Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Maan : Don't Worry U Will Know Everything Soon

Both Smiles To Each Other

It was a romantic movie and geet is not understanding a singal thing that's why she was felling bored

After some time geet wrapped her hands around maan's arm and rested her head on his shoulder and within no time she dozed off

Maan saw his sleeping beauty and smiled

Maan : pagli kahiki

Now it's time to go home but Maan didn't felt to wake up her so he gentaly scopped her in his arms , she encirculed her hand around his neck and placed her head on his chest ..unknowingly maan's heart beats raising


Maan placed her beside driver seat and took the charge of driwing...she was cuddling like a small baby ...her locks were disturbing her ...Maan slowly removed it and caresses her check ...Maan can see a blush on it in sleep too when he touched it ...he smiles seeing his effect on her

After sometime they reached at Geet's place , maan pick her in his arms and took her to her room then placed on bed

she was lokking indeed beautiful ...he bend down and kissed her forehead slowly ...


He was about to go when he felt a tug on his hand ..he turn and saw geet holding his hand in sleep

he bend over her and again kissed her forehead ever so lightly


Maan : Do u know geet u r as innocent as child , i never saw a naive person just like u , u r the most beautiful thing happened in my life ...he kissed hand ...I shall never let u go Mishty ..never


He kept staring at His mishty and he is half lying on the floor & half on bed staring at his mishty he slept


A morning ray hit on angelic face of Geet nd she open her eyes nd see most beautiful sight...Maan was sleeping holding her hand


After some time Maan open his eyes and found geet gazing at him ...

Maan raised his eyebrow like asking her why she is staring at him


Geet lowered her lashes with deep blush ,


Geet : Maan me coffee bana k lati hu

saying so she left from there


In kitchen Geet was making coffee lost in her thoughts , and maan came & back hugged her nd placed his head on her soulder ...Geet closed her eyes felling him so close


Maan : Mishty

Geet : Hmm

Maan : i want to talk to u ...

Geet : hmm


Maan open his eyes finding ans with only hmm and saw her totally lost in his touch

he held her more tightly


geet (still with closed eyes) : i m litsening sanju




Geet's throat went dry


, though she don't know atleast L about love , she turn to maan and her both hand were on Maan's chest


she just wishpered "Maan"


Maan understands her


Maan : i know geet , u need some time to take dicision don't worry mishty i can wait till eternity


he kissed on her cheek and left from their hiding his emosions




Days passed , Geet was started feling more for Maan ... They went to that progrmme where they participated (part ) ... they had done so much fun their ...

His each act made her fall in luv with him... bt she was not able to confess that



here Veer also fall for Geet and came to geet and said her ILU... now Maan can't stop himself to beat him...he started beating him but geet stopped him giving her seck...

Maan thought that may be geet luvs veer so he left from their felling pain ...Geet came and hugged him ...Maan amused with her act... Geet told him that everyone loves Tajmahal bt it doesn't means that they owned it ...Tajmahal to Shah jahan ka tha aur rahega same GEET MAAN KI HE AUR HAMESA RAHEGI ...I LOVE U MAAN

Maan's heart was jumping in joy ..he hugged her immideatly crushing her in his arms never letting go ...

I LOVE U TOO MISHTY than he captured her lips claiming her as him...first she shocked than start to resiprocate him...though now she is understanding everything ...

here their pa saheb get to know about their Love and they thought that they are fighting for their children's better future when their children has no objection than who are they ...


They agreed to make PARISTAN & FAIRYLAND as one state FAIRYSTAN ...

they do rajyabhishek of geet and made Geet QUEEN of the heaven ..and gave all responcibility & that MAGIC STICK and other rights of queen ...before this all right was of Rani ma ...though first she refuse but maan assure her that he will be with her all the time so she don't need to worry.. .nd geet she is elder child (only elderest child can be queen/king)...least they know how kiddo she is !!!


After they done marriage of as per rules ...maan is King as he married to queen Geet



Maaneet loves each other crazily ...all their people of state can't stop themselves to praise their love , Now geet is not that innocent geet who asked maan that what are they doing ...she is now quite mature and managing whole state like queen...Khusi & Arnav get to know whole story ..first of all they shocked than belived nd some time maaneet goes on earth to meet them though like human being...




