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Dial A Secret... MG FF (thriller) part 13 (Page 32)

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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged
nice part 

thnx for updating 

thnx for pm


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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged
this Is gettinh soo much interesting!!can't wait to know what's in tht video,bt if they serioisly had killed tht girl by drowning her then they need to pay for the crime.i hope it'll be cleared in the next part.
i certainly hate adrian the most,he s the most cunning and cold blooded among them.

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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
all of them have their own reasons to hide things...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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Posted: 05 July 2012 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
superb

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
part 7
what was in the video?
is Maan gonna be in trouble?
hope not...
Geet is understanding with Maan...
right i hate u so much dear to have left the part at this point...
cont soon...

PS - update ur title...


Edited by spvd - 06 July 2012 at 12:33am

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
interesting...

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Posted: 06 July 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
Adrian and brandon r both so clever so many hiding things
now how the chandelier falls down
what is at the end ?
interesting and suspense
continue soon

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Posted: 08 July 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Mimi, first of all stop your lazyness here, girl. You have more than 1 work to update. And why are you confusing me? Your title says 'part 6' but you have written 'part 7' on pg 30. This part was written in a hurry, i can bet on that. The length, the pace of story and the grammar clearly says it. But still loved it.

Coming to part, can't say anything about anyone. Each part left me to think who is playing a dangerous game with whom? Like i said till now, everyone is hiding something, for sure. No one can be said innocent or clean hand here. All 6 of them are showing their nature, which can be said as their fake mask too. I mean, they can be doing acting also. They all have a past and many things in common. And most important, each part make us wonder what we really didn't expect is happening here, so is there anything that we are missing? That can be in front of us too but we are not getting it. They all are trapped and are in a big danger. Or the entire scene can be changeable too. Your work has mystery, thrill, suspense and the real face of rich society too. Maneet scene between all this feels like fresh air to me. Overall, bow down and hats off to you, my over-creative-yet-unexpected-imaginable-intelligent darling. Sara loves every bit of it. You make my brain to really work. Every part till now was really amazing and unexpected. Waise, guessing in your work will be called as stupidity coz your story and twist are really sharp but Sara will try atleast. One thing stuck in my delicate brain, why the person is most importantly behind Geet? Is there any psycho lovestory angle TOO or is there a scene to hurt her so as to hurt Maan the most easy yet most painful way? Well, lagi raho. Sara is there to read, comment, support, guess and soon 'like' too. Again, very much thoughtful.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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