Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


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Posted: 14 June 2012 at 11:26am | IP Logged
  r u???Big smile 
  4 Pming me..Tongue.
4 ur good job..ClapClap..
 ur updates..Star.
keep the  job up dear..Clap..
keep ing dear...Big smile
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
Note: sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics

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Originally posted by kuhu18

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Redio love frequency part 6

Geet smiled

Both talked for some time , and remember their child hood then left to their respectative homes

Maan reached home

Maan : I am sorry geet , I hurt u , me janta tha k tum hi geet ho , bt I didn't know ki tum hi meri mishty ho or na hi muje ye pata tha ki u know that I m a fairy , and I didn't know that u r not at fault but our fathers are at fault , but don't worry ur maan will have done everything alright

He chukled on his own thought of saying him as her maan , 

He was smiling on his thoughts , suddenly he came back to reality

Maan : maan , what are u doing ? are you gone mad ?? akele akele hase ja rahe ho ?there are to much work to do !

He took a relif breath and went to do his work


Geet reached home

She make a black-coffee for her self , and sit on balcony

                    Geet :pata nahi me maan ke bare me pehle kya kya soch rahi thi , I know that he is a fairy , but I didn't know that he also knows about me that I m a fairy , anyways achha hua rani-ma ne sab clear kar dia that he is my sanju  ,

                 She blushed at her own thought for calling him as her sanju

Geet : shhh geet , now go to office , otherwise u will be late


                   After office  

, veer come to meet geet , geet shocked

                  Geet : what are you doing here ? maan told u na that don't come to meet any of us in public place , then why you came here ?  

Veer : geet , vo I you knw na I am new to earth and I don't know anything about here and I am felling too hungry , so I thought to take ur help

Geeet : then u should go to maan , agar  yaha tumhe kisine dekh lia to ?

Veer : but geet , you know na , morning me vo mujse kese baat kar raha tha , so I thought he will not help me so I came to you

Geet :  let's go before anyone can see us

Geet took him to the  restorant ,

Veer : geet , what will you take ??

Geet (irritatingly) : jo bhi lena ho manga lo

At a while  , maan called geet , she pick the phone

Geet : hello

Maan : hey geet , where are you ?

Geet : umm , me na wo , me

Maan feel her restless

Maan : geet , me wo kya ??

Geet : wo maan , I am with veer

Maan panicked

Maan : what are you doing with that veer ?? tell me where are you excetly , I am coming just now , 

Geet : clam down maan , he is a good guy ,

Maan : no but I can't trust him , tell me excetly where are you ??

Geet : dekha ishi lia me tumhe nahi bata rahi thi ,

Maan : geettt

Geet smiled

Geet : achha baba , batati hu wait

She gave him a address and after some time maan came

Veer murmered seeing maan : ye yaha bhi pahoch gaya ?

Maan heard that

Maan : what did u just said ?

Veer : me ?? kuch bhi to nahi !

Maan :don't try to be innocent , I heard what did u said ?

Veer : if u heard that then why are you asking??

Maan gave him a angry glare

Geet : maan , stop it now

Maan made a baby face

They done with the dinner , but  maan & veer are pasing through a cold war , giving angry looks to each-other 

geet feel the cold war between them and shook her head  nagatively

Maan : veer ,now u had ur lunch ??

Veer : hmm , thanx geet , food was nice

Geet : your wel-come

Maan : so now you can go okay?

Veer left making baby face and maan gave him his famous smirk

Maan : geet stay away from him please

Geet sees some hidden felling in his voice

Geet : but maan , tumhe usse problem kya he ??

Maan : kyunki wo tum par '.

He was about to say but he stop himself  in between , bcoz he also don't know much about this new felling in him

Maan : kyunki (bcoz) I don't like him and please stay away from him

Geet : ok baba , I will not meet him again okay ?! and today I help him because he was hungry and don't know much about earth

Maan smiled : its ok mishty

Geet smiled him back

Geet : maan , I m on earthfrom 6 months but you are here from 1 yr na ?

Maan : hmm so ?

Geet : so maan , u know more about earth , he na !

Maan  : ha mishty , in fact now I know everything about earth , really it is totally difffrant from our heaven

Geet : maan but I only know something about this earth , please I wanted to know everything about this world , please please please

She pleaded , how can his sanju say no

Maan : ok geet , so what you want to see first ?

Geet : maan , hmm what about theater ?? let's go to see movie , I heard lot's about movies but never sees them

She said with baby sad face

Maan : ok let's go ,

They reached to the theater , there were too dark 

geet held maan's arm as she was scaring from dark

Geet : maan , there are too much darkness

Maan : don't worry  mishty I am here na !

Maan held her hand which is on his arm to assure her that he is with her


No doubt that geet is elder then maan but her thought and all just as kid , she don't know much about earth , nor she know much about her own world heaven


In the movie , geet sees that a hero kissed his heroin , it was a lip-lock

geet poped her eyes , and pocked her finger on maan's soulder

Geet : maan , what are they doing ?

Maan shocked to listen her question ,

Geet : maan , batao na ye log kya kar rahe he ?

She said so innocently ,

Maan : geet , earth me ye sab hota he ,

Geet : but hamare heaven me nahi ??

Maan : geet ye hamare heaven me bhi hota he but '.

Geet (cutting in ) : maan , then I wanted to do this please

Maan poped his eyes

Maan : geet we can't do this

Geet : par kyu ?

Maan : geet , u know , in our heaven , do person do round round for 4 times ?

Geet : ha I saw it for once , when pa-saheb was not at palace

Maan : ha uske baad hi vo karne ki permission milti he

Geet : oh esa hota he !

Maan took a relif breath as she convinced

Maan : hmm

Geet : maan , u have more knowledge about everything , but I don't know about anything

She said with long face

Maan : ha how can u know anything , when your pa saheb never ever allowed  you to go out side of your palace

Geet : hmm , u are right , he was never allowed me to go out 'side for my safety , earth par bhi meri safety k lia hi laye he ,

Maan : don't worry u will know everything soon

Both smiles to each other





Confession of love , from one ' sideWink

i know guys , noone is liking this ss Cry, but still I m trying my best , please commnt and don't forgot to hit likeOuch

Edited by Rachanachag - 15 June 2012 at 4:12am

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Edited by tiakashyap - 15 June 2012 at 5:02am

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
it was hilirous when geet said she wanted to kiss o god how innocent she was n maan handle her very ezily sach main ach ss hai y u said it plzzz continue soon 

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
loved the update

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Posted: 15 June 2012 at 5:59am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it 
lovely update 

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