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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Zara-

wow! i sooo hope this happens best written angst piece yet!
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Aww...!!! Thank you sooo much for the compliment, Zara! I'm overwhelmed...!!!

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged

lovely pearl

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -doe-eyes-

and you call this a naive attempt?? This is amazing! The hurt, the pain, the longing, all so potent- and the imagery so strong I felt this wonderful sense of place :) And especially the poignant ending- a beautiful positive note with lots of possibilities for the future, and the symbolism as well...

TRULY BEAUTIFUL :) :)

Oh and I hope your exams went well:)

Thank you soo much for this lovely comment dear! Loved reading it!!! Smile

And yeah, my exams did go well - surprisingly good!!! Tongue
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pc17

Pearl! I loved this-your writing is as elegant and beautiful as your name! Absolutely loved it! I think you're fabulous when it comes to writing OSs Wink You always brilliantly depict intense emotions.

Awww... Thank you soo much for this lovely comment dear! Really appreciate it!
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amitasaily

This is going to take much more than five minutes, as you said in your PM (Thanks for it).
 
It is going to stay on my mind the whole day.
 
FANTASTIC Piece of work.

Awww... Sowwwiiieee for that! But I'm not really feeling bad reading that it might take your entire day away! Tongue...!

Thanks for liking!
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lyraa99

r u gona continue this ... it was so beautiful.. u know m not reading anything these days and yet read two amazing pieces... I loved this mainly because even though it didnt have a happy ending in the true sense of the word, it gave hope... 
beautiful work...

Hey thanks a lot hon!!! I loved reading your comment (as usual!)..!! 

Yeah, I'm thinking of continuing with this - though I really have no idea how! Tongue... But the thought process is on!
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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angels11

I absolutely loved this. Was v angsty & painful Clap

forum writers always seem 2 excel when they portray arnav's pain LOL

Oh yeah, they sure do! All the writers here are more aware of Arnav's feelings that Khushi's for some reason! Tongue...!

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Firebolt

I don't think you give yourself enough credit!! That was really good hon...Well written and i could totally feel Arnav's hurt/sadness/loneliness.. 
Can we have a happy ending, please? 

Well - I was just being honest! I seriously had no idea that I would get sooo much response for this! Love you guys!!!

Thanks for liking... And as far as continuing is concerned - well, I'm definitely thinking about it..!!!

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