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ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed) (Page 16)

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Wow this was beyond amazing...loved the intensity, pain and emotions of Arnav...lovely..thanks for the PM..eagerly waiting for the next update

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
oh this was so awesome
really beautifully written
loved it dear
plz update soon
thanks for the pm
take care

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -doe-eyes-

Yippee!! I'm so glad you decided to continue this!! Generally I'm waiting till after exams end before I read SS's and FFs, coz otherwise I'd end up reading everything and checking IF every 2 minutes for an update and forget studying altogether :P But my self-control totally snapped when I saw your PM and I'm so glad it did !!

The symbolism, the wording, the emotions- everything is so poetic ! And of course- Payal taking an initiative, actually recognising all that her sister has done for her! Awesome <3 Continue soon, I'll be waiting:) xx

Awww...!!! That's so sweet of you hon! Waise I'm sowwiieee that this story is playing wildly with your self-control! I can perfectly empathize with this particular feeling though! Wink..

I'm glad you liked the update! Smile


Edited by Pearl_mystic - 14 April 2012 at 6:43am
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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
just beautiful...loved the emotion displayed...they both are suffering but unable to express it...feel sorry for both of them and finally payal is doing something sensible for the first time maybe...thnx 4da pm dear

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Wow. Im in love with the way you write. Drawing the parallels between Arnav and Khushi...I loveddd the entire symbolism there, and its nice to see Payal making an effort to unite the two who probably arent even aware that they are made for each other (well they are, but its time they admit it)...and looks like Khushi has handled herself on the exterior but theres ALOT inside, and same goes for Arnav...you displayed his pain, agony beautifully!!
 
Beautiful chapter..and the poolside...hmmm...its where it all happens ;) I await to read further!!
 
- Dee

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
this is awesome!:D do continue soon...glad that u continued !!!:D

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged
maya.. this is beautiful beautiful FF.. amazingly written.. you are very expressive..

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
sai jaan... the way u've played this out is amazing...
loved wat payal did for her sis n bil...
and arnav's utmost love and care for khushi... and khushi not being able to withstand his love... BEAUTIFUL... PERFECT...
now waiting for the final chapter... 

~~~ sam

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