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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 21)

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
wow khushi...in ur ff never fails to amaze me she loves him forgives him for wat he did but cant forget the idea that her husband thought dat she can be after a married man...loved it thanks for the pm:)

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
To all Fellow Fashionistas:
Khushi in a sunflower yellow saree

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
i loved khushi here...her last few words almost made me cry!!!lovely update...

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
awww this was such a beautiful part
so emotional n touching..
loved it
fab work hun
take care

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
I dno't think I've ever been this excited to receive a PM.


*Edited*

Okay, you have blown me away with you writing once again.

Man I am actually really happy that you made Khushi have that breakdown, because while it is in Khushi's heart to forgive everyone, it cannot be easy to know that the person you loved initially believed you to be a home-wrecker. 
And so I am glad that through this part, through this breakdown she is finally getting the closure she deserves. 

The thing is many authors would once again go down the predictable path of Khushi being unhappy and angry and unforgiving towards Arnav which would result in him repenting for his sins. 

Or it would be that Khushi has understood and forgiven him completely and put everything behind her and they are living happily ever after. 

But you combined the two and gave us a more realistic view on things. And I hope this happens in the show, because this is how I imagine Khushi to be like. She is forgiving by nature, but Arnav needs to understand the pain he caused her. 

The last sentence where she makes him look up to see the tears in his eyes - My mouth dropped open. That made one vivid image in my mind, and my heart skipped a beat at that. You have an amazing way with words. I absolutely love this FF. I can't wait to read more!

Thanks for the PM!

PS: Sorry if my comment is a bit disjointed. I usually write whatever comes to my mind, and half the time my mind is jumping from one place to another :p 


Edited by Krani - 10 April 2012 at 4:04am

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 3:08am | IP Logged
wonderful update...so realistic...xxx

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Today's update  was an emotional one . Her actions and   reactions are completely justified , and Aawwh ...  nice to know  at least he putting some effort into  repairing   what  he  himself  has broken . Thanks  Maya   Loved the update , Muuaahh...  Hug Hug

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Excellent update yaar...continue soon...

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