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Part One.

 

 

*Warning- violent content ahead! *

 

This is the story of a simple yet special girl, Khushi. Her life was not easy. She had many hurdles, stones, thorns and monsters on her way of life. When her mom Tejaswini came to know that she is pregnant she was on cloud nine. Vijendar loved her a lot and was happy too. She was so happy to have a child that she didn't even knew that, to give life to her baby, she had to sacrifice her own. When Khushi was born, her mother left her. Vij loved tej a lot that's why when she passed away he hated Khushi, his own daughter. Shashi and Garima were present at the hospital as they were neighbors and the family friends of thakraal's. When doctor told that tej passed away giving birth to a baby girl, vij instantly started to blame her of killing tej when she was just an hour old, and refused to take her in his arms. It was Shashi who held her first and instantly was so happy to see her that he named her Khushi that instant. Garima saw the irony of the little child and took the responsibility of giving the motherly love to her. Shashi and Garima bought Khushi home and introduced her to a 4-year-old Payal as her sister. Payal also took the baby Khushi in her arms and kissed her cheeks saying, "welcome to the family, sister." From that day on, the gupta's were Khushi's family. Khushi lived with them and hence gave her all the love they could.

 

 

When Khushi was 5 she used to play on the road near vij's house. And every time his eyes fell on her he just spitted fire. He used to shout at her and make her leave the place. The little Khushi would run to her house crying. There was no one who can make her stop crying, but only one person, a boy in the neighborhood. Udayveer. He would just please and pamper her so much that she would forget her sorrows and start to smile again. He was the one who brought her out of the crying sessions again and again. When she grew up and was 10, she asked Shashi why the man in the neighborhood, hated her. Seeing the sincerity in her eyes Shashi couldn't make himself to lie to her. So he told her how her mother left her to them and passed away and the man in the neighborhood was no one but her own father. Khushi was extremely guilty. She can understand that her father loved her mother that's why he hated her. So On her every birthday she used to visit him once. Just to say she is sorry and she wants to live with him, her father. But vij every time pushed Khushi out of his door and she would return home, crying. The day she should be the happiest, became worst day of her life. The day her mom left her and yes Khushi too blamed herself for killing her mother, but dint let anyone know.

 

 

Udayveer was the one who pampered Khushi a lot. When she returned home crying he made Khushi stop crying and eat sweets he bought her. Seeing their affection Shashi and Garima usually had tears in their eyes. Khushi was such a wonderful child anyone could ever wish for. Seeing Khushi cry so badly UV once asked Shashi what the matter was. Why she returned home crying on her every birthday. Shashi told him the reason. And that day Udayveer swore to protect her. He would accompany her every time she visited her father. He would just stand out the door and waited for her to come. It would hardly take her 5 mins to come out as vij would accuse her and she would return back, crying. It was their routine for Khushi's birthday. She would go to meet vij in the morning and return home crying where Uv would console her and then they would celebrate her birthday with the gupta's.

 

 

Some more years flew and it was her birthday again. As usual she went to her father in the morning along with uday. Uv just stood at the door and Khushi went inside. Usually it hardly took her 5 mins to come but today it was 15, then half an hour passed, Shashi and Garima too came out of the house to find them. They started to get worried seeing uv still outside the door. UV couldn't stop himself from going in. and when he went in with Shashi and Garima he saw the place was pitch dark, covered with the curtains. And then a horrific scream! Shashi panicked and switched the lights on. The sight made them rooted to the spot. Khushi was trembling in the corner holding her knees to her chest. Her shoulder had a deep cut and was bleeding. Vij had a long knife in his hands. They were so shocked that they forgot to react. Khushi saw towards UV and stood up with pleading eyes to save her and soon her eyes went bigger and widened. When UV looked down he saw the knife which vij was holding was now in her body, below her chest. and the blood was oozing out like a tap. Khushi took a long sigh and fell on the floor, unconscious. Uv ran to her side with Garima while Shashi held a violent vij away from her.

 

 

Shashi was busy beating vij and UV was just holding her in his arms. That was after a minute or two he realized that he has to take out the knife. And with utter difficulty he held the knife in his trembling hands and tried to take it out. And when he finally took out the knife, more blood started coming out. Uv held her wound to stop the blood and ordered Garima to bring the car. He thanked god that Garima aunty knew driving, they rushed Khushi to the hospital while Shashi called the police and made sure vij was in prison for whole life.

 

 

Shashi came to the hospital and was told that Khushi was out of danger. She was a strong girl, she survived. But the accident made her a phobic. From that day on she was utterly scared of being alone and being in the dark. That day Shashi legally adopted Khushi and gave her his name, Khushi GUPTA. She was no more a Thakraal. She was shashi's daughter now. And he would love her in every bit. Payal and UV grew more possessive and protective towards her. They wouldn't leave her alone anywhere. If she needs to go anywhere, she was supposed to take Payal or UV with her. They all went to the same school, but were in the different classes. Khushi was in 7th grade while UV and payal were in 12th. Payal and uv's school ended before Khushi's. But they waited for her after their classes just to make sure she was not alone and they took her home with them.

