A lot of
people asked me to continue my
. I am keeping a bit
busy therefore I will not be able to write to FFs. So what I am doing is
merging the OS with this FF. The track will now become of Maanvi's jealousy
towards Seema. If you have not already please read my OS:
...if you have not already. Also, from now on the FF will be in a more colorful format!! Hehe! Thanks
guys for all your encouragement and please continue to provide me with your feedback!
I have also written another SS named: Saath Samandar Paar on VirMan! If you have not read that yet please do. I am a little busy therefore am unable to send out PMs for this SS currently. If you would like to read it here is the link:
PLEASE NOTE: These updates are entirely a work of fiction. Any
resemblance to people (living/passed away) are totally coincidental. These
updates are not meant to offend anyone and are just a creative way of
expressing thoughts and ideas.
Just to let you know: There is a new character being introduced in this section.
Song for today's update:
Bole Chudiyaan -Kabhu Khushi Kabhi Gam
At the breakfast
table Maanvi and Virat were sitting next to each other. Jeevika and Viren were
sitting opposite them with Bua Ji sitting at her usual spot right at the front
and Maya sitting on the other side of Virat. Virat turned around at Maanvi and smiled
whilst gently taking her hand underneath the table. Maanvi's first reaction was
*blushing* but when she realised that they were at a breakfast table where all
the family members were present she tried to break free of Virat's hold. Seeing
Virat's strength obviously she was having trouble and in trying to escape from
his grip Maanvi brought her and Virat's hands out from the shelter of the
table. When doing so Maya saw that they were holding hands. She was furious.
More furious than ever. She aggressively leaves the table and storms up in to
Maya is thinking
of ways to get Maanvi away from Virat. Then she suddenly comes up with an idea!
She will have to use Swamini Bua. She will get Swamini Bua to hate Maanvi...she
will use Swamini bua in order to get Maanvi away from Virat. This time she
won't give up.
is telling Maanvi that he promises that he will never let anything happen to
her. He promises her that everything will be alright. The thought of marrying
Maanvi comes to his mind so no one will be able to separate them two. But
then he wonders whether Maanvi will be ready for marriage. There are so many
preparations'so much 'hungama' and with Maanvi suffering from cancer'will it be
safe? His though process continues inside his head.
Maya is now in
Swamini Bua's room discussing how to get her and Virat back together again.
What can she possibly do? She asks of Swamini Bua to suggest ways of getting
Maanvi out of the house. She eventually gets furious that she has to do all of
the thinking and Swamini is not suggesting any ideas.
Maya: Kaysi Bua hai aap? Virat ke bhalayi kilye bhi kuch nahi
kar sakthey. Arrey aapko tho sharam aaney chahyey.
from Maya Swamini is furious and extremely let down.
Swamini: Humney tumhaareyliye ithna kuch kiya aur tum? Hummey
dhamkaari ho yeh kehekar ki mein Virat ki bhalla nahi chaathi? How dare you?
Himath kaysi huyi yeh sab keheney ki tumhaari.
Maya has now
realised that she has made a very big mistake.
Maya: Bua ji vo-
Swamini: Nikal jao'.abhi iss vaqt iss ghar sey nikal jao.
Maya tries to
get the chance to explain but Swamini is so angry that she grabs Maya's hand,
takes her into her guest room, gets a servant to pack her bags and throws her
out of the house. She does this all without giving Maya the chance to explain
or say anything. Even though Maya tries her best to explain to Swamini Bua and
tries to "Suck UP" nothing seems to work. Maya is eventually kicked out of the
house. The whole family is shocked of Swamini's sudden reaction but no one
dares to say anything. Dada ji remains quiet as he did not like Maya in the
first place so there was no point of defending her at all. As for Virat, he is
quite happy that Maanvi and himself can get some privacy and be away from
Maya's pointless forceful deeds. Maanvi is unsure about whether being away from
Maya will cause Virat to fall for her again but Virat reassures her that
nothing like this will happen. She trusts Virat and hugs him. As rude as it may
seem, everyone is happy about Maya leaving the house, even Swamini Bua. After
all Swamini had heard from Maya she is nothing but glad that Maya is no longer
in their house. She was never needed. However, Swamini has still not accepted
Maanvi even after the exit of Maya.
Things have now
settled down a little. Maanvi and Virat are extremely happy. As expected from
Swamini Bua, she has still not accepted Maanvi. Beeji has had to go back to
Hrishikesh with Chachu to handle the house and business over there and help
with the house work etc. Jeevika had insisted that Maanvi stay in Chandigar for
a little longer. Beeji was worried at first but Virat promised her that he
would take the BEST care of Maanvi.
family is gathered at the table for lunch.
Maanvi: Di! Mujhey na bohoth bhuk laggi hai'kuch khaaney kilye do
na! Di!!! Kithna der lagaari ho!! Do na!! Di Bhuk laga hai! Di do na khaana!!
