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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged




YIPEE NEW THREAD!!!!!!!!!!!!! 


thanks ppl ...thanks to all  who have cmnted liked and suppported my ff till now!!!!!! Hugi dnt believe ...2nd thread!!!wow...grt...i thought i will not atleast cross 5 update...and here i go ...with my 2nd thread and gonna cmplt my 15th part...all credit to my readersClap ...luv them lyk hell!!**muah** to all...Embarrassed





link 4r 1st thread...Big smile














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Posted: 08 April 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
chalo guys im back!!!!!!!!!!!!!hope ur waiting...so here goes ur next update...
and this part dedicated to all those ho cmpleted the thread...and to shaffy who helped me in this...)


             fourth step towards togetherness...
    ****haldi sajna ke pyaar ki****






(all thanks to shaffy...this one 4r u dear)


its 4:30 in the morning...









(kya socha phir se call...???? nah...twist hai kahani mei...LOL)


reys family and all the boys...infact everyone in the house gathered ...all were ready and now 

sandy:  *phew* sab tayyar???


all: haan...

preeti : haan par ek sab se badi aur mushkil kaam baaki hai...

sandy: kya??

all looked at each other...rolling their eyes...

all: rey ko uthana...


preeti: vijay aap jayiye aur uthayiye...woh sirf aap ki uthane pe utha hai...

vijay: haan das baje ko...aise saade char .,paach baje nai,...mai akela nai karsakta...  he threw his hands up in defense...

sw: koi baat nai bade papa mai bhi chal ta hun aapke saath...

vijay: haa  ab theek hai chalo...

they went up...

preeti: hum bhi chalte hai...maza aayega...all nodded and  all followed them...



vijay slowly opened the door...all went in but but but...they didnt find rey on bed...they scanned the room but their gaze stopped at smthing...on seeing it everyones mouth hanged...hahaha...


rey was standing in front of the mirror buttoning his shirt...his hair was wet...yes he had a long fresh cold water bath and now he was standing front of mirror...after that he shaked his head ...as the water drops fell on them them came back to senses straightened them up but they were shocked...they were looking at him with eyes popped out...rey wore his dog tag wore his watch ...then took some gel and applied to his wet sexy hair and passed his hands making some fall on his fore head...(like our usual hawt rey...) he looked at him in the mirror checking he was luking gud or not...went to his wardrobe opened it...chose a perfume sprayed it and took out his shoes and wore it after cmplting he stood in front of the mirror checked himself...


r: hmm...perfect...hai na rey???  smirked...

all: haan...

he turned and was shocked to see all of them in his room...

r: aap sab yaha???

all back to senses...

vijay: haan par tum itni jaldi??

r: haa papa aapne hi toh kaha hai 5:00 baje kriya ke ghar ko nikalna hai...

sw: 5 nai rey baba...6 baje...

all laughed when rey pouted...

preeti: chalo ab tum bhi tayyar hohigaya  toh abhi nikalte hai...

rey grinned lyk a fool/...

vicky: haan preeti ur ri8...aakhir kriya ki wajah se hi toh iski neendh udd gayi aur uss se milne keliye tadap raha hai...


vijay: theek hai chalo...

preeti : aap sab jayiye mujhe rey se kuch baat karni hai...

all went...she went to rey kissed his forehead...

preeti: bohut pyaar karte hona use???

rey smiled at her lyk a small child...

preeti: par kya woh kam nai lagti tumhe...

rey looked at her confusingly...

preeti: pata hai aaj haldi hai...haldi ke din pehle haldi ladke ko lagti hai aur wahi haldi ladki ko lagate hai kyun ki kehte hai usse pyaar bhad tha hai...par agar ladki ko sab se pehle haldi kudh ladke ki haaton se lage toh aur bhi jyaada pyaar badh tha hai...

rey grinned...

preeti: par ladki ko direct lagana itna aasan nahi hai...maine bataya iska matlab nahi ki mai teri help karoongi...u know im against u know...khud se try karna padta hai...she winked and left...