 

 

One day when Khushi came out of the class, she saw UV and Payal waiting for her as usual. But something was different. She was not seeing UV in the eyes. She faked a smile and started coming towards them. Just then UV noticed something and asked Payal to wait for them in the car. Payal protested at first but left. 

 

Uv took her face in his hands and asked, "What's the matter?"

 

Khushi looked away and said "nothing."

 

Uv looked directly in her eyes with a hint of anger "tell me." although his voice was calm, she knew what was coming.

 

"i..i..tripped." and looked down her knees. It was what UV had noticed. Her blood, on her knees. The skirt that she wore had prints of 4 drops of blood. Four. That was far too much for him to handle.

 

"Who did it?" he said looking at her with I-am-not-going-to-buy-any-excuses look.

 

Khushi sighed and said "him." she pointed towards a boy who was laughing at the parking lot. Uv instantly was infront of that boy and pushed him on the ground.

 

"Hey!" that boy yelled and UV stepped on his knee.

 

"AAH!!" he yelled in pain and Khushi came to his side holding uv's hand and tried pulling him away. Khushi heard the boy's cries and looked away. Soon children from the school started to gather around them. Everyone knew UV was a rich spoilt boy whose father was one of the trustees, so they all kept mum.

 

"That's for hurting Khushi!" he said and pulled him up by his collar. "If I saw you anyway near her again then next time it wont be just your leg." With that he pushed him to the ground again and held Khushi firmly and walked to his car.

 

 

At the way they met Mr. Thomas, their principal.

 

"whats the matter, son?" he enquired worriedly looking at crowd in the parking lot.

 

"He hurt Khushi!"  That's all he said and went off holding Khushi's hand. Mr.Thomas also knew how protective UV was. He never had a fight with anyone if it was not for Khushi. But when it was for her, he was uncontrollable.

 

 

They went to their car in which payal was sitting at the front and UV and Khushi sat at the back seat.

 

As soon as they were in the car Khushi asked, "what was that uv?"

 

"He hurt you! So he deserved it!" UV said matter of fact-ly.

 

"You cant go hurting people and breaking their knees just for a scratch.!" Khushi protested.

 

"A scratch does not bleed, Khushi!" uv said looking at her skirt which had blood marks.

 

"But its dressed now, its not hurting!" she showed him her knee which was dressed in white bandage.

 

"He would also be dressed in the same way tomorrow, don't worry." And smirked away.

 

"Your impossible! Jiji tell him that he was wrong!" Khushi looked at payal.

 

"Yes UV what you did was wrong!" uv raised an eyebrow. "You should have broke his head, instead!" saying she laughed and high-fived UV.

 

 

"Impossible!" said Khushi and huffed looking out the window.

 

She could never argue with them in this matter. But somewhere she thanked the one above for giving her the two most lovable people in the world. They cared for her more than she herself ever can.

 

 

Some years later'

 

Khushi- 18

UV- 23

Payal- 22

 

 

 

It was Khushi's birthday again. Today Khushi became 18. It was in the morning when UV woke up and his cell phone beeped. It was a message from Payal.

 

"It's the day again!"

 

As soon as UV read the message he forgot to breath for a second. He got up and quickly had a shower and went to Khushi's home. Every year on Khushi's birthday he did that one thing which he hated doing the most.

 

 

He went to Khushi's room and entered to see her writing something on her heart-shaped letter pad. She looked at him and quickly closed it shut.

 

"What the hell!" Khushi glared at him. "Cant you knock?!"

 

"Nope!" UV said casually and laid on her bed.

 

Khushi sighed at his remark and tore the piece of paper in which she was writing something, folded it nicely and put it in a white envelope and gave it to uv.

 

"You know I don't like doing this!" uv said in pleading voice.

 

"Either you go or I?" Khushi said folding her arms.

 

"Ok I WILL!!" he said instantly and got up from the bed.

 

"Go right now! And don't forget to bring me his answer."

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Precap:  Khushi went to the restroom and started cleaning her dress with water, when she looked up for tissue, she saw Arnav holding it in front of her and before she could say anything, his lips were on hers.

 

So how was it guys'I know Arnav was not in this update but I wanted to clear the background and base of Khushi's life.

 

Arnav entering in part two!

 MUSKAAN






Edited by MastiMuskaan - 22 April 2012 at 3:43am

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

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1st of all u tell me r u the Muskaan of GEET FORUM :) ! who wrote amazing FF's ? !! 


you recognized me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Shockedwow!
thanks for your compliment!Embarrassed


yes i m from geet forum...how r u?
OFCOURSE :O ! i mean tht person is stupid who wont remember u !! even tho i read few of ur FF's but Man u r just THE BEST <3 ! im manal btw :) ! u on my fb i guess :) ! im so waitin to read <3 !! do add me to PM list <3

thats such a big compliment! ohhh!!!!!!! ummm actually i dont go on fb so i dont know abt that. but i m glad you know my writing and appreciate my work! you are first in my pm list dear!Embarrassed
Well u actually on my real account !! which i hardly check :) !! n i will sure be hooked wid this FF as it seems sad <3

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

OMG Muskaan 1st lemme talk about the Concept Shocked ! MAn it seems like a sad FF ! n Man I LOVE reading Sad n intense stuff esp related ArHi ! man Im so gona be hooked here <3 !! 

now lemme read 1st chapter <3

thanks dear! glad you liked it!!!!my first commet on my new ff! this feels great! ahh!Embarrassed thanks alot dear...part 1 is on page 2...

