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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 59)

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
This is so early update from you even though it's short but heyya i am not complaining , Update is update .. i am just so happy right now .
I have not commented here because I am sick :( anyways coming from where i hve not commented , most highlighted part ;-
Arnav tears .. made me sad yaar :(
Khushi mix feeling remind me of how i read something which ended sadly despit of having happy ending to the story . I still can cry for it . anyways I like the way you showed khushi's feeling, amazing job!! .
 
He took her away , it made me remmber how he took her to coffee and cake thing where he wanted to just talk to her , have her to himself. so they would not be emtional and ohsyically distant .
 
anyways i like the ending .. really nice job!!!
 
I shall conti from here later after studies ;)
 
 
 


Edited by fanAR - 12 April 2012 at 10:25pm

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
res!
*edit*

Have to go somewhere??
So early an update??
Anywho.. You made my day, nevertheless...

Although the update was very short for my liking... -_-
Chalo.. Make it a long one the next time and I'm sure you will... :)
Very sensuous, Maya.. And I wasn't expecting anything less, given the point where you had stopped yesterday.. ;) ;)

Thanks for the update and the pm... :)

@Rae!!!!
Gotcha!!!! XD XD XD
Bwahahahaha!! B-)
<3 <3

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 12 April 2012 at 9:09pm

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Res

*Edited

Great job! I loved Arnav's evaluation of Khushi and his relationship and his reflection on how far they have come with that teasing comment about her dupatta...The chapter was saucy and just plain sensual! Awesome job! Loved their banter and the end was HOT!


Update soon!

@Harshu - Gah. :s :p

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 April 2012 at 9:11pm

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged

after such long time  i was thinking about giving u proper comment and omg I am the first one YAY!!

*dance in joy .. cheering for herself*
 
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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
wowww...nice update

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
loved it very hot awesome update thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
What an update! Cant wait to read more!!!!!

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Posted: 12 April 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
I was literally shocked to see a pm so early in the morning. Though the update was short i found it sensual and hawt. They made out against the wall. My my. Arnav not in control and arnav thinking about khushi initially was all fab. Khushi being fiesty is what i like about her. Thanks for the pm dear. Now will wait till tomo.

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