Jeevika: Shehethaan. Jithn badi hothey jaari hai tu uthni hi
badmaash. Ruk deri hu. Vaysey bhi'aaj meinney tumhaarey liye khaas khaana
Maanvi: Khaas? Di??? Khaas kya hai?? Bathao na di!!
Jeevika: Masaaley daar
extremely excited to hear what her di had made for her but after hearing what
it was she did not know how to handle the situation. Maanvi turned to Virat.
Virat looked at her in a way that was saying to her "No Matter What Happens You
Can Not Eat That. I Will Not Let You." Maanvi was silent. She couldn't say NO
to her di. What now? What would she do? How could she explain that even though
Jeevika had made Maanvi food after so long, she could NOT eat it. The doctors
had not allowed her to eat spicy or any oily food as it could make her quite
sick. What would she do now? She turned to her partner to look for some hope. Virat
nodded and his eyes were saying to Maanvi, "Don't worry, I will handle it
partner." Meanwhile Jeevika had realised the strange eye-contact conversation
going on between her devar and sister.
Jeevika: Mannu? Virat? Kya hua? Mannu tujhey tho masaaley daar
pakorrey bohoth passand hai na. Khaa na. Kyu nahi khaathi hai?
Virat: Ha-ha Maanvi! Khao na. Yu tho humeshaa khaana ka shor
bana rakhthi ho. Khao na.
Maanvi looks at
Virat worriedly. Jeevika laughs at Virat's words, on the other hand.
Jeevika: Virat'tumhey patha hai'jab Maanvi chotti thi na tho vo
jaysey hi "pakora" ka naam sunthi thhi saarey ghar mein shor machadethi thhi.
Jabtak ussey pakora nahi miljatha tha tabtaq koy sakoon sey saas nahi ley
pattha thhaa. Ek baar Dabbu neyy Maanvi ko chirayaa aur usskey pakorrey ko
chupdiya. Maanvi ney purri ki purri chatni ki bowl uthay aur seedha usskey
cheherrey ki upar phekdiya!!
The family had a
good laugh and teased Maanvi about her bachpana. But Virat and Maanvi were only
concerned about one thing. What were they going to say to Jeevika so she would
not give Maanvi the pakora?
up a pakora from the plate and held it up to Maanvi's mouth.
Jeevika: Ley Mannu. Chintha math karr'iss baar mein teri pakorrey
nahi chupaongi aur tujhey kissi ki upar chatni nahi pheknaa parrey ga! Ley'teri
di ney khaas terrey liye manaaya hai'ley khaaley.
Viren: Khalo Maanvi! Meri pyaari pathni ne manaya hai'.mujhey
bhi khaana hai !! Saali sayba nakhrey math manao'khaa bhi lo !!
the pakora a little closer to Maanvi's mouth so it was nearly touching. Just
that Virat suddenly and instantaneously grabbed the pakora.
Virat: Partner, tum mujhey bohoth bore karri ho. Koy bhalla
ithna derr lagaatha hai pakora khaaney mein? Theek hai tum math khao mein hi
Virat still has
his hold on the masala pakora on his right hand. With his other hand he grabs a
paneer pakora (so quickly that no one realises or sees him) and makes a run for
it. Maanvi chases after him.
Maanvi: Virat'Virat!! Di ney merreyliye manaaya hai!! Mujhey MERA
PAKORA DO !!! Virat do !! Mujhey mera PAKORA DO!!!
to chase after him but begins to lose energy. She tries to control herself
making sure that no one sees her. Virat realises that she is falling. He comes
up and wraps his hand around her back pulling her close. He tries to cover up
Virat: Accha'.lo partner'lo'.I'm sorry'khaalo apney di ka
Virat pulls her
closer to give her his body to lean on. He tries to make sure that no one can
see what is happening to Maanvi because he knows that Maanvi does not want
Jeevika to find out about her cancer yet. Maanvi feels stable again. Virat
gives her the pakora in his left hand which is the paneer pakora. Maanvi is
shocked wondering why Virat gave it to even after knowing about her cancer. It
is then when Virat subtly leans into Maanvi and whispers into her ear:
(whispers) Paneer ka pakora thaa'.masala
wants to grab Virat and hug him for handling the situation so well. But she
can't of course, since everyone is right there they both have to control their
urge and cravings for each other. Virat and Maanvi *try* to act disciplined as
they return to the table. Swamini is of course very disappointed with Maanvi
because of all the "shor" caused at the lunch table. But she does not want to
disappoint anyone else so she simply continues with the rest of her meal.
Maanvi: Di!! Mein aapko kya bathao!! Ithna achaa pakora manaa tha !! Jee bhargaya!! Thank
Jeevika: Thank YOU Mannu! Tujhey patha hai'mera haath ka manaya
tujhey accha lagtha hai tho mera dil muskraaney lagtha hai!
