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IPKKND OS : I Will Wait For You, Part 3 Page 21 ! (Page 25)

abii95 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Wow, you are an amazing writer honestly :')
I dont think for a moment i got bored of reading lol
;'( very sad ending yet so beautiful


Edited by abii95 - 28 April 2012 at 9:56pm

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
whenever i think of a closure scene its always Bruce Willis'  Sixth Sense.
Going down the lane of the end , promising a better beginning..its always so poignant.

The same went here for Arnav. I just cant imagine what he must have felt seeing her there.
What anyone feels wen just one misjudgement cost someone's life.
But the closure of that horrific moment was  just so beautiful.
The landscape nurturing Khushi's most cherished qualities...a soothing presence.
Arnav's apologies for an act that may not have been committed by him but happened through him.
He knew he was yearning for a saudade feeling...something which would never come back.

Lastly wen Khushi answered his silent question as to why she never survived "You never asked me to stay". , what a kill...After this what remained was Arnav's realization to let her go to some place where she'll belong and where he'll too be welcomed.."I will wait for You".

Fabulous just so bloody fabulous Haley!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Wow Hayley that was a beautiful part! Very well written, I loved how you showed Arnav's pain and regret! Awesome job as always!!!

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
A part of me is kinda happy you wrote this, for all the times Arnav has unchivarously left her in the middle of nowhere in the dead of the night. That just ain't cool. What an a**.

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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
wow, what a beautiful update... khushi's words 'you never asked me to stay' are so overwhelming and poignant! yet her parting words leave us all with a sense of hope that these star-crossed lovers would one day reunite ina better place

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Just read it and it was so beautiful and sad.

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
Hayley this was heart breaking! you made me cry woman!l! You've written it beautifully! amazing job x

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
That has to be about the most heartbreaking thing i've ever read.. Broken Heart All the fear, the pain and the numbness vividly described.. brilliantly written. Loved every little bit of it you're a really talented writer Smile

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