're most welcome. Will PM for next update too :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saiqa4eva

wow..expolsive or wot...loved the last line...by jaya bachan...amaizng stuff cant wiat for the next part

Agreed! Explosion of emotions!

Yes, you are righttt! Jaya Bachan's dialogue that changed the course of movie :)
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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kritash

"keh diya na... Bas! keh diya, really wonderful and awesome. liked it very much the best part of this update for me was what karan told to anjili about life.
Thanks for the PM

You are absolutely right about the dialogue :)
Aww, glad you picked up on Karan's subtle life lessons to Anjali :)
You're most welcome

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