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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 4)

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Posted: 09 April 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Please Continue soon!

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Congrats on the new thread !!!
Loved the uPdate!

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awesome update 

brilliant
 

congrats on new thread 

thanks for the pm

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First of all...congoz a ton for new thread...i just wish for many more ...

Well about d update... before usual time today,thanx...i was very desperately waiting to c wot wud follow...

Was kinda relieved bout d entire khushi-shyam confontation...d confi and boldness in her actions was commendable...i wish khushi in d show was somewot like dis khushi...a lil bold answering back at shyam z obscenities...

Err...to confess I ws lil disappointed hw khushi later dealt wid arnav...i expeceted some sort of heated arguement..b/w d two bt den dat wud hav made things predictable..and then khushi has her own way wid most of d things...

Lets c how hotwa now handles all dis...his repentence is olways a treat for me to read...

Its becoming more interesting now...bring it on...

Keep it up...

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awesome part
and congrats for new thread
plz continue soon

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wow new thread already! congrats!!!
 
they have a different love story where there were no words spoken.. only actions! lol!! loved it.. good that they resolved their matters without a fight this time!!

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Congratulations on the new thread! It shows you how impatient people, impatient to get more and more of your work!

I loved this update, because I thought that Khushi needed to address the issue of not just Shyam but also Arnav being manipulative here. And for me, i feel that words alone cannot convey either Arnav's huge lack of trust, or Khushi's justified hurt at not having been trusted.

Had words been enough, this would not have been Arnav and Khushi, as you've pointed out. And I thought this scene, with the sex being a metaphor for their unspoken conversation was poignant, and though of course it was hot as hell. Somehow, i felt like I was listening to a conversation, to a mime, if you will, of what the words would have been. Was that your aim when writing this passage?

Another observation-I'm full of them today! I loved the concept of her denying, and then revealing her body, kind of mirroring how Khushi is in real life-resisting, then giving in to him. But I do think, at the end of the day, she will need to hear from him, in actual words, not that he is sorry, but why he did this. Khushi forgives, but this is a huge hurt..

I get the sense that that he is damaged, and there is more than just stupidity here (not in the serial-there he's just being dumb!)behind why he didn't believe her.

For a man like the Arnav you crafted, giving something of himself, something secret or personal to her would for me be a good act of redemption, because it would show he is opening to her, allowing vulnerability to be his apology, you know? Just a thought! 

She has not done anything to be seen as so untrustworthy-is there something in Arnav;s background, his past, that makes him view women, especially those he has feelings for, as inherently liable to hurt or betray him? Is that something you'll delve into? Or am I reading too much into it? I tend to do that, so apologies if that is the case.

Finally, let me just say thank you for being so prompt with your updates-and let me take this moment to acknowledge how grateful I am that you read my work as well, and always are sweet enough to comment.

I am aware, of how hard it is to update regularly with a full schedule of things going on-=and I always wake up to another fantastic chapter of ALN. Wonderful work, looking forward to all the great stuff you have planned!

Thanks again!
Navin

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