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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
Hey Deetha i'm nt going to throw ne jutas n chappals over u for this update.Wink
It had a major twist which i somewat guessed in middle when u pointed out Rey teasing Kria that he is going n wil b back aft two days n she ran to him n hugged him taking promise from him that he will never leave her netime.Unhappy
Rey wanted 2 spent sum btful time wid Kria on their HM but his father wanted him to join n take new contract n help him in it n see this boy wen Kria made efforts he didn't agree but wen he knew Swayam is wid him he agreed making Kria fuming wid anger. Tongue
Their romance was hot n passionate n dat bath scene too. Embarrassed
Kria bhi na wat was d need 2 play hide n seek in late hours @ n8 on a deserted road? Ouch
but y those ppl kidnapped her? Shocked
I'm sure dat dey r busns rivals of Rey's father n here Rey is broken.Cry
update fast
They didn't get time to romance n now in precap Smriti is coming, let's see what happens next.Smile

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mai kya itna bura hu ki aap hamesha kriya ko mujhse door karte ho...aur...aur agar mei sach mei bura hu toh jo saja hai wo mujhe dijiyena...humesha use kyun...mujhse apni jaan se jyaada pyaar karti hai bas yahi galti keliye use itni badi saja???kisne uski kidnapping ki hai???? koun hai???par usiko kyun...mujhe kyun nahi???kaisi hogi...kaha hogi??? wo jaldi darr jaati hai...agar use akele room me lock kardiya toh ...toh raat ko andere mei??? wo toh ...

he caught his head and he was not able to digest what her position would be...he gulped hard...

kya karun???koun hosakta hai???

he closed his eyes tight but all in vain...he clutched his hair with both hands...he pulled them as more as he can while he cried out her name...

rey!!!!???? uhh...not again...kyun indonon ko humesha alag karte ho??? ab ise kaise sambhalun???ise samhalun...pehle apne aapko samhalto lun...bhagwan ji plzz...not again...meri frnd ko itna takleef kyun deteho??? kya haal hua hoga uska???kaha hogi???yaha iski ye haal toh uski kya hogi??? 

rey!!!!!! ab isko kaise cntrl karun???? bhagwan ji...kuch hi dinon pehle meri shona ko mujhe wapas diya...ab phir se door...agar use kuch hogayana then i swear...mai kya karoongi mujhe pata nahi...i swear jisne bhi kidnap ki uski khoon nahi bahaya na then mai bhi sharon nahi hun...

he hit his hand hard on the table nearby...

sh: swayam!!! plzz cntrl urself...we will get ...get her back...

she hugged him not able to cntrl and finally breaking up...

sw: im trying sharon...par...humesha unhi ke saath kyun yaar...

she pulled back...

ab mujhe hi sabko samhalna padega...ri8...shona keliye mai sabko samhaloongi...wo aayegi...aur hum bohut masti karenge...

she wiped her tears with a determined face...

sw: sharon let it out aise rehke apne aapko hurt mat karo...

sh: no swayam...jab tak meri shona wapas nahi milegi tab tak mai nahi roungi...and i swear mai uski wo haal karoongi ki...

sw: relax...chalo i think he needs us now...

they srtrd towards his room but sh stopped swayam 

sh: rey ki khayal keliye hum hai par shona ki????

he looked away not able to look at her painful eyes...he hugged her tight...

sw: papa log gaye na wo ...wo kuch na kuch toh karenge...chale...

she nodded and entered in...they were taken back...rey was on his knees caressing the pics of kriya ...many pics were scattered around him as he holded their marriage album...they walked to him..sharon placed a hand on him...

r: humesha use hi kyun??? mujhe kyun nahi?? kya mai saja keliye bhi layak nahi hun???kya mai sach mei itna bura hun??? sirf use kyun??? kyun???

she ran 4rm there...she hit the wall of her room and fell down crying...he was the most strongest person she had ever seen...even when kriya left him...he made him up ...but today he was literally gone mad...

tum jo koi  bhi ho tumne sahi nahi kiya...u have to pay 4r this...and wo tumhe bohut bhaari padega...aaj swayam  aur rey donon ki aakhon mei paani dekhi maine...they are totally broken...aur uskeliye i would never leave u...and upar se jise maine phool se bhi jyaada maasoom tarah se dekhthi thi...use takleef diya...mai kabhi nahi chodoongi...tumhari naani ki yaad na dilwayi na...


sharon!!!!!! use ab rokh bhi nahi sakta...aur ise samhal bhi nahi sakta...mai kehta hun sab galti humari hai...aakhir ek dusre se pyaar kyun karte hain hum...pyaar ke bina kyun nahi jee pate hain??? ab mai ise kya kehke samhalun...ye ki apni pyaar ko bhool ke chain se jiyo...ya phir apne pyaar keliye aasun mat waste karo...agar ultha mujhe pooochega ki mai normal rahun toh mai kya kahun??? kya mai reh paunga??? arey  dost hai wo agar mai hi nahi sehpaaraha hun...toh uski zindagi hai woh kaise seh paayega...i think mujhe jaana chahiye...i feel shame on me...i never felt this helpless...

kaisi ho abhi??kaha ho???theek hona??

he took one of her pic...