After 5 yeurs ...


Geet was in her mahel ( Palace ) ...removing her heavy jewallary ...when 2 pair of arm wrapped around her waist .

pulling her closer ... ofcourse who it can be other than our flirty maan oops RAJA SAHEB MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

he kissed on her neck...geet closed her eyes felling him..though how many times they made love but still his one touch was enough for her to shivar ...

Maan...she moan his name as he started kissing and bitting around her neck ..


Maan : Me help kardu Mishty ???

Geet : for what ??

Geet : i mean RANI SHAHIBA may i help u to remove this ornaments ...


(as i said earlier , in heaven FATHER MEANS PA SAHEB , QUEEN MEANS RANI SAHIBA , bfor geet's Rajyabhishek Ranima was Rani sahiba)


Geet blushed and Maan started removing her jewellary ...with each jewellary he kissed there nd bitting licking nd sucking in the process ...

where Geet is moning his name...and they move ahead for further love making


After 1 hr of wild love making they slept cuddling in each other's arm ...When they heard a sound PA SAHEB PA SAHEB OPEN THE DOOR


maan : ye hamari bacchi hame hi santi se jeene nhi denge


Geet : maan chodo let me go


Maan : unuh ,


Geet (strickly) : MAAN


maan left her making baby sad face ..and wore his clothes


Geet open the door and find 2 little kids fighting for who will call whom as "AAP" ...the one is Maaneet's daughter MIDHI ..who was 4 yr old and the other boy is her friend DRUV ...who is just 2 days younger than midhi


Maaneet smiled remembering their fight of childhood ..where Geet scolding him for not calling him as AAP


Maan took midhi in his arm


Maan : what happen princess ?

Midhi told him that druv is 2 DAYS younger than her therefore he is not calling her by respect by Aap


Maan murmered : bilkul Maa par gayi he

bt Geet heart it ...


Geet left from there by twisting her lips


Maan to Midhi & druv : dekho bachho u both are friends na !!


both nodded cutely


Maan continued : then Friendship me koi elder , koi younger nahi hota aur nahi aur kisi ko aap keh kar k bulane ki jarurt nhi hoti...samaj gaye ????


Both nodded

 (ps- druv is midhi's friend ,)

maan : to achha ab jao aur khelo and no fight ok


Midhi : Druv u can call me by tum ...


Both smiles at each other and ran out side


Maan goes to Geet who was standing near window with golgappu face ...

Maan back hugged her and kissed on her cheek


Geet : leave me , i don't want to talk to U

Maan : Gussa to masha allah !!! Jaan me mazak kar raha tha ...i was just kidding


Geet : ha ha mazak mazak me apne dil ki bhadas nikal rahe the !!


Maan held her more tight ...


Maan (play fully) : Mishty , i didn't know that u will fell so bad ...i m really sorry Geet


Geet turn into his arms

Geet : Maan i didn't mean that ..i was just kidding


She was having tear in her eyes ..maan immideatly embraced her


Maan : shhh mishty i was kidding ...sirf tumhe chida raha tha ...

Geet hit his chest playfully


Geet : Aap na ...kabhi nahi sudhroge


Maan pick her lips


Maan : Sudharne k liye thodi bigde the ham !


saying so he kissed her brethlessly



he said in the kiss



she said and pick his lips


both laughed as they called each other as RANI SAHIBA & RAJA SAHEB


maan again hugged her tightly



geet hugged him tightly kissing on his chest





Well this is end ,and I done with it

Plz hit like and give me ur long long commants

Silent readers atleast wake up in last part 


it was my first FF ever , i didn't write it now 

i wrote it when i ws in 7th std  lol  , 5 yeurs ago, i have every part in my diary till 35 parts , and leter on i changed the name to MAAN GEET

i ended this bcoz of less resonce bt i tried to give a nice ending I hope u ll liked this :D


Edited by Rang_ - 17 July 2012 at 2:41am

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rani sahi raja sahib and midhi

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So sweet part loved it maan nd geet r just awsome nd their daughter so sweet loved it to d core:-)

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 Beautiful ending  dear...Tongue
 Love it...Tongue
 Thanks for  PM...Smile

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lovely ending dear

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