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New FF Pyar Hua Chupke Se (Maaneet)part 1

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Hey guys I decided to write my own FF on Maan and Geet.The Funny fighting and romance scenes are still alive in are hearts.They were like the best couples on the screen.so that is why I want to write an FF on my favorite couples.

Prologue :
Are they neighbors
Do they love each other
Would the pain they have in there lives would turn into love

There are so many questions but no one has the answer

How would they meet each other
Are they enemies of each other
Is this really a love

Would there hate for each other turn into friendship then in love

Who would help them relize that this is really a love

Have they meant before

So many of you have questions but there is only one answer this Is really a love

Intro
It was bright sunny day.Geet didn't feel like getting up she was having a dream of her rajkumar of how he comes on a horse with bunch of his relatives to marry her.Her mom came upstair with a bucket of water and splashed it right on her face.
Geet was like maa I was having really good dream and you just came in the middle of it
Geet get out of your dreams and go drop Choti to school.Okay maa let just go get fresh and then I will okay.
Geet and Choti were ready Geet went outside and got her scootery out.Both of the sisters were going but suddenly there was a huge traffic jame.Geet was like damm it this traffic had to happen today.
Choti was like Geet di I will walk to school from here and it is just 5 minutes away.Okay Choyi bye.Geet started back to her house but she meant in a accident with an huge car.Geet started crying because scootery was all damaged up but a young handsome rich guy came out.He got his wallet out and give money to her but Geet refused to take them and told him it is better to say sorry then just giving money.He just stared at her when she walked away.

Geet who believes love is everything if you have your love with you then you can accomplish anything in the world.

MSK who thinks money is everything and if you have money you can buy anything in the world

The question is this would Geet be able to change Maan's thinking would she able to show him love is everything not money

Note
Hope you guys like it
They do not exist on tv anymore but they do in are heart
It is kind of short
Hope you guys like
"fingers crossed"
If I get enough people liking it I will contain
If you guys want me to PM you just press like so it is easier for me to send it

Hope you guys like
Love Geet Maan fan :)




Edited by jasan22 - 14 April 2012 at 12:04am

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 12:07am | IP Logged
its interesting dear..
nice start..loved it
continue soon

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too good.. plz. cont. soon.. also add me in your pm  list
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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Part 1 Maan Geet

A beautiful girl was praying to babaji to get a job at the Khurana konstartions.She had long silky hairs.light brown eyes,and had a dazzling smile on her face.It was none other than Geet Honda.
When she turns around she saw her whole family with a worrying faces.
Geet-what's wrong I am just going to Delhi not out of this world.
Papaji-no putter don't say that
Beeji-Geet you never went somewhere by yourself
Geet-I am not alone Kushi and Rahul are going with me to
Beeji-no Geet you can't go,you never look after your health.
Geet-but Beeji
Beeji-no means no Geet and that's it
Geet walks with an angry face to her room. Geet's dad came running after again
Papaji-Geet putter open the door.Geet slowly opens the door with tears dropping on her face.
Papaji-come on Geet sit down
They both sat down
Papaji-Geet are you going by the flight or are you guys going to drive to Delhi
Geet-Papaji thank you,thank you,I love you,you are the best
Geet started dancing and picked her phone up to call Rahul and Kushi to book the tickets for Delhi.She was running.dancing,in the excitement of going to Delhi.She goes in her kitchen to take some sweets out.she gives ladoo to everyone.

KhuranaFamily:(Delhi)
Maan gets ready really quickly and rushes downstairs.But everyone in his famy were almost don't with the puja.Daadi gives the aarti to everyone but when she comes to Maan..
Daadi-aaj bhi late
Maan-woh Daadi I had to get the project assignment ready for today's presentation
Daadi-same excuses she pinches Maan's arm.
Daadi gives everybody a ladoo
Dev-bahi what project are you talking about with a giggle
Maan-Dev
Dev-it's a nice excuse
Maan-starts chasing Dev

Geet's Village
Geet was packing her things up but Beeji and mama came
Beeji-Geet take care of your health
Geet-okay Beeji
Mama-eat your food on time
Geet-okay mama
Beeji-don't talk to any boys
Mama-don't eat outside(restaurant) food
Beeji-don't talk to any stranger
Mama-call is three to four times a week
...
Geet- oh god be quiet,I now how to look after myself,and I am not a little kid I am 18years old.So.you guys don't have to worry about me.I will take care of myself
Geet-anyway my flight is at 8:00 and it is only 6:00.So I am going to go meet my friend at house.so I am going to my friend at her house.
Mama-okay Geet but be careful
Geet-I will mom okay bye,Geet takes her scootery out and goes to sanaya's house.When she was going there she was listening to her favorite song Laugda Lashkar on the full volume.Everybody were lime Geet Honda is coming.She got of the scootery and started dancing with bunch of the kids.
Geet-okay you guys bye I have to go to my friends house
Geet reached to her friends house and ring the doorbell but no replies came.Suddenly someone came behind her,put her hand on Geet's eyes.
Geet-who is it leave me Alone move your hands
Sanaya-guess who is it in a different voice
Geet-umm sanaya
Sanaya-how do you now it was me
Geet- come on I am your friends since grade I now you really well
Sanaya-I now
Both friends were talking so much when she checks the time it 7:00.
Geet-OMG,I have to go sanaya Bye
Sanaya-okay bye
Geet-rushes home and when she reaches there she see Rahul and Kushi there already.I am sorry I got late
Rahul-let's go to the airport before we miss are flight
Geet-Geet goes get her litharge and hugs everyone and leaves to the airport...


Hope you guys like it
So tell me how you guys feel about this FF
Should I contain or not
Please comment if you like it
Thank you guys
The prologue is just telling you how the story is related don't think that is related to part 1


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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
congrats fro new ff

loved 

interesting start
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