Maanvi: Kaysi baath karri ho di? Aapkey haath ka manaya mujhey
kaysey achaa nahi lagey ga. Aakhir behena hai hum'khun ka rishta hai hummara.
finished off their lunch and returns to their rooms. Virat forces Maanvi to go and
get some sleep. Virat stays with her until she falls asleep. Just before he
leaves her room he quickly presses his lips on hers. Maanvi's eyes start to
flutter but he places his hand over the top of them so she won't wake up. He
kisses her once more. Wanting her consumes him but right now he knows she needs
rest. He is at the door and he turns around to look at Maanvi. He is once again
thinking through his idea of marrying her'but may be it is too soon. If he
asked her would she agree? With this question ringing in his mind he leaves the
Maanvi wakes up
a little while later at the sound of the phone ringing downstairs. She goes
there to see Bittu (the servant) talking to someone on the phone. Bittu is
trying to explain that Virat is not at home as he has gone outside to get
something. Maanvi tells him to give the phone to her.
Person on the
other side: Hello? Hello? Virat hai? Please
agar Virat hai tho mujhey phone do na! Please'.
Maanvi: Aap kaun hai?
Person on the
other side: Mera naam Seema hai'main
Virat ki bachpan ki dost hoon. Mein aur Virat best friends hua karthey thhey. Thorrey
din peheley Swamini Bua ne mujhey phone kiya thaa aur vo mujhey Chandigar
bulaarahi thhi. Vaysey bhi mein aaney vali thii kyuki mein doctor hoon aur
Chandigar key kuch patients ko treat karney they issiliye. Aap kaun?
Maanvi: Mein'mera naam Maanvi hai!
Seema: Aap uss ghar ki kaun hai?
Maanvi: Mein meri di ki behen hoon!
Seema: Di?? Um...Di kaun?
Maanvi: Merri di iss ghar ki bahu hai. Virat abhi ghar pe nahi
hai ayngey tho boldungi unhey phone kardeyney kilye.
Maanvi does not
know why however, after talking to Seems she feels irritated. Maanvi is lost in
her thoughts until she hears Jeevika calling her name.
Jeevika: Mannu? Kaun thaa phone pey?
Virat is just
entering the door after returning from being outside.
Maanvi: Phone par'vo di phone par Virat ki koy dost thii'um'usska
naam thaa Seema'
Virat: Seema ?
Maanvi turn around to see Virat standing there.
Virat: Maanvi tumney kya kaha Seema.
Maanvi: Nahi'meinney kaha Bandar! Tumney galath sunliya? Duffer'Seema
kahungi tho Seema hi sunayi dega na. Dus baar confirm karney ki kya zaroorath
Virat: Arrey nahi der footiya vo kya hai na ki Seem aur mein
bachpan sey friends thhey. Actually, thhey nahi hai'BEST FRIENDS.
Seems saying this to her as well. BEST FRIENDS. Virat picks up the phone and
calls back Seema.
Virat: Hello? SEEMA! Kaysi ho tum?? Ithney din sey nahi milley
Virat is engaged
in a conversation with his so called "BEST FRIEND" Seema. Maanvi does not want
to but she has admitted that she is jealous.
A while later
Virat puts down the phone. Jeevika and Maanvi are still standing there.
Virat: Guess what bhabhi? Guess what partner? Seema yaha arahi
hai. I am so excited! Ithney din key baad mein ussey miloonga!! YES!!
Jeevika: Arrey Virat yeh tho bohoth acchi khabar hai. Iss bahaney
mein bhi tumhaari BEST FRIEND sey miloongi! Mein aur Seema milkey bohoth mazaa
Virat: Ha bhabhi! Aur best bit yeh hai ki vo yaha 5 haftey kilye
rehey ri hai! Aur sabki ijazath bhi milgayi hai. Usskey aaney sey bohoth mazaa ayega.
Every word of
Virat's is piercing Maanvi. She is jealous. And it is final. She wants Virat to
herself. She has never seen him so involved in another girl before. Another
girl apart from her. Without further ado Maanvi leaves Virat and Jeevika
standing where they are and returns to her room. Tears have swelled up in her
eyes. Then she asks herself why she is crying. Virat loves her. She can trust
him'she tells herself that there is no need to be so frightened of losing
Virat. She trusts her partner enough.
Quote: You only realize how much someone really means to you
when they leave you.
Precap: (The precap won't be word for word like
this but just to give you a brief idea):
Seema has now come into the house and Virat is extremely
happy. She has won the hearts of everyone. Swamini Bua is all in all in her
favour. Even Jeevika seems to like Seema. Swamini Bua has given the
responsibility of taking care of Seema to Virat since she is his "BEST FRIEND."
Amongst all this Maanvi feels scared that she will lose Virat however, most of
all she feels lonely. She needs him there, right next to him. Without Virat
part of her is missing.
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Edited by Preeti_Shadia - 09 June 2012 at 7:38am