r: acha ...toh khud se karna padega...chalo beta mission pe lag jao...mission kriya ko haldi lagana...he grinned and went down...all headed to kriya's house ...they got a grand welcome and were heading towards their guest house...kriya was peeping out of her window as guest house was visible 4rm her window...rey looked up as knew sharon's house well and there he caught her...there was a eyelock...rey smiled...kriya smiled and lowered her head...he slowed down and was seeing at her constantly...


sw: abe aage dekh ghar ke andar jaana hai...bush ke andar nahi...he came to senses and moved in...kriya lifted her head but she didnt find him she strtd searching and at last found him...he was standing at his window looking at her...she blushed again...girls came 4rm back and strtd teasing her...she ran 4rm there to her bed...he smiled and turned but was blocked by boys...and thus strtd the teasing sessions...

it was 6:00 and haldi was abt to strt at 6:45...

rey went to window( gang were busy outside...kriyaansh rooms were locked...) rey called kriya...

she picked and strtd talking walking ...

r: hi baatcutter ,...

k: hi rey!!!!!!!!!!


 she stood beside the window and was playing with the curtain and blushing...she 4rgt that she can see him and viceversa...

rey could now see how she would blush when he calls her...

r: kya kar rahi ho???

k: kuch nai...pata nai kyun bahar se lock kardiya...isiliye aise hi baiti hun...aap??

r: mera bhi wahi haal hai...acha suno ...

k: haan...

r: tum seedha peeche wale garden pe aajao...

k: kya??kyun??? nai...

r: itni hyper kyun horahi ho...???? mai kuch nai karoonga...

she blushed...

r: aisa blush mat karte rehna ...

k: aap ko kaise pata ki mai???

r: tum kaha khadi ho???

k: window ke paa...

she got it then she looked at him...LLHH...

r: toh aarahi ho??

k: ( normal) nai...

r: sach mei nai aana...(they were looking at each other and talking)

k: haan...

r: toh mat aao...cut the call and throwed the cell back on the bed ...folded his hands and looked out...


k: arggh!!!!!!!!! ab gussa...chalo jao kriya...pata nai unko kya kaam hai par tumhe unhe manana padega...she looked out...no one was there...she slowly strtd climbing down...she was in her tee and track pant... he saw her and jumped out of the window...she climbed down and slipped down in middle fell in his arms...their eyes met...he slowly took her to the back of the building...it was a beautiful place with big trees and bushes...he made her sit never breaking the eyelock and turned back and walked towards another tree...

k: rey kaha jaa rahe ho...

rey turned around and gave her a smirk...he had a big bowl filled with haldi...her eyes widened ...she stood up...

k: rey yeh sab...??

r: haan haldi...maa ne kaha ki agar meri haaton ki haldi sabse pehle tumhe lagegi toh tere liye mera pyaar aur bhi bhad jayega...he walked to her ...before he could apply she hid behind the tree and peeped out...


k:..toh dekhte hai koun pehle lagayega...

r: par haldi mere paas hai ...

k: wo kaise lena hai mujhe pata hai...


r: acha...laughing...


she chased him...they ran here and there...suddenly kriya tripped and fell straight into a small tub of water kept 4r birds and all...he laughed hard...he literally rolled on the ground...


r: kaise lena hai mujhe pata hai...he immitated her...  ab dekho milgayi na???

he again bursted...


now her ego was hurt...she got out and again tried cathing him ...but after smtym she got that she cnt catch him...so she stopped ...rey sensed that she was not behind him...he looked back she was not there...his eyes strtd scanning the whole place ...finally he found her...he was shocked...the bowl almost slipped his hand but soon he gripped...looked at the mehandi and again at her...


