ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed) - Page 3

This was amazing Sai!!!

Even i want her to win her back...will it be too much if I ask you to write a part 2...on him winning her back!!!😳

This is the ASR, I am looking for!!!

I just loved you style of writing...I was so lost in it!!!

Superb piece of work!!

I can feel wat he is feeling plz conti. How he will win her back

continue please. it's good. please make the wining back real funEdited by rima - 12 years ago

I cried like hell :( Too good! The comparison with water/paper was phenomenal :)

Sad, but really good!

hi hun

its beautiful, fabulously written...loved it...thnx for PM

and you call this a naive attempt?? This is amazing! The hurt, the pain, the longing, all so potent- and the imagery so strong I felt this wonderful sense of place :) And especially the poignant ending- a beautiful positive note with lots of possibilities for the future, and the symbolism as well...

heart touching awesome os ..loved it ...thnks for pm😳 

Oh... Loved It Dear :))

Thanks 4 the PM :)