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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 84)

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
you know you write so realistic.
Khushi did not have to do anything to placate her hubby.
Love their relationship :) 

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Have read the last 3 parts in one go! Methinks I like this new changing ASR much more, lol!  Too much to expect the leopard to change his spots but love the way he stops and thinks about how things will affect Khushi!

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
loved it!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Why did it have the end?? :'(

I kept reading, and I was like, "I hope it doesn't finish here, I hope it doesn't finish here, I hope it doesn't finish here..." 

You surprised me with Arnav's reaction again! I was seriously expecting a full-blown ASR to tell off Khushi for disobeying him, but man, what he did, had my mouth dropping open in shock, and re-reading that bit to make sure that I hadn't imagined what I had read :p

I LOVED reading it!  When Arnav questioned about the bell, and it led to Shyam maliciously singling out Khushi, and then Arnav's anger, with Khushi silently calming him down, telling him that she wasn't hurt by placing her hand on his thigh, and then Arnav rectifying his mistake by taking out his wife for a drive, and occasionally covering her hands with his to make sure she was there, to tell her that he loved her, and silently apologise to her for everything he says and does without thinking.

The last bit was the icing on the cake. I loved how Arnav, could not find the words to tell Khushi that he was afraid of what would happen to Anjali, of what is going to happen in the future. Of how the stress was slowly creeping up on him. 

And Khushi, did not probe him further for details. She understood his hesitancy, took him to bed and massaged his head - the perfect remedy for letting the stress leave your shoulders and for a person to think clearly. 

Loved the update! Thanks for the PM! :D

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
To fellow fashionistas:
What Khushi wore on the bike ride:




Edited by Inked - 15 April 2012 at 1:13am

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
 finally was able to read all the three updates which i had missed and all were awsme i m lovng the way u r handling the shayam issue.

bikeee yeee i think bike ride is one of the most romantic thing to do wen low.


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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Cool
He took her for a bike ride.
It was a very beautiful update.the couple getting more comfortable with each other and of course the bonding is getting stronger.
Count your days Shyam!!!!

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 1:08am | IP Logged
khushi is strong compared to arnav when it comes to emotional strength.. he loses his cool very soon.. but she comes up with silly straight forward ideas which works most of the time...
 
he did not get angry at her for poking her nose into shyams business.. great.
 
i loved the bell idea too! sounds silly but it worked :D
 
nice update!

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