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he caressed her pic...

tumhari ye cute si smile...ab kya hoga yahi tumhari  face pe??? tum bohut tensed hogi naa...kaha ho??? mai tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta...yeh smile wapas laani hai teri face pe...

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kitni maasoom ho tum...kaise sehpayegi sab kuch...usne tumhe maara toh??? nahi nahi...nahi tumhe koun maar sakta hai...tumhari iss maaasoom si chehre ko dekh ke koi kaise tumpe haath utha sakta hai??? kaisi ho??? kab wapas aaoge??? mujhe tumhe care karna hai...tumhe bhook lagne ke pehle khaana khilana hai...tere paun dard hone se pehle tumhe apni haathon mei uthana hai...bore hone se pehle hasana hai...rooti toh manana hai...tumhe dar lagne se pehle apni bahon mei rakhna hai...teri godh mei soke tumse baat karna hai.....apni har galti ke baad tumse maar khani hai...  tumhari balon ke saath khelna hai...tumhe tumhari importance batani hai...sab se jyaada zaroorat se zyaada pyaar karna hai...kaha ho??? 

he walked back but stopped as he called him...

r: swayam...

sw: huh...haan rey...

r: ab kya karna hai???

sw: papa log gaye hai use dhoondhne...unki aadmi dhoondh rahe hai...dnt worry miljayegi...

r: r u nt worrying???

both were facing opposite sides...swayam continuosly stared at the stairs when reys gaze fixed on the photo...

kaha tha maine...kya kahun ab...ye ki mai apni best frnd ko miss nahi karta...uss ki chinta nahi karta...jiski head pe ek line dekhne se pep up talk talk deke use normal feel karwane keliye loot pith tha tha...ab uski bhilkul fikar nahi karta????

r: apne app se mat lado...dnt pain urself more...u can go...

he left the next second...he went to his room to find her already asleep...

hmm...itna toh jaanta hu sharon tumhe...aakhein band rakhegi toh kya mai maan jaun ki tum sogayi??? but dnt worry i wont disturb u... i even dnt have that much strenght o do dat...

he walked to other side and layed down facing other side closing his eyes...just as hers...

rey...kaha ho aap??? pata nahi in logon ne mujhe kaha laaya...andera hai rey...plzz cm to hug me and cmfrt me...plzz rey aajao...i want u to kiss me...jab aap kiss karte hona aisa lagta hai ki koi problem hi nahi hai...aapki bahon me sona hai...mere ghar me...jo mujhe humesha duniya ki sabse safe jagah lagti hai...rey plzz ye subah kab aayega...pata nahi chal raha hai ki aas paas kya hai?? aapki pyaar ko mehsoos karna hai...aapki care ko feel karna hai...aapki saamne bachi banke aapki haaton ki khana khana hai...aap ki woh faltu jokes sunke peth dard hone tak hasna hai...kab milenge rey hum wapas...kya mai tab tak aapke bina jee paungi??? nahi...mai jiyungi...aapkeliye...zaroor...

she wrapped her arms around her knees...and dug her head into her knees...and closed her eyes...a smile took place on her face as his face appeared ...she slowly slid into sleep...

next mrng...

all were at breakfast table...but none can even think of eating without her...

r: dad kya hua???

he asked as vijay , gautum,and sandy entered the house...
vijay jst nodded his head in response...

gautum: ab tak kuch pata nahi beta...par humare aadmi ab tak kaam mei hai...

r: haan dad...kk...but i decided i will bring her back now...

vijay: par beta...

sw: bade papa rey sahi keh raha hai...hum dhoondhenge use...

sh: mai bhi chalti hun...

sw: par sharon...

sh: swayam wo meri behan hai...i will go...

she told with full on determination...all gave up...rey and swaron strtd in two different cars...and strtd deir their way...it was 1 when they returned defeated...

but they strtd daily ...and the gang too joined them...rey refused anyone to accompany him...and again they returned failed...but they kept on their trials...

oneday rey was in a mall searching 4r her...he was searching when he stopped on hearing a voice...

...: rey!!!!!

he froze...he turned back in an alarm...

r: tum???

shivam: haan mai...kyun acha nahi laga...

r: huh...get lost ...mujhe tumse baat nahi karni...

shivam: ohh!!!!!!! sorry ...bohut busy hona...kriya ko dhoondh ne mei???Evil Smile

he looked at him in an alarm...

r: matlab tumne kriya ko...Angry

shivam: wow!!!! tum sach mei bohut smart nikhle...and yeah ur ri8...

he caught his collar...

shivam: ohh!!! mai aise kaise kar sakta hun...mai toh batana hi bhool gaya...mujhpe haath uthana matlab kriya tum khud ek step mauth ke paas leke jaana...

he flinched back...

shivam:  good boy...now jst follow me...

r: kahan???

shivam: mai thoda acha banna chahta hun...tumne bataya na...

