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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 145)

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
So he finally admits there's a part of him she owns and not just the other way around. 
Loved it Clap
Your writing is so addictive; you truly have a gift, kudos Smile

Oh, loved loved loved this line: Perfection!! 
"At his words, life and everything bright and beautiful connected with it flooded into her veins"


Edited by monalisa_07 - 18 April 2012 at 10:57pm

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
fab update dear... Star

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
OMG!! just fnished all the parts of ur FF!!! You are awesome!! Say hello to ur new fan!! love love ur story and cannot wait till you write more!!!

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
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I look forward to your updates almost as much as i look forward to the show!! 

Coming to the update, it was superb in it's subtlety. Because unhinged shows of love is definitely not ASR and you handled the scene perfectly... 

I like how you made a character sketch and stuck to it, not many writer can do that! So good on you!! 

At his words, life and everything bright and beautiful connected with it flooded into her veins. He pressed her palms against his heart, and said, "Property of Khushi Singh Raizada." 

@above Are you trying to kill me or something?LOL That line almost made my heart jump out of my chest...! 


Edited by Firebolt - 18 April 2012 at 10:54pm

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
that was awesome.. the dress was so used to seduce him.. finally he had said she had his heart.. and also acknowledged that he knows he has to open up but it will take time. afterall its with years of practice he has achieved this khadoosness ...

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
"You have it...my heart. You have my heart, Khushi."
Loved these lines..Also how Arnav declared his heart as the property of Khushi Singh Raizada!!
 
Theres a tenderness in Arnav today..mayb coz Khushi broke the dam!!
 
n Loved the school gal n uncleji part!!!
 
Awsome chap hun :D

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Hubba hubba! What an update!! Filled with anger, hurt, love and passion!! Loved it!! 

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