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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** (Page 135)

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
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Sorry for leaving this res'd for so long, but I was at Uni, and had to quickly leave for my lecture after I finished reading your part so didn't get the time. Anyway, getting to the update, that was the perfect mixture of sweet, humour, romance and sexiness. Once again, you baffle me with the way you make your characters act so maturely and realistically in your FF, that it just keeps making me fall for it more and more. 

I have to admit, the scene that got to me the most was when Khushi broke down, and Arnav was completely taken aback as to why and what should he do. That was amazing! I really cannot wait to read more! :D


Edited by Krani - 19 April 2012 at 4:57am

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
wow so many res's haha..
see u are famous lol :))
 
 
p.s i thought u might make new thread , why did not u ? this one is gonna reach over 155 , you will see.
 

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
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WOW!! They truly communicated today
ASR shared his feelings with her...First he admitted in true ASR way and then he admitted his feelings to her in language she could begin to understand!

And loved this Khushi who is hesitant but so sensual and ventures in showing how much she wants him and desires him. She communicates to him what he means to her in a language in which he understands...

He belongs to her now both heart and body :-)


Khushi was brave today..Eagerly waiting to tomorrow's updateBig smile

Nancy



Edited by nancy_ipkknd - 18 April 2012 at 11:31pm

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
So he finally admits there's a part of him she owns and not just the other way around. 
Loved it Clap
Your writing is so addictive; you truly have a gift, kudos Smile

Oh, loved loved loved this line: Perfection!! 
"At his words, life and everything bright and beautiful connected with it flooded into her veins"


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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
fab update dear... Star

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
OMG!! just fnished all the parts of ur FF!!! You are awesome!! Say hello to ur new fan!! love love ur story and cannot wait till you write more!!!

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
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I look forward to your updates almost as much as i look forward to the show!! 

Coming to the update, it was superb in it's subtlety. Because unhinged shows of love is definitely not ASR and you handled the scene perfectly... 

I like how you made a character sketch and stuck to it, not many writer can do that! So good on you!! 

At his words, life and everything bright and beautiful connected with it flooded into her veins. He pressed her palms against his heart, and said, "Property of Khushi Singh Raizada." 

@above Are you trying to kill me or something?LOL That line almost made my heart jump out of my chest...! 


Edited by Firebolt - 18 April 2012 at 10:54pm

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
that was awesome.. the dress was so used to seduce him.. finally he had said she had his heart.. and also acknowledged that he knows he has to open up but it will take time. afterall its with years of practice he has achieved this khadoosness ...

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