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r: agli baar uske baare mei socha bhi i will kill u...

he was on the ground...blood oozing out 4rm his mouth...he was beaten by rey...very hard coz he was responsible 4r what all happened...now she was with him but  she was abt to die when he met her...the fear of loosing her  made its way as anger out on shivam when he saw him in the mall...swayam and vicky pulled him back...other wise he would have killed him dat day...

r: kam se kam ab se acha ban ne ki koshish karo...

they left him lying on the floor in middle of the crowd...

shivam:(,ore to himself) u have done a big wrong rey...iski saja toh tumhe milegi...and it will be ur death 4r sure...but mai tumhe aise tadpake maaroonga na...ki zindagi mai itna helpless kabhi feel nahi karega...aisi haalat banadunga ki ek taraf se marna chahte ho and dusri taraf se jeena chahte ho...ur so dead rey!!!!!
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rey followed him silently...ri8 now only thing in his mind was HER!!!!!!! he hopped into shivams car and blindly followed him...

ek baar use dekh toh loon...kaisi hogi??? teen hafte...kaise reh rahi hogi akele???aaj mei tumhe kisibhi keemat pe yaha se leke jaunga kriya...i promise...humari pyaar ki kasam...

they went to a big place...


they never noticed that they were followed by two ppl...

r: kriya kaha hai???

shivam: arey ...looks lyk bohut pyaar karte ho...okk let me let u see her...

he signalled sm ppl to bring her...two men brought her catching her by shoulder...she covered her eyes with her hands tight...it looked lyk she would collapse if they left her...

r: kriya!!!!!!!!

she tried to open her eyes...the bright light was giving her eyes pain...after a struggle of fifteen minutes finally she got a clear view of him...a curve spread on her face...but she soon went back to unconsiousness...they made her lay on the bench beside...rey took few steps towards her but was stopped by shivam...

shivam: arey itni jaldi kya hai...ye lo knife...isse apni nerve kaato aur theek 15 mins baad ur free to do what u want...u can even take her...i wont stop uEvil Smile

rey took the knife and tried to attack the ppl...

shivam: woah!!!!! cool...agar yaha kisiko kuch bhi hua na then have a look...tumhari pyaar...and ur wife...she will be no more...wah!!!!!!!! grt na...agar abhi use maarenge toh use pata bhi nahi chalega na...waise bhi behosh hai...toh pata kya chalega...she will have a peaceful death...


death??? ab mujhe pyaar karneki saja keliye bas yahi bacha hai??? aakhir tumne mujhse pyaar ki hi kyun??? sach mei mujhe ditch karke chali jaati...safe toh rehti...meri wajah se...

he bit his lower lip when the knife slipped his hand...


Edited by deetha - 19 April 2012 at 2:36am

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
o god deetha dat was amazing and wonderful and uss shivam ko toh rey maar daalega but kriya god bechari mujhe usspe taaras aa raha hai god y kyu humesha kriyaansh ke beech sab log aa jaate hai and sharon's part was amazing kriya is lucky to have a sissy lyk her and d last part was heart wrenching bechara rey shit 15 minutes tak nerve katega
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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
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deetha what is this yaar?
First kriya kidnappd nd then this 15 min tragedy
Nice turning of the story...gr8 works...u are an amazing writer...
Lovd the way u portrayed sharon swayam and rey's feelings...
3 weeks and kria stil nt found Wth!!!!!
Bloody hell shivam what does he think of himself...happy atleast rey gave him a tight one...
Now rey wrist cut for 15 min not done...i wish at this stage both Reyam wer world clas boxers...to give nice punch's to that shivam

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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Nyc update ClapClapClap

Kriyaansh moments were jst awsm!!! Big smileSmile

Kriya kidnapped. Ab rey ka kya hoga CryCryCry

Dat shivam arhhh!!!!!! Angry

He asked rey 2 kill her Cry

Thx for pm


Edited by abhiyakreya - 19 April 2012 at 3:14am
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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 3:01am | IP Logged
deetha yeh kaisa update tha...its completely unexpected

luved the way u described rey, kriya, sharon, n swayam's feelingss...awww rey caressing kriya's photo

luved sharon's determination n kriya's sooo lucky to have a sister like sharon

omg kriya ko kidnap huye 3 weeks ho gaye n still dey couldn't find her

iss shivam ki toh mai...aur yeh kaisi condition rakhi hai usne rey has to cut his hand omg...plzz update the next part asap
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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Wat an update!!!
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Posted: 19 April 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
uff kria kidnap poor rey feeling bad for her and dont sepeate them plzzz

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