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
@characters : Okay Seems Like ASR is still Same here ! which will be fun reading ! as i can not imagine ASR like some1 else !! 
about Khushi DARLING <3 ! im sure im gona be attached with her <3 !! 

now About UV !! Uday Veer *imagines Ashish *blush* * !! anyways OMG He is Like So FREAKING Sweet ! n YES PLEASE PLEASE do not turn him negative <3 ! he actually sounds a darling <3 ! but Man I wanna See how Arnav is here :/ ! n how ArHi 1st Meeting will be !! 

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

Originally posted by MastiMuskaan

Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

Originally posted by MastiMuskaan

Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

1st of all u tell me r u the Muskaan of GEET FORUM :) ! who wrote amazing FF's ? !! 


you recognized me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Shockedwow!
thanks for your compliment!Embarrassed


yes i m from geet forum...how r u?
OFCOURSE :O ! i mean tht person is stupid who wont remember u !! even tho i read few of ur FF's but Man u r just THE BEST <3 ! im manal btw :) ! u on my fb i guess :) ! im so waitin to read <3 !! do add me to PM list <3

thats such a big compliment! ohhh!!!!!!! ummm actually i dont go on fb so i dont know abt that. but i m glad you know my writing and appreciate my work! you are first in my pm list dear!Embarrassed
Well u actually on my real account !! which i hardly check :) !! n i will sure be hooked wid this FF as it seems sad <3

its a bit sad but not entirely...hope u like it!Big smile

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cute_rockstar

omg this was awesomeness!
i loved it!
chapter one was amazing!

cant wait to read more...:D


thanks!Big smilehope you like it as the story progresses too...Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -AdiYalicious-

@characters : Okay Seems Like ASR is still Same here ! which will be fun reading ! as i can not imagine ASR like some1 else !! 
about Khushi DARLING <3 ! im sure im gona be attached with her <3 !! 

now About UV !! Uday Veer *imagines Ashish *blush* * !! anyways OMG He is Like So FREAKING Sweet ! n YES PLEASE PLEASE do not turn him negative <3 ! he actually sounds a darling <3 ! but Man I wanna See how Arnav is here :/ ! n how ArHi 1st Meeting will be !! 


dont worry me too love uv and i ll not make him a negative character! he is and will be poisitive!Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged
OKAY muskaan ! reading the 1st bit of how Khushi's father abandoned her n not accept her n blame her :( ~man it bought tears in my eyes :( ! i could actually imagine something similar might have happened to khushi :/ !! now coming to Shashi man ! even in the show he is my MOST FAV character !! THE BEST father ! n Glad u made him like tht !! i can See Khushi /Payal Bond already <3 !! 
Beautifully described khushi's Life when she was born Clap

Now 2nd Part !! Awww im xcited to read more on UV&Khushi's friendship <3 !! Man How can Vij be so heartless :( ! Good Shashi told her !! but its so Heart wrenching to see her Cry for her fathers love :(!! man its just so sad to see her like this ! going every year to apologize yet come bk crying ! u surely know how to show emotion ! cuz along with khushi i too had tears in my eyes :/ 

OKAY :O ! I think u gona confuse me in future in ur FF !! to either Drool over Arnav Khushi ! or UV/Khushi :O ! cuz man ONLI if there was some1 like UV in the Show !! <3 but dil will always be ArHi-ian <3 lekin its not a crime to imagine UV/Khushi Wink ROFL 

OMG OMG :O NO i take BK my WORDS :O !! thnk God there is NO real father for Khushi :O !! cuz if her father is like Vij ! I WILL Kill the CVs !! HOW COULD HE DO THIS to tht Kid :@ !! man Im in tears :(* ! love how protective UV is ! n shashi/Garima ! man SHASHI kill VIJ :@ !! :( ! poor Khushi :( 

Im confused ! how old is UV @ the moment ? ! Man thnk god Khutta vij is arrested :@ !! agar Baap aisa hota THNK GOD he Abandoned Khushi thn :@ !! 

Okay Just Read ! UV is in grade 12 ! which means he 17 ! n man u just making me love this IMaginery guy even more :/ ! n Payal <3 !! 

hahahahaha Payal is hilarious ' U SHOULD HAVE BROKEN his HEAd' ! ROFL im gona love this trio ;) <3

OKAY :O ! Precap if JATKA :O !! Jaldi Update <3 ! man I loved it <3 !! 

man tht was a long comment ROFL ! this is wah happen when im into something ROFL 

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