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About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37** - Page 104

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooohh .. And I thought that the heat was due to the weather!!!!!!! Great update!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
sigh! khushi has her work cut out for her.. loving arnav singh raizada is going to be sooo difficult.

lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dislike you. You always end at the most crucial moment. Just when things are getting good!

Anyways, I loved the outfall of emotions and the realization that Arnav needs to stop playing games. I wonder if he will actually manage to be verbose though

Great update, as usual
And congrats on an almost thread 4

Yuks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol a naughty Khushi & a some wat shocked Arnav

This was great sweety

U always write so beautifully

Keep up the amazing work

Thank u so much 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
this just keeps getting hotter and better!

her broken heart " I'm worn out" and his desperation at seeing her like that make this update breathtaking! 

I like how you always seem to mix up your writing, with love and talking, with declarations and displays. 

Really enjoying the story!!! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi has definitely become more bold. Loved your update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too Hottt to handle...
But loved it...
ASR jealous of Yash...
Their emotional talk  and finally the her chance to impress him...
AMMMAAAZZZINNGGG


Thanks for the updates and the PM


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Posted: 12 years ago
Added this to my original comment:

Oh, loved loved loved this line: Perfection!! 
"At his words, life and everything bright and beautiful connected with it flooded into her veins"
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update... loved how you showed khushi's pleat to gain his heart and he was so touched and feared with her words and tears that he declared himself as a property of khushi singh raizada. that whole scene was written so perfectly πŸ‘ the naughty teasing of school girl and uncleji πŸ€ͺ im going mad πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh lovely
I loved the way Arnav said I m ur property and u have my heart
That was so sweet
And n that two language thingy I think we will have those for many more parts to come
Lovely update
Continue soon