she stood there leaning on one of the tree trunk...her lgs crossed and her body her body in a very sexy way looking constantly at him...he drooled over her...she stood in a very sexy way more over she was wet,...his body strtd heating up...she lfted her left hand and called him towards her with her index finger...she had a comletely different look...she drived him crazy with her sexy and seducing looks...he walked upto her...she caught his shirt and pulled him close...placed her left hand on his cheek ...he eyed it...she slowly slid to his chest and unbuttoned two buttons...he was looking at her and her hand with a shock...then she took her hand off him and placed on her hip...his eyes followed her hand she slowly slid her hand up exposing her waist once to him as  her hand passed up...she slowly slid it up along her left curve then to her left cheek and then to right moving her hair to ri8 and ended on her ri8 cheek...stretched her hand up and looked to ri8...this was it...its more than enuf...he moved front and placed his hand on her waist under her tees and squeezed it...she arched more towards ri8...he slowly bent frward and strtd kissing her neck...she slowly tried to reach the bowl with her ri8 hand but her hand touched his and he came to senses and got her plan...he played along...he never left her next and strtd giving wet kissing making her more dizzy...he slid his hand back of her tee ...pulled her more into him intensifying the kisses...her legs gave up and she bent down and finally sat down along with rey who never stopped...he moved up to her face kissing...and caught her lips...both kissed to the earnest and never let the other  to break  bowl slipped of his hand...both noticed this never breaking the kiss and never letting the other to knoe their plan...their hands searched 4r the bowl...both found and dipped hands at the same tym ...both broke the kiss and looked at each other and then at their hands...and again looked at each other with a smirk...both dipped their hands and stood up...

r: toh shuru karte hai...dekhte hai koun jeetega...

k: haan im ready...they strtd trying to apply to the other blocking them with their arms...finally while struggling both applied each other never knowing who applied first ...they took more and strtd playing rey caught her by waist 4rm back with his left hand and lifted up and applied haldi 4rm her face to her neck when she tried to loosen his grip while shaking her legs and with ri8 pulling his left hand offf her waist which was almost impossible.and applied haldi to his face and neck ...

finally he let her go and turned her and pulled her towards him...they missed balance and fell back...looked into each others eyes ...he gripped her tee...she caught his hands and interwined his fingers with hers and pinned them up his head on the ground ...he moved frward 4r a kiss...she touched her lips on his and rubbed on his with her lower lip...he caught it and sucked and he tried to get grip over her both lips never breaking the eye cntact...but she pulled back went down and kissed his bare chest making him more wild... he twisted and ende on her...rubbed her face with his ...crushing himself more into her...and tasted her both lips ...he went down kissing ...but both stopped and came back to senses when they heard sounds...


yes the gang was searching them ...they stood and strtaightened them up...now both were wet ...he half coz of her and half coz of sweating... as soon as they took two steps away  4rm each other they were caught whole gang stood there with mouth hanging and looking them 4rm top to bottom...and they then strtd...

sh: tum log yahan???

sw: aur aisa???

vi: bheege hue???

amar: pura haldi...???

but rey cut in...

r: wo maa ne bata ya sab se pehle mehandi lagayenge toh...mai lagane aaya...

ne: aur u kriya???

K: wo mai bhi...


nil: par tum log bheege kaise??

r: wo ladte waqt paani mei gir gaye the...

vicky: kya ladh rahe the???


k: haan ki koun pehle lagayega...


simmi: aacha ...ma...t...la...b????? 


kriya got what was cmng so she quickly ran inside to her room and breathed hard...girls followed her  when rey was caught by boys...


****************************************************
after a long teasing session  strtd the rasam...

rey wore a white casual sherwani and kriya wore a white masakkali...both were in their own houses...haldi ke baad no milna...sharon applied haldi to rey when swayam to kriya and they took the haldi bowl to their respective siblings and the haldi rasam strtd ...all applied...both blushing...both were shining bright in that haldi...nd more coz of blushing...




haldi cmplted and both were locked in their room ...bechara rey ka room changed...they both spent the day thinking and blushing abt each other,...when rest were busy  with the most special event shaadi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!













bas yaha pe haldi khatam ...pms later...hope u like it...Smile
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Edited by deetha - 08 April 2012 at 10:30am

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