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Virat: Maanvi'I'm sorry. Bua jia ne jo kaha-
Maanvi: Choro na Virat. Hojaatha hai. Aur shayad vo sahi hi tho keheri thhi. Mein nahi hothi tho tum aur Maya-
Virat: Usska zikr math karo merrey saameny. Mein tumsey pyaar kartha hoon yeh tumhaari nahi meri galthi hai aur agar kissi ne bhi tumpey ilzaam lagaya tho mein bilkul bardaash nahi karoonga. Aysa hotha hai kya?
There is silence. Virat has once again brought up the topic of love.
Maanvi: Dekho Virat'mein-
There is a knock on the door. Virat gets up to open it. It is Jeevika and Viren.
Jeevika: Maanu! Maanu tu theek hai na?
Viren: Kya meri saali mujhey maaf karsakthi hai?
Maanvi: Jigu-maaf?
Viren: Maanvi'.bua ji ne aaj jo kaha usskeliye I'm sorry. Yeh jaankar bhi ki tumhaari koy galthi nahi hai mein kuch nahi karpaaya tumhaarey liye. Maaf kardo na.
Maanvi: Baapreybaap! Yeh reality mein family hai na? Mera matlab ki kahi koy drama serial ka family tho nahi? Ek sey ek dramatic log hai yaha par. Especially aur di aur aap. In an imitating voice: Maanvi mujhey maaf kardo'Maanu mujhey maaf kardo! Aur-aur yeh , yeh Bandar Virat. Yeh hai drama serial ka hero. Angry hero. Hamesha angry young maan bankey ghumtha phirthaa hai.
Virat: Ha aur tum. Tum tho bilkul perfect ho na? Um'tum ho ha! Tum ho hero ki heroine.
Virat and Maanvi just stare at each other for a second. Even though it was indirect they both put the way Viraat said 'Meri herione' in the same sense. The love story sense. Jeevika suddenly clicked her fingers in between their faces.
Jeevika: Kya hua? Tum dono achaanak chup kyu hogay?
Maanvi snapped out of it.
Maanvi: Mujhey kya patha? Iss Bandar sey puchyeh na ki mujhey bhooth jaysey kyu ghur raha thha.
Jeevika: Tu bhi na Manu'jab dekhthi hoon isski shikaayad karthey rehethi hai.
Jeevika is going along with Maanvi's lies but Viren has realised that something has happened between his brother and his saali. Something interesting. He wondered whether it could be something to do with-love? Now Viren is lost in his thoughts.
Jeevika: Ab aapko kya hogayyyaaa?
Viren: Huh?
Jeevika: Neend sey jaagye pathi parmeshwar'kya hua?
Viren: Eh'.voh'um'kuch bhi tho nahi!
Viren thinks that if it is love may be Virat and Maanvi should be left alone for a little while to strengthen their relationship.
Viren: Chalo!
Jeevika: Viren ji'abhi-kaha?
Viren: Arrey tum chalo tho sahi...
Jeevika: Viren ji
Viren: Chalo'chalo na!
Maanvi: Jigu'di! Sunyeh na! Sunye tho! Di!!
Maanvi is following them when Virat grabs her hand and pulls her close to him.
Virat: Yeh mera vehem hai ki tum ab merrey saathi nahi baath karney chaathi?
Maanvi: Ha'.vehem hai! Choro na! Di-!!
Virat: Really? Tho bathao na'.pyaar-
Maanvi: Virat dekho mujhsey yeh pyaar vyaar nahi hoga hai. Reheney do. Maine tumsey kehe diya hai ki mein tumsey pyaar nahi karthi tum ek baar me sajthey kyu nahi? Ha? Mein tumhaarey saath khush nahi rehesakthi. Samjhey? Nahi hosaktha hummarey beech koy rishta. Door raho mujhsey Virat.
Maanvi leaves the room and Virat is still looking at the door from where she exited. He has no words to describe his feelings.
Quote: The negatives in life will turn positive. It is just a matter of time to wait and see when.
Precap: "Maanvi makes a run for it but loses energy and begins feeling weak because of cancer. She is in the middle of crossing the road still being chased when a car suddenly comes speeding towards her... Maanvi is about to be hit